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Heart Exchange Part 3

Kabir Pooja were in the mall.Suddenly Kabir bumped into a girl.He was shocked to see her.

Kabir:Kavya!

Pooja:Who is this Kabir?

Kavya stared at Pooja.

She said in a sarcastic tone:So...you left me for this girl?But you gave a silly excuse to dump me.

Kabir:It's not like that Kavya.



Kavya:You cheater!

Kavya walked off.Pooja was stunned.Kabir looked at Pooja:Pooja!

Pooja was in tears:Why did you hide such a big thing from me Kabir?You betrayed an innocent girl?



Kabir:No Pooja.It's not you think.Trust me.



jhooTha jag rain basera
saancha dard mera
mrig-trishna sa moh piya
naata mera tera





Pooja walked out angrily with tears in her eyes.Kabir was shattered.His tears fell down.



naina.. jo saanjhe khwaab dekhte the
naina.. bichhaR ke aaj ro diye hain yoon
naina.. jo milke raat jaagte the
naina.. sehar mein palken meechte hain yoon



At home....in the garden...

Kabir went near Pooja:Pooja..listen to me.

Pooja:I don't want to hear anything.Just get lost.

Kabir:So you want me to leave this house?You need break up?

Pooja's heart was pricked.



juda huye kadam
jinhone li thi ye kasam
milke chalenge hardum
ab baanTte hain ye gham
bheege naina..





Pooja:You do whatever you want.

Kabir felt sad.

Kabir:But before that you have to listen to me Pooja.I will not go without explaining you the truth.



Kavya was my fiancee.My dad forced me to get engaged to her.I never loved her.It was completely an arranged alliance.But as you know I did'nt want to get married.I felt that I cannot be truthful to Kavya and I cannot get married to her.So I told her openly that i cannot marry her.Nothing more was there between Kavya and me.After that i had not even seen her till we met her in the mall.

Pooja became emotional.



jo saanjhe khwaab dekhte the
naina.. bichhaR ke aaj ro diye hain yoon

Kabir went inside.

Pooja:Oh no.I misunderstood Kabir and hurt him.What did i do?



saans hairaan hai, mann pareshaan hai
ho rahi si kyun ruaansa kyun ye meri jaan hai
kyun niraasha se hai aas haari huyi
kyun sawaalon ka uTha sa dil mein toofaan hai



Kabir got ready to leave the house.They looked at each other emotionally.



naina.. thhe aasmaan ke sitaare
naina.. grahan mein aaj tooTte hain yoon

They saw their photograph on the wall.

Kabir:We were so happy.I can't believe that everything got over so soon.



Pooja burst out:No.Nothing is over.Understand?I will not let you go.

Kabir was stunned.



naina.. kabhi jo dhoop senkte thhe
naina.. Thehar ke chhaaon DhoonRhte hain yoon






Pooja:I will not repeat the mistake which my mom did.



When my dad left my mom did not bother to stop him.But I will stop you.Because I can't live without you Kabir.

Kabir became emotional:Pooja!



juda huye kadam,
jinhone li thi ye kasam
milke chalenge hardam





Pooja:Please forgive me Kabir.Please don't go.Please don't leave me alone.



ab baanTte hain ye gham
bheege naina.. jo saanjhe khwaab dekhte the
naina.. bichhaR ke aaj ro diye hain yoon



Suddenly Kabir pulled her into an emotional embrace.



naina.. jo saanjhe khwaab dekhte the

Pooja:Don't leave me Kabir.

naina.. bichhaR ke aaj ro diye hain yoon

Kabir:I won't ever leave you Pooja.



naina.. jo milke raat jaagte the
naina.. sehar mein palken meechte hain yoon





They looked at each other emotionally.



juda huye kadam
jinhone li thi ye kasam


milke chalenge hardum
ab baanTte hain ye gham
bheege naina..

