Originally posted by: AsadZoyaILU
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i cant wait to read the next part u stopped on an interesting point. love the way ur writing. plz update next part soon
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I m so happy you are liking this 🤗🤗
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Originally posted by: GrilledCheese
Thank you for tagging!
Lovely update.. finally Krish reveals the truth about Shiva to the family! Let's see if they realize their mistakes and apologize to him
Shiva also regains consciousness ❤️
Thank you so much dear 🤗
For lovely response
They should apologize to him 😭
Keep reading 🤗🤗❤❤
Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh
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Even I am happy , story me hi sahi kuch to shivi fans ke hisab se hona chahiye 😅😅
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Originally posted by: Shivi_forever
Amazing update👏
Finally Krish revealed everything😊
Shiva is conscious now
Let's see how he will react
Thank you dear 😘💕
Will update soon
Keep reading n supporting🤗❤
Thanks dear 😘❤
Keep reading 🤗
Originally posted by: frnd_ship
Part 2
The door Slammed open as Raavi reached
her room panting, exhausting physically
and mentally, tears still streaming down
from her swollen eyes. But she dont want
to rest, anger is overpowering her
senses and she is agitatingly looking for
something. Finally she got it in her
wardrobe The diary. She opens and pull
out the cap of pen down. Talking to
herself
RAAVI: sab khatam ho gya hai na , sab
khatam krna tha na tujhe. Theek hai ab ho
gyi tere mann ki . Ab nhi rahungi tujhse
chipak ke jo krna hai kar. Tu apni zindagi
jee aur main apni jiyugi. Main kyu spoil kru
apni life tere peeche ? Aaj se teri meri
kahani ka THE END shiva.
She spoke this in a single breath, and
about to write her last thoughts in her
diary , but her hands jammed. Like
thunderstorm lightening strike her, she
comes out from her stupor where she was
living in her anger . Whole conversation
from his harsh words to she breaking her
wedding chain all played like a movie in
her mind. The diary and pen fell on floor
followed by the owner, she came into
present and her eyes overflowing with
unending hot tears.
"Ye kya kar diya mene
"Kese ho gya mujhse ye "
She looked up at the mirror in front,
Her devastated image is what nobody ever
imagined in somnath. Messed hair, red
eyed, dupatta carelessly hung half on her
arm and half on floor. But these things are
not what she noticed in her form. Her
hand goes to her forehead where her
sindoor is not visible and then to her
neck, which is bruised by herself.
She remembers dhara di's words of
kuldevta Pooja.
'Sindoor ke bina adhoori lag rhi hai'
That day she didn't mind that words but at
present, she is not recognizing the person
in front of her. She wasn't Raavi Narayan
who claims herself as somnath most
beautiful girl. She wasn't looking like Raavi
shiva pandya and that realization is
killing her. Her identity with which she was
living is gone away from her .
Adhoori nahi.. . Aap galat thi di , adhoori
nhi, bikhri huyi lag rhi hu main.
Khud ko hi Anjaan lag rhi hu main
Beautiful moments of shiva with her are
coming in her mind.
Tu hamare hisse me to aane wali hai "
Raavi naam hai uska
Phoolkumari hai kyaa'
Jaan se maar dunga.
Tujhe pareshan krne ka haq sirf mera hai'
Mere bachpan ke har hisse me tujhse
ladai ke kisse hai"
Agar mere bhai nhi bhi aate na
To bhi tujhse akela nhi chodta'
Aaj chipkaliyo ki beauty queen
Chayi huyi hai'
Raavi: Aise kese sab khatam ho gya
shiva ? Kese sab kuch itna badal gya ? Haa
galat rahi hogi main bhot si cheezo me,
par unhe sudharne ki bhi koshish to kr rhi
thi na main. Ptaa hai tujhe pe meri aur mere
dosto ki baato ka bhot asar padaa
hai, par itnaaaa... , itnaaa.. ki... us Aag me
hum dono... hum dono ki sari zindagi hi jal
gyi
"Main to ummed krne lagi thi, hum dono
ko sath dekhne lgi thi,. pyaar ya Shaadi ka
tag thopna nhi chahti thi tujh par, par
saari zindagi sirf ladte jhagadte nhi
guzregi aisa vishwas dila rha tha tera
behaviour mujhe.
Kya jhoothi thi wo muskurahat jo tere
chehre par, sirf mujhe dekh kar aayi thi.
Kya meri aankho ko dhokha ho gya, jo teri
aankhon me badla dekha tha mene.
Kya jyada soch liya tha mene ki main Mami
ki behen ki beti se aage badkar Raavi ho
gyi hu tere liye.
Kya phir se galti kar di shiva mene ye chah
ke ki Tere dil me jagah bana lungi main.
Tu to badal rha tha na, gussa krna chod
diya tha tune mujhse . Aur agar nhi
badalna chahta tha to main badal jati, tu
ek mauka dekar to dekhta mujhe, bilkul
wese ban jati jesi tu chahta tha. Tune
kabhi btaya hi nhi tujhe kya chahiye. Tujhe
baar baar compromise krne ko isliye nhi
kehti thi ki tujhe badalna tha mujhe, main
bas khud ko teri nazron me dekhna chahti
thi, jese tu meri nazro me Rehne lgaa tha.
