Kalma Story- Birds of a Broken Nest Part- 11 update pg17 22/01/23

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Posted: 2 years ago

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All this time he believed the letter that was written by a person who betrayed him and left him with a  one day old child. It was his fault,he choose to believe  a piece of paper not them, who pleaded in front of him hundred times to prove  their innocence.. He just believed the letter and accused them for ruining his life.


Even if today sampada not revealed the truth of letter by herself, would he always believed that both helped her?Whatever she had written in letter was a lie and he found that he was again fooled by her.His sense of thinking was so much affected by her betrayal that he believed her letter and punished those innocent people. 


He was broken again and all that was left  in him was also shattered.He went to his old house.Looking at the house which he thought was blooming into a home of his dreams where he would’ve lived with his family...


He remembered when Kalyani told him that she and her mother was not at fault. She tried to stop sampada but she was not ready to listen anything. Why didn’t he believed Kalyani words ?? Kalyani's life wouldn’t have been ruined if he had trusted her words. Now he have to bear the burden of sin that he punished a innocent soul.More than sampada’s betrayal, the fact that he had ruined life of innocent girl was hurting him more. He was ashamed of himself the way he behaved with her. What sampada’s betrayal made him.


Malhar's anger knew no bounds after the truth of that letter was revealed.He couldn’t think straight whatever came in front of him he just wanted to destroy it.

He didn’t want to leave anything that reminds him of that betrayal that made him like this.He broke furniture, threw things, tore the curtains and after damaging most of the things of the house, he paused for a minute, took a deep breath & looked around….


Do the broken dreams looks like this? 

Does a broken heart look like this??







What says guys, should I continue this..

An idea that lived in my mind for more than a two and half years..

Hope you like it..


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Posted: 2 years ago

This seems really interesting. Your writing style was too good. Show ke track jaisa rahega ye Priyu?

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Posted: 2 years ago

Ohh priyu darling back with bang...🤗🤗

Kya baat hai malharji ko aagayi akal wah👍🏼

Chalo abb bohot ho gaya dukh now I want acha sa romance jaldi jaldi apni kallu Baby se maafi mango aur aage badho bohot jhel liya uss sampu dayan ka dukh abb jaldi sein apni family pein dhyaan doo🤣

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Wow Priya this is so interesting ❤️❤️

Plzz plzz continue this 

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Posted: 2 years ago

This is fantastic Priyu... 

Malhar introspecting his actions.. 

And analysing how that one betrayal had changed his total being.. 

He is ashamed of himself of punishing an innocent soul.. 

The destroyed house is how his life is actually, a total mess. 

He had lost his mind completely abd did things he shouldn't have. 


Lets see how he redeems his deeds.. 

Good start👏

And please continue.. 😊

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Posted: 2 years ago

A new FF is always welcome, Pryu Di! 😍

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Autumn09

This seems really interesting. Your writing style was too good. Show ke track jaisa rahega ye Priyu?

Thanks Pragya..


Show ke track ke jaisa nahi rahega..

Thoda alag rahega 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Ohh priyu darling back with bang...🤗🤗

Kya baat hai malharji ko aagayi akal wah👍🏼

Chalo abb bohot ho gaya dukh now I want acha sa romance jaldi jaldi apni kallu Baby se maafi mango aur aage badho bohot jhel liya uss sampu dayan ka dukh abb jaldi sein apni family pein dhyaan doo🤣

Thanks vanshu babe..


Tu bhi wapas aa gayi so I thought to entertain you 

Haa unko to Akal aani hi thi naa..


Romance ki queen to tu hai..


Romance hoga ya nahi wo to nahi pata

Haa kallu babe se maafi jaroor mangege 

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Originally posted by: sehreemstory

Wow Priya this is so interesting ❤️❤️

Plzz plzz continue this 

Thanks arwa

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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

This is fantastic Priyu... 

Malhar introspecting his actions.. 

And analysing how that one betrayal had changed his total being.. 

He is ashamed of himself of punishing an innocent soul.. 

The destroyed house is how his life is actually, a total mess. 

He had lost his mind completely abd did things he shouldn't have. 


Lets see how he redeems his deeds.. 

Good start👏

And please continue.. 😊

Thank you didu..



Aap wait kar rahe the naa..to likh hi diya maine..