Kabir pressed his lips on her forehead giving her warmth.She closed her eyes.





naina.. thhe aasmaan ke sitaare
naina.. grahan mein aaj tooTte hain yoon
naina.. kabhi jo dhoop senkte thhe
naina.. Thehar ke chhaaon DhoonRhte hain yoon

He started rubbing his lips on her cheeks which made her lose herself.



juda huye kadam,



jinhone li thi ye kasam


They came more and more closer to each other.


milke chalenge hardam

Since it was their intimate moment after patch up it was more and more passionate yet very emotional as they were getting rid of the pain of separation which they feared to face till the patch up.



ab baanTte hain ye gham
bheege naina.. jo saanjhe khwaab dekhte the
naina.. bichhaR ke aaj ro diye hain yoon(Dangal).


Only the photo frame on the wall witnessed their love.




They slept in each other's arms.

Days passed...

Pooja opened the door hearing the calling bell.She saw a person.She could not recognize him.

Pooja:Ji...you?

He:I am PK Mittal.Kabir's father.

Pooja could not believe it.

Pooja did not know how to react.

PK:So you are the one Kabir is living in with.He calls home once in a while.But its from outside world that we got to know of his shameless live in relationship.

Pooja:It's not a shame,it's our love.

PK:May be.But...Anyways..where is Kabir?I want to talk to him.

Pooja:Kabir is not here.He has gone out to meet his school friend.He will be back in the evening.

PK:Ok.Then I will come back in the evening.Let me go to the hotel.

Pooja:You can stay here.

PK:I would have stayed here if you were married to my son and you were my daughter in law.But now this relationship has no name,so I can't stay here.



Pooja was getting irritated.

PK left.

Later when Kabir returned Pooja told him about PK's arrival and got shocked.

Kabir:What?Dad came here?

Suddenly they saw PK at the entrance.

Kabir:Come inside dad.

PK came inside.

PK:How are you my son?

Kabir:I am very happy now.I got my true love.

PK:I am happy that finally you found your true love.Then get married to her.I will be very happy if you marry the girl you love.



Kabir:Dad,I told you that i don't believe in marriage.Marriages are loveless.You and mom were always fighting.

PK:You said that we both were always fighting.But despite of all fights your mom and I are staying together in the same room on the same bed.Have you ever thought why we are still together?Why we did'nt get divorced?

Kabir and Pooja looked at PK curiously.

PK:Because still we love each other.Fights do happen.But still we live together as we love each other.So don't think that just because we fight our marriage is loveless.You have not understood your own parents' marriage's depth.

Kabir-Pooja were stunned.

PK:Think well.When you understand it get married to her.

PK walked out.

Kabir -Pooja looked at each other emotionally.

PK's words about his own marriage were haunting Kabir.

Kabir:Is it true that I failed to see the love my parents have for each other?

Pooja was silent.

Their colony anniversary function was going on.The colony members were doing a lot of programmes.

Kabir-Pooja danced together.



Dil ka dariya beh hi gaya
Ishq ibadat ban hi gaya
Khud ko mujhe tu sonp de
Meri zaroorat tu ban gaya

Baat dil ki nazron ne ki
Sach keh raha teri kasam
Tere bin ab na lenge ik bhi dam
Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum

Tere bin ab na lenge ik bhi dam
Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum
Tere saath ho jayenge khatam
Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum

Baat dil ki nazron ne ki
Sach keh raha teri kasam
Tere bin ab na lenge ik bhi dam
Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum

Tere saath ho jayenge khatam
Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum
Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum

Iss jagah aa gayi chahatein ab meri
Chheen loonga tumhe saari duniya se hi
Tere ishq pe haan haq mera hi toh hai
Keh diya hai ye maine mere Rabb se bhi

Jis raaste tu na mile
Us pe na ho mere kadam

Tere bin ab na lenge ik bhi dam
Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum


Tere saath ho jayenge khatam
Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum
Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum

O...

Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum...(Kabir Singh).



