How sweet it is to be In love 💕 with the one person who is everything to you and vice verse. One cannot live without the other but either of them express the love to each other.
My Hindi is not 100% so sorry if I didn’t follow the story.
please continue soon
Hi Jyoti🤗
Just now I read both os.. awesome work dear. Lovely stories and adding songs makes it more intense❤️
Liked you writing style! Keep writing more stories. Waiting for tour next os
Thank you for the PM Jyoti...! I hadn't checked the MF in a while....
It was amazingly written ❤️
I have always found it a little difficult to pen down the FL's POV but you seem to be a pro here! I completely lost myself in those words and was really disappointed that it ended
Thank you such a beautiful piece. I enjoyed reading this
Awwwiee😳
Such a beautiful OS.
Both are marvellous, but 2nd OS mien jo end mien Ani smiles when she touches his face...that has allll my heart!❤️
So profound...so powerful. What they have is truly special. And your excellent choice of songs make these writeups more beautiful. ❤️
Thank you so much for blessing us all with the pleasure of these beautiful one shots.
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I just love the way you you discribe your story with a song ❤️ I even played hasi ban gayi in background while reading it ❤️
Thank you Priiii🤗 and i have written it whole playing the song❤️
Your style is so subtle and smooth I'm just in love with it. No doubt this musical os series gonna be one of my fav ❤️
Awwww Thank you😳
And I do have a song suggestion in mind 😉 wo main tujhe dm me batayungi 😆
Of course😆
But for this one ❤️ you deserve 1badam wali 8 handi roshogolla 👏
Really? Give me give me jaldi se...please *Anirudh style*😆
Btw iss part ka first react and comment mera hain, yeeeaaaaaaaa🥳
Han😆
You will make even the sternest and most practical people believe in love over and over again with your powerful weapon of writing such extraordinarily surreal stories!
This is the best compliment I ever get❤️ thank you so much, it means a lot to me❤️
I loved how intricately and perfectly you described her newly developed feelings ,the way she would give her life ,her Everything to see him happy, would practically leave nothing undone to put a smile on his face!
Thank you again🤗
Such profound emotions and feelings you've penned,I think torn and tattered hearts will be healed!
Awww😳 glad with the emotions I have written it, you find the same while reading😳
Keep writing!God bless you❤️
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You're most welcome Miss Rikara!
Btw are you a fan of Om and gauri!?😳😳Your username screams of them🤗😆
Yes😆🤗
Such a beautiful OS Jyoti❤️
The way u potrayed bonditas emotions was so great👏
Keep writing...waiting for more😳
Thank you toto🤗
I will try to update next OS soon... For now i'm listening the song on which i'm gonna write😆
Originally posted by: screen22
How sweet it is to be In love 💕 with the one person who is everything to you and vice verse. One cannot live without the other but either of them express the love to each other.
My Hindi is not 100% so sorry if I didn’t follow the story.
please continue soon
Hey buddy (what should I call you?)😳
Yup love is the feeling which beyond anything💞💞
And it's okey dear. I will post the next one asap😳
Hi Jyoti🤗
Just now I read both os.. awesome work dear. Lovely stories and adding songs makes it more intense❤️
Liked you writing style! Keep writing more stories. Waiting for tour next os
Thank you Nim🤗
Glad that you found it amazing
Love stories and songs... It creates unique magic right?❤️
I will post the next one soon. Dimag mein ek gana ghoom raha h kab se😆
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