Nahi chahiye tha mujhe koi prince
charming. Nhi chahiye tha well dressed
gentlemen. Nhi poore krne barish me bike
ride ke sapne . Tera ungli pakad ke
somnath ki galiyon mein chalna hi bhaa
rha tha mujhe.
Kyu nhi dekh paya tu ye sab shiva ??
Kyuuuu?
Kyu??? Kyuuuu??
And she broke down into tears once again.
Meanwhile on Shiva's side
Shiva get up with a surprise face as he
look at the person.
SHIVA: KRISHHH ?????
(yessss guyss krish is the person who
listened Shiva's words)
KRISH: Ha bhai main, tera bhai , teri
family ka ek hisaa, jinhe lgta hai tu bhool
gya. Kya pagalpan ki baatein ke rha tha tu
SHIVA: kri..shh tu... Tu.. ja yaha.ha se.
KRISH: main kahi nhi ja rha . Aur tu, tu
chal mere sath abhi, ye sab faltu ka
tamasha clear kar. Chal.
(He started dragging him, but no one can
do anything without chattan pandya's will)
SHIVA: krish chod mujhe, aur mujhe kahi
nhi jana, tu ja ghar . Aur mujhe akela chod
KRISH: akela hone ki koshish to tu wese
bhi bhot brilliantly kar hi chuka hai.
Par main ye sab tere MAHAAN HERO wale
karname pe na abhi the end lgauga. Bada
aaya Hero no. 1 .abhi call krta hu main
Raavi bhabhi aur ghar main sabko
SHIVA: krish mene khaa na tu kuch nhi kr
rha hai, mtlb kuch nhi krega.
KRISH :dekh shiva teri ye faltu ki dhamki
side rakh, mere liye teri khokhli dhamki se
badkar tu hai, aur tu.. Tu.. jese.. abhi
toota.. huaa...
His words hang in air as he embraced his
brother providing much needed support
which shiva needed from a long time
eyes are glistening but the warmth is
lightly soothing his heart.
KRISH: shiva tu yr kya kr rha hai ? Tu sirf
khud ko aur raavi bhabhi ko tod rha hai.
Pariwar se jaan boojh ke door ho rha hai
tu. Ye sab galat hai. Ham sab wapas se
sahi kr dete hai tu chal.
SHIVA:( getting a grip over his emotions
Shiva pulled out) Tujhe lgta hai sab sahi
ho jayega. Aur kya sahi ho jayega.
raavi ke chehre pe wo khushi wapas aa
jayegi jo shadi ke phle rha krti thi?.Kya wo
raavi wapas aa jayegi jo full of life thi?. Kya
main uske layak ban jauga? ya wo mujhe
aise apna legi ?bol na jya sahi ho jayega?
KRISH: shiva tu samajh nhi rha hai ,shayad
wo tujhe pasand krti hai, aajkal tum dono
close aa rhe the, hum sab ne dekha hai .
SHIVA: wo majboori thi uski krish, khushi
nhi. Wo is shadi me adjustment kr rhi thi,
compromise ke sath zindagi jeena chahti
thi. Main khushi bnna chahta tha uski
zindagi mein, jo wo mere sath mehsoos
nhi kr skti.
KRISH:par shiva .
SHIVA Tu ghar ja rha hai krish
Aur tune na kuch suna na kuch dekha. Jo
jesa chal rha hai wese hi chalega.
KRISH: shiva tu ...
SHIVA: ham is bare me aur koi baat nhi
krege krish.
KRISH:(unwillingly start taking steps
backwards, while watching his brother,
who tackle every difficult situation without
any flinch. But never share his worries to
anyone, not to his family ,whom he
considers everything. krish is feeling
miserable by the thought that he had
misunderstood his brother and his family
is still in that hallucination that this man
has done some crime. They have failed to
read him , they ignored his pain and let him
suffer when he needed them the most.
Noooo he can't let him suffer anymore , he
is not going to listen this time, promising
himself. I will correct all this, this is not
what you deserve Bhai .I can't see you
broken. Hey somnath help me to reunite
two broken souls.
thank you so much dear I appreciate.....
finally i was able to read all the parts......cant thank you enough 🤗
to dhara stfu......
who gave you the right to pass judgment when you no nothing??? 
why would the most sensitive, selfless, caring person would hurt someone.......
raavi 
krish
krish....
in these dumb, good for nothing people.......
loved the story so far........if krish didnt hear all that den what? m dreading the answer.....and no matter how angry you are, if your child is hurt, wouldnt u forget all the sh.t and just think of his well being? what kind of people he is surrounded with?
shiva
my poor baby shiva.......is he going to pretend that he doesnt remember anyone? i wish he does and leaves everyone
loved the updates and i appreciate your tags, pm for the update so i can read it.......
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