Kabir and Pooja noticed Ramesh and his wife giggling and talking in between.



Pooja:Why do they look so happy now?

Kabir:No idea.They look over sweet and romantic.

The house owner came near Kabir Pooja :How are you guys?

Kabir:Fine.



You said there is no romance in your married life as your wife is not interested.But now you both seem to be romantic.How did this happen?



Ramesh:I said my wife is too busy with her career and work to romance with me,I never said that she is not interested or she doesn't love me.It's true that because of busy schedule we don't have much time left for romance.But our love for each other has not decreased even a bit.We love each other a lot.

Kabir and Pooja were stunned.

Kabir:If you both have no time for each other how does the love remain the same?

Ramesh:That's the speciality of marriage.Once we get tied upto marriage it's difficult to stop loving each other.It just happens.

Kabir and Pooja looked at each other.

 Kabir-Pooja returned home.There was a woman waiting .Pooja was shocked to see her.

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Awesome update😳I was right, it was Kavya..Pooja felt Kabir cheated her but he told her everything and she realized her mistake and apologized too😊They reconciled and spent lovely moments🤪PK visited them and told them to get married but Kabir told he can't after seeing his parents fighting and in loveless marriage..PK told right fights happen in any relationship but that doesn't mean one should take divorce..Dance was😳I think it's Pooja's Mom..Perfects pics and song❤️

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Interesting and Fascinating Chapter

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Part 3

superb update 

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Kavya felt that Kabir canceled his engagement with her for pooja. Sad that mu took place between them. Glad that Jabir patched up. The song and jabir scenes are romantic. Nice to see Pk making jabir understand the true relationship. Hope jabir decide to marry.

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This SS is ending here.I thank all of u who supported me in this journey.

plz give a detailed comment on the last part.plz don't forget to write your fav scene,fav character n fav dialogue n y u liked them.


Heart Exchange Part 4

Kabir-Pooja returned home.There was a woman waiting .Pooja was shocked to see her.

Pooja:You?

That woman tried to caress her face.But Pooja moved her hand away.That lady became upset.

Kabir:Who is this?

Pooja:She is my so called mom.

Kabir was shocked.

She:I am Madhu.Pooja’s mother.

Kabir:Hi Aunty…

Madhu:Hi.I heard that your name is Kabir.Am I right?

Kabir:Yes.

Pooja:You were busy in America.Right?Then how did you come here?Once in a while we talk on the phone.That was enough.What was the need to come here?

Madhu:Pooja…I heard that you both are living together here.As a mother I want to advise you to get married to Kabir.

Pooja:So you came here from America to give me lecture?

Madhu:As a mother I have to show you the right path.

Pooja:So the right path is marriage?

Madhu:If you have found the right guy that’s the best.

Pooja:You yourself could not manage your married life.You led a loveless marriage.Everything was fake in your married life and got separated from your husband.Then how are you saying that marriage is the best?For heaven sake don’t be a hypocrite.We are happy without marriage.So please leave.

Madhu looked at Pooja emotionally:Ok.

Madhu left wiping her wet eyes.Pooja burst into tears.

Kabir:Pooja…

Pooja:I did’nt want to behave like this to mom.But when I think of what happened in the past I lost my control.

Kabir embraced her to console her.

The next day…

Kabir got a phone call.

After that he went to a place.There Madhu was seen.

Madhu:Thank you for coming here Kabir.I doubted whether you will come.

Kabir:Why did you call me?If you have still come to adise us to get married please don’t do that.

Madhu:Kabir..you hear what I want to say first.Pooja hates to get married thinking that her parents led a fake married life.But actually that is not true.The truth is different.

Kabir:what stupid truth?

