House of Beta Readers #3 (Note p. 34) - Page 16

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Please note we cannot give you a credible assessment of plot continuity for a single chapter, we would have to read the whole story to be able to assess that.

Okay no problem.

Name of the story: Love Conquers All

Author (Username): oye_nakhrewaali

Length of story (FF/SS/OS): OS

Genre: Romantic drama

Couple and show: (Please give full names & not abbreviations): Satyavan-Savitri

Word Count (approx.): 1600

Rating (Refer to FF rules for rating determination): (G, M, R, X) G

Trigger and content warnings (for list of Trigger warnings please refer to the FF rules): Death

The extent of Trigger/content warnings mentioned above ((Mild/Moderate/Severe): Moderate

Specific instructions to Beta-reader [Pls mention here what you want us to focus on while beta-reading your story. Kindly note in case of unspecified requests, the BR decides what kind of feedback they give] : Flow of the story (continuity errors) and Language.

Name of the story: Fighting the Fate (Chapter 1)

Author (Username): Animagus_Shiri

Length of story (FF/SS/OS): SS

Genre: Romantic Drama

Couple and show: (Please give full names & not abbreviations): Shiva and Raavi from Pandya Store

Word Count*(approx.): 800+

Rating (Refer to FF rules for rating determination - G, M, R, X) - G

Trigger and content warnings(for list of Trigger warnings please refer to the FF rules): Partial Amnesia

The extent of Trigger/content warnings mentioned above ((Mild/Moderate/Severe): Mild

Specific instructions to Beta-reader-

• Depiction of emotions
• Scope of the story
• Dialogues

Originally posted by: AWolfAndParrot

Name of the story: Twisted Emotions

Author (Username): AWolfAndParrot

Specific instructions to Beta-reader [: grammar and vocabulary

Kindly note the amended rules:

BRs will give detailed feedback on grammar, punctuation, syntax, phrasing, vocabulary etc only once - when the author submits an entry for the first time. It is expected that the general guidelines/ feedback shared will be incorporated in all future work by the authors, & the BRs cannot be expected to correct the same errors over and over.

You can do a grammar check using online tools and use the suggestions/ feedback given to you so far to correct your work. You can use an online thesaurus/ reverse dictionary to check vocabulary and word usage. Thank you.

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Kindly note the amended rules:

BRs will give detailed feedback on grammar, punctuation, syntax, phrasing, vocabulary etc only once - when the author submits an entry for the first time. It is expected that the general guidelines/ feedback shared will be incorporated in all future work by the authors, & the BRs cannot be expected to correct the same errors over and over.

You can do a grammar check using online tools and use the suggestions/ feedback given to you so far to correct your work. You can use an online thesaurus/ reverse dictionary to check vocabulary and word usage. Thank you.

Understood. Hence I changed the request.

Name of the story: Twisted Emotions

Author (Username): AWolfAndParrot

Length of story (FF/SS/OS): FF

Genre: Romantic drama

Couple and show: (Please give full names & not abbreviations): Ram Kapoor and Priya Sood from Bade Acche Lagte hain 2

Word Count (approx.): 600

Rating (Refer to FF rules for rating determination): (G, M, R, X) G

Trigger and content warnings (for list of Trigger warnings please refer to the FF rules): None

The extent of Trigger/content warnings mentioned above ((Mild/Moderate/Severe):

Specific instructions to Beta-reader [Pls mention here what you want us to focus on while beta-reading your story. Kindly note in case of unspecified requests, the BR decides what kind of feedback they give] : characterization, depiction of emotions, scope of story and dialogues

Originally posted by: AWolfAndParrot

Name of the story: Twisted Emotions

Specific instructions to Beta-reader : characterization and plot continuity for the particular chapter.

Originally posted by: AWolfAndParrot

Name of the story: Twisted Emotions

Specific instructions to Beta-reader : characterization, depiction of emotions, scope of story and dialogues

You have posted two different requests. Please clarify which one you want us to take up.

Originally posted by: AWolfAndParrot

Second one

Please delete the other one then, it causes confusion

Originally posted by: Animagus_Shiri

Name of the story: Fighting the Fate (Chapter 1)

Author (Username): Animagus_Shiri

Length of story (FF/SS/OS): SS

Genre: Romantic Drama

Couple and show: (Please give full names & not abbreviations): Shiva and Raavi from Pandya Store

Word Count*(approx.): 800+

Rating (Refer to FF rules for rating determination - G, M, R, X) - G

Trigger and content warnings(for list of Trigger warnings please refer to the FF rules): Partial Amnesia

The extent of Trigger/content warnings mentioned above ((Mild/Moderate/Severe): Mild

Specific instructions to Beta-reader-

• Depiction of emotions
• Scope of the story
• Dialogues

Taking.

Word Count: 1

Hey Tia, I know you might be busy just tell me when will I be getting the story?