Nice update
Maaneet's plan failed
But Rajdeep shot himself
Update soon
Nice update
Maaneet's plan failed
But Rajdeep shot himself
Update soon
Wonderful update dear
Rajdeep shot himself his past is so painful but he really loved nandni
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Superb ending di ! π
Liked the double twists
First geet was fine & they used fake bullets
To trick Rajdeep
But Rajdeep knew all along
When he pulled the gun from the policeman my heart sunk
The ultimate suprise was him shooting himself in the head
Did not see all these twists coming
Thank you so much di for another enjoyable story !! π€
Great update
Ohh finally they solve the issue
I am feeling bad just once for Rajdeep buy he did wrong with his wife why only forcing why can't show trust and love for their wife violence isn't right
Nice
Finally Rajdeep chapter is over
Rajdeep ka childhood acha nhi tha thts why wo geet ko itna torture krta tha
Rajdeep ko pta tha ki gum mai fake bullets h
Waiting for epilogue
Interesting update..
finally...problem solved
but rajveer had gone through so much since his childhood,
for a second i thought he was going to shoot Geet or Maan....but sad he shot at himself...He truly loved Nandini but its his past which made him like that....
happy ending for our manneet
Nicely written...
thanks for the pm..
hope you would be back with another interesting story....π
thanks for the pm
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please post epilogue
post a new story as well
Very nice update well little bit sad also in the end..
It's really good to see that geet is all fine nd all was planned by commissioner to trap rajveer..but then rajveer was knowing all those plan nd at last he shot himself..well this was really sad but I think rajveer was not totally fine with his mind because of his parents..because of their sins rajveer goes through all thisπ
Waiting for epilogue that too love filled please continue soon
Chapter 13
Nice Didi... It's really beautiful and very special to celebrate your birthday with your husband... It must be every girls dream to be special in her husband's eyes... π
Maan did a really good job of distraction for Geet but it's short lived because woh kamine Rajdeep aagaya.... π€¦ββ
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Chapter 14
Whao Di I didn't expect that to happen... I was really terrified what would happen to Geet lekin finally Super Maan to the rescue..... π
Ache se maar khaya na us gadhe ne.... Chi kaisa admi hai disgusting.... Itna ghatiya hai aur psychopath jaise behave karta hai.... π
But Maan and Geet feels like its a murder.... Par woh toh mara nahi.... Ab kya hoga....
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