Madhu:Nothing was fake in our married life.Whatever love Pooja saw between me and Ashok was true.But our happiness was short lived as Pooja’s dad was diagnosed with cancer.Her dad did not want Pooja to be broken if he passes away one fine day.So he wanted to make Pooja prepare herself to live in her dad’s absence.So we both pretended to fight beyond a limit.Ashok left home.But not because he did’nt want to live with us..but to take treatment without Pooja’s absence.Pooja thinks that I left for America to live happily.But actually I went to America to be with Pooja’s dad as he is taking treatment there.The truth is that Ashok and I are deeply in love with each other.I am very busy with Ashok there.That’s why I could not talk to Pooja every day.But she thinks that I don’t care about her or her dad and want to be a free bird.So these days she is not even attending my calls.

Kabir was shocked.

Madhu:Ashok and I have come here knowing about yours and Pooja’s live in relation.More than me,her dad is upset about live in relation as every parent dreams of their daughter’s wedding.Please convince her to get married.It’s our respect.

Kabir became so emotional that he was not able to say anything.

Slowly Madhu saw Pooja coming from behind.She was in tears.

Pooja:Kabir had brought me also here as it’s you who called him here.But we never knew that you were going to reveal the biggest painful truth of our life. I am sorry mom.I misunderstood both of you. Dad’s health….

Madhu said tearfully:He is getting better.Kabir…I called you to come alone.Why did you bring Pooja also here?Because of that Pooja came to know everything.

Kabir:Pooja was living under a misconception that her parents were leading a horrible married life.It was essential for her to know the truth.it’s good that she came to know of her dad’s health.It’s her right.Good that she realized how madly her parents love each other .

Pooja hugged Madhu and cried:I want to see dad.

Madhu:I will take you there.

Pooja fell down weeping,Kabir held her:Pooja!

Pooja:How much did I misunderstand my own parents when their love is pure like Krystal?

Kabir became upset seeing her traumatic state:Pooja...you should be happy that it was jut your misunderstanding and your parents love each other unconditionally.

Madhu's eyes became wet seeing it.

She thought:I am happy that our daughter Pooja got a nice life partner like Kabir who will stand by her always like Ashok stood for me.

Madhu took Kabir and Pooja to Ashok.Pooja hugged Ashok and cried:Dad…

Ashok became emotional.He caressed her face:Pooja beta…I am ok now.Much better now.That’s why I could travel back to India.And your mom is there to look after me.When your mom is with me why should I worry?

Madhu:Don't worry Pooja.I am there to look after your dad..

Pooja:You both love each other unconditionally.

Ashok and Madhu smiled tearfully.

Ashok:Till our end we will love each other.

Pooja and Kabir were touched by his words.

Ashok:I am sure that you both also love each other like us.So please get married.

Pooja and Kabir looked at each other emotionally.

At home…

Pooja and Kabir were thinking of the words of their parents  and Ramesh about their married life being filled with love.

Pooja:Kabir…were we having a misunderstanding that married couples cannot love each other?

Kabir:Guess we were wrong.We were so blind that we believed what we saw.What we see may not be true.Whatever bitter things we witnessed may have hidden love inside it.

Pooja:Now we know that marriage does’nt end love,it only strengthens a relationship.Our parents also want us to get married.So shall we get married?

Kabir:Yes Pooja.We will get married.

Jaane jaa, jaane jaa, jaaneman jaaneman jaanejaa...(EBSS).

Kabir-Pooja smiled at each other.

Jaane jaa, jaane jaa, jaaneman jaaneman jaanejaa...(EBSS).

Kabir-Pooja informed their parents about their decision to get married.They were really excited.

Kabir-Pooja decided to leave the colony to get married.

So Ramesh,Kalika and other colony members gave them a treat.

They gave them a cake with thank you ..'We will miss you' board.Kabir-Pooja got excited.

One person:Thank you so much for being so friendly with us.We all will miss you.But it's for your best.

Pooja:Thank you to you people also for such a sweet farewell treat.

Kabir:Thanks for accepting us as we are without judging us on the basis of our live in relation.

Kalika:We were always sure about your love for each other.But marriage’s purity and sacredness is different.

Ramesh:We always wanted you both to get married.We are happy that finally you both are getting married.All the best.

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Kabir-Pooja smiled:Thank you.

While moving out of the house Kabir Pooja became very emotional.

Pooja:We are leaving this house which is full of beautiful memories.

Kabir:But those meories will be always with us.

Pooja:Yes.

Kabir-Pooja got married happily.

Their parents blessed them.

Ashok:I am so happy to see my daughter’s wedding.Now I feel my life time will get extended.

Pooja smiled tearfully:Of course..you will have a long life time dad.

Madhu:May your married life will be long and beautiful.

PK:Pooja..If I have talked rudely to you that day I am sorry.

Pooja:No need dad.

PK:I am really happy that you both got married.

Suman:Always remember that even if you guys fight the whole day sort out everything at night and sleep looking at each other with a smile.

PK:Just like us.

Kabir-Pooja smiled nodding.

PK:Your mom and I fought a lot.But we had always resolved our problems before the day ended and that's why we are still together.Seeing a couple fight you can conclude that their marriage is on rocks.After a big fight still with each other is what true love.

Kabir-Pooja smiled.

Kabir-Pooja made hearts with their fingers.

Jaane jaa, jaane jaa, jaaneman jaaneman jaanejaa...(EBSS).

Kabir:Let us exchange our hearts once again.

Pooja nodded smiling.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

A year passed….

Ashok is cured now.Madhu and he stay in India now.

Kabir-Pooja went to the dining room when all the family members screamed:Happy wedding anniversary.

They were surprised.

They brought a cake and fed them.

Kabir-Pooja and others had a lot of fun.

After some time Kabir-Pooja went to their room.

Kabir pinned Pooja to the door and started getting cozy with her.Pooja was blushing:Kabir..

Jaane jaa, jaane jaa, jaaneman jaaneman jaanejaa...(EBSS).

Suddenly Kabir’s chachi Chanda opened the door pushing the door hard and barged into the room.Because of her sudden push,Kabir and Pooja fell down.

Seeing them on the floor Chanda laughed.

Kabir-Pooja were irritated.

Kabir whispered to Pooja:Chachi does’nt allow us to romance peacefully.

Pooja smiled.

Chanda:By the way what were you both doing near the door?

Kabir Pooja became shy.Chanda smirked seeing their shyness.

Chanda:Anyways get ready for your anniversary party.Your marriage completed one year successfully.

Kabir-Pooja smiled.

Chanda left.

Kabir and Pooja said to each other:Happy anniversary sweet heart.

They showed actions to each other that their hearts have been exchanged with each other.

Kabir-Pooja got ready for the party.

Ashok-Madhu

and PK-Suman wished them Happy wedding anniversary.

Soumya and Rani also wished them a happy Anniversary.

Kabir-Pooja were surprised to see Kavya with her husband Vyom there.

Kavya:Happy wedding anniversary.

Kabir-Pooja:Thank you.

Kavya:I am sorry for over reacting Kabir.You were right that we were not a match.Thank you for not marrying me.That’s why I got Vyom who suits me completely.

Kabir:You did’nt over react Kavya.You were right in your own place.I am happy that you finally found your soul mate.

Pooja:I am also happy that you have finally moved on and  happy in your life.

Vyom-Kavya smiled.

Kabir Pooja cut cake and fed each other.

Kabir-Pooja were having lunch with all the family members including Kavya and her family as they are  family friends.They were really happy.

Pooja to Kabir:Good that we got married.Because of that only we are able to spend happy moments with our family members.If we had continued our live in relation we would have missed all these precious family moments.

Kabir held her hand:You are right Pooja.

Pooja:By the way we have already exchanged our hearts with each other.Why don’t we exchange our dessert too?

Kabir smiled:Sure.

They exchanged their dessert and fed each other.

Jaane jaa, jaane jaa, jaaneman jaaneman jaanejaa...(EBSS).

The End

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago