Heart Exchange JaBir FS last part pg3

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Heart Exchange Part 1




Thanks to my dear friend Mansi for suggesting this cute romantic title for this story.





A grand party....

A couple is seen dancing.


 Kyun Hai Daraare Darmaiyaan...(EBSS).





The girl's eyes were on the boy.The boy looked at her.While dancing with her he felt guilty.



They are none other than Kabir and Kavya.They just got engaged at the party and started dancing.



It is an arranged alliance fixed by Kavya's parents and Kabir's parents PK and Suman.



After a few days....

Kabir removed his ring and handed over it to Kavya.

Kabir:I am sorry Kavya.I can't marry you.

Kavya was shocked:But why Kabir?

Kabir:I never thought to marry you.It's my dad who forced me to accept you.But I realized that I can't betray you anymore.So I revealed it.Please try to understand.



Kavya burst into tears.

Kabir felt sad for her:I know that i hurt you.



But I am not a committed person.I am marriage phobic.I can't marry anyone.You deserve a person who can committed to you with pure love.

Kabir walked away.Kavya threw away the ring which Kabir made her wear on the engagement day.

Knowing about this PK slapped Kabir.

PK:Why did you call off your engagement?

Kabir:Simple.I don't believe in marriage.I can't marry anyone even if I fall in love.

PK:Then are you going to an ashram?

Kabir:I am not planning to be saint.I just said I cannot marry anyone.But I will look forward to fall in love..true love.

PK:I understand that you don't love Kavya,so you can't marry her.If you fall in love tell me.I will get you married to the girl you love.



Kabir:Dad...I told you.I cannot marry even if I fall in love.

PK:What rubbish!Why can't you get married if you fall in love?

Kabir:Because I don't believe in marriage.Because I have grown up watching the horrible married life of you and Mom.You both were always fighting.There was no peace of mind.

PK and Suman felt embarrassed.

Kabir:I can't recreate the same atmosphere by getting married.I will not do the blunder of getting married.

PK-Suman were silent.

Kabir got a job in Mumbai and shifted there.He joined his office.

In the office he bumped into a girl.

Kabir:Oh..I am sorry.

The girl:It's ok.Are you new to this office?

Kabir:Yes.I am Kabir Mittal.

She:Hi..I am Pooja Sharma.

They shook hands.

There started the friendship of Kabir and Pooja.

Pooja introduced Kabir to their colleagues Soumya and Rani who are Pooja's close friends.

Lunch interval...

Pooja:Kabir...would you like to join me for lunch?I am getting bored as Soumya and Rani are busy.

Kabir:Why not?Even I am bored.I also need a company.



They smiled.

They started having food together.

Pooja:Where do you stay?

Kabir:I stay in a lodge actually.Are you staying with your parents?

Pooja:No.I stay in a hostel with Soumya and Rani.

They kept chatting.

Days passed...

Pooja was walking with her files.But she slipped and was about to fall down.Suddenly she realized that she has fallen in Kabir's arms.She looked at him.



They shared a deep eye lock unknowingly.



Jaane jaa, jaane jaa, jaaneman jaaneman jaanejaa...(EBSS).



He released her.

Pooja:Thank you Kabir.

Kabir:It's ok.

Pooja walked away.Kabir kept looking at her with a smile.

Their boss announced that since their project became very successful they are going to celebrate it.For that they have to organize a party.All were excited.

Party....

Pooja was glowing in the white gown.Kabir could not take his eyes off her.

Pooja was blushing.

Kabir:You look gorgeous like a fairy.I think your name should have been Pari.

She blushed.

She thought:Why I feel so happy to get compliments from Kabir?

Pooja looked at him deeply:To be frank I have never seen a handsome boy like you.

Kabir blushed:Really?

Pooja nodded blushing:Yes.



Kabir smiled.He took his phone camera.

Kabir:Shall we?

Pooja:Sure.

They both posed for photographs.

After some days....

Rani and Pooja went for shopping.

Rani:Say Pooja.For whom did you buy the shirt?

Pooja:You will know it soon.

Outside the mall they were surprised to see Kabir.

Pooja:Kabir...you?

Kabir:Pooja...you?

Pooja:Ya...did some shopping.

Kabir:Good.I came here to buy a new shirt.

Pooja:I guess that has been already bought.

Pooja took the shirt and showed it to him:I bought this shirt for you.



Kabir and Rani were surprised.

Kabir took it from her.

Kabir:For me?

Pooja:Yes..for you.After all you are my friend.



Kabir looked at her deeply and smiled.

Pooja:Tell me did you like it or not?

Kabir:I loved it.I think I don't need to buy a new shirt.

Pooja smiled.

Pooja:Can you come to Green leaves restaurant in the evening?Join us for dinner.

Kabir:Sure.Why not?

Pooja:Ok then see you there.Bye.

Kabir:Bye.

They parted their ways.

Rani:Pooja...you bought shirt for Kabir.You love him?

Pooja blushed:I am attracted towards him.I admit.But I gifted him this shirt for a purpose.

Rani:What purpose?

Pooja said that in her ears.

Rani:Really?

Pooja:Yes.

Kabir came to the restaurant and was surprised to see a cake on the table.Pooja,Rani and Soumya were singing:Happy birthday Kabir...

Kabir:Oh..so that shirt was a birthday gift.

Pooja:Yes.

Kabir:But how did you know that today is my birthday?

Pooja:One day you yourself had told me that.So I thought to arrange a small surprise treat for you.

Kabir:It is grand.

Pooja lit the candle on the cake.

Kabir cut the cake 



and celebrated his birthday with them.

Kabir:Thank you very much Pooja for making my birthday special.

Pooja smiled.They shared a sweet eye lock.

Days passed....

Pooja went to the office washroom and shockingly she found their colleague Namik there.

Pooja:Why are you in the ladies washroom?

He smirked moving closer to her:For you baby...


Pooja was about to slap him.But he held her hand.

He moved towards her lustfully.Suddenly somebody hit him.

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

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Awesome update 😳Kabir and Kavya got engaged but he doesn't want to get married so broke off the engagement..His Dad is very angry and slaps him but he says after seeing how his parents married life is, he will not marry 😲Pooja and Kabir became good friends 😊Their moments were nice..She gifted him a shirt as his birthday gift and celebrated his birthday 👏Perfect pics ❤️

Edited by Vampire2468 - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Interesting, continue soon:)

Posted: 4 years ago

Kabir kavya dance after the engagement was romantic.  Sad that kabir called off his engagement as he had a marriage phobia. He didn't want to marry even if he falls in love because of his parents. But then no marriage os perfect. There is always a tussle between husband and wife. I guess kabir's case was extreme. Kabir met pooja at workplace. Their eyelock was romantic. Kabir telling pooja that she looks like an angel was romantic. Hope kabir overcomes the phobia. 

Posted: 4 years ago

Nice story. Their moments are ☺️

Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the pm! 

great update 

Posted: 4 years ago

Thank u very much friends

Edit credit goes to the real editor

Heart Exchange Part 2

Pooja went to the office washroom and shockingly she found their colleague Namik there.

Pooja:Why are you in the ladies washroom?

He smirked moving closer to her:For you baby...



Pooja was about to slap him.But he held her hand.

He moved towards her lustfully.

Suddenly somebody hit him.

Pooja and Namik looked at that person.

It was none other than Kabir.

Pooja:Kabir!

Kabir pulled Namik closer and hit him down.Kabir hit him more and more and took him to the main hall.All were shocked.

Boss:What's happening here?Why is Namik beaten?



Pooja:I will say.He tried to misbehave with me.Kabir only saved me.

Namik:Sorry...I was drunk.That's why.

Boss:How dare you get drunk during office hours and misbehave with a girl openly?You are fired.

They called cops and arrested Namik.

Kabir looked at Pooja.She looked worried.

Kabir:Pooja...he is arrested by the police.Now you don't need to be scared.



Pooja:Still I feel scared.That incident is haunting me.

Kabir:Don't worry.Come with me for a drive.You will feel better.

Pooja nodded.

Kabir and Pooja were in the car.On the way he stopped the car.They both got out of the car.

Pooja:Why did you stop Kabir?

Kabir:Because you seem to be very quiet and sad.

Pooja:Because i am...

Kabir cupped her face in his hands:Pooja..I told you.No need to be scared.When I am with you i will not let anyone touch you.Only I have the right to touch you.


Mujh mein safar tu karti rahe
Har ik saans mein guzarti rahe





Pooja was stunned:What did you say?

Kabir realized what he said.

Pooja:Say Kabir.

Kabir burst out:I love you Pooja.You are only mine.


Shaam-o-subah tu mera
Tere bina kya mera
Do jism jaan ek hai
Na hona kabhi tu juda



It started raining.



They shared an intense eye lock.



Teri meri kahaani

Hai baarishon ka paani

Banke jo ishq barse

Teri meri kahaani [x2]



Kabir:You also love me.Right?I have seen it in your eyes.Admit it Pooja.


Dekho na kaisi ijaazat mili hai
Ek doosre mein hifaazat mili hai



Pooja:What's the use of admitting it when I can't get committed to you?

Kabir:Means?

Pooja:Love ends up in marriage.But even though I love you I can't marry you Kabir.

Kabir:Say clearly Pooja.



Pooja:I feel love fades when lovers get married.My parents did love marriage.Seeing their pre marital photographs I envied them for their love for each other.I thought they had a perfect marriage.But 2 years back I realized that I was wrong.They were only faking love.They were fighting over silly things and one day dad left home.After that he did'nt turn back.I could'nt bear it.I could not stay in that house anymore as it was giving me sad memories.So I left home.

Kabir:Your parents?

Pooja:I don't know where dad is.He is not even calling me.Mom has shifted to America.Once in a while she calls me.These days she seems to be very busy.I don't believe in marriage Kabir.I know that you expect me to be your wife.But i can't.So it's better not to be in a relationship.

Pooja was crying.

Kabir:For such a stupid thing you are refusing to be in a relationship with me Pooja?



You know what?Even i don't believe in marriage as I have never seen my parents loving each other.So even I cannot marry you.



Pooja could not believe it.

Kabir:But still we can be in a relationship Pooja.We can be together.



Pooja:But how?

Kabir:First you tell me if you love me or not.



Pooja said emotionally:I love you a lot Kabir.



Jeene ki saari zaroorat mili hai
Ye jaam hi hai jaisa hai
Yunhi hamesha hamesha rahe jis tarah





Kabir smiled:I love you too.Let us have a live in relationship Pooja.We will live together without getting into the stupid institution like marriage.

Pooja's face blossomed:Wow Kabir.You solved the problem so easily.I love you.





Shaam-o-subah tu mera
Tere bina kya mera
Do jism jaan ek hai
Na hona kabhi tu juda



She embraced him.He caressed her smiling.





Teri meri kahaani
Hai baarishon ka paani
Banke jo ishq barse
Teri meri kahaani [x2](Gabbar is back).



They got inside the car.

Kabir:Let us search for a house and we will shift there.

Pooja:Ok Kabir.We will search for a nice house.

Kabir and Pooja started searching for a house.Finally they liked a house.

They met the house owner.

House owner Ramesh:You both do not look like husband and wife.So romantic.Married couples are not romantic.

Kabir:Guess you are married and from your experience only you are saying this.

House owner:Yes.I am married and there is no romance in our married life.My wife is so busy in career that she has no time to romance.How you both are keeping romance in marriage?

Kabir:Simple.Because we are not married.

The house owner was shocked:Then why you both want this house?

Pooja:Why ?Only married couples can stay together in a house?We are going to be a live in couple.

The house owner was shocked:What?Live in couple?

Chee...without marriage you both are going to stay in my house?



Pooja:What is there to be ashamed of it?The married couples who don't love each other can stay together anywhere just because they are married.But the unmarried couple who love each other madly should be ashamed to stay in any house?Why?We don't value loveless marriages.We value the relationships which are filled with love.Our relationship is not based on loveless marriage but love.We both love each other a lot.

Kabir:The married couples exchange vows only to be broken.But we exchanged our hearts with each other.

The house owner became silent.

Pooja:If you can't give this house to us for rent tell us.We will search for some other house.

Kabir:Yes.We are sure that there are broad minded people also who are willing to give us shelter to live.

The house owner:You both can stay in our house.

Kabir Pooja became happy.They completed all the formalities to take this house on rent.

Kabir:You gave nice lecture to the house owner.

I don't understand why these people have problem with us having live in relationship.It's our life and we have the right to live it according to our wish.

Pooja:Yes exactly.These narrow minded people who are against live in relationship irritates me to hell.Anyways thankfully finally he himself handed over his house to us.

Kabir:Ya..

Kabir and Pooja shifted to the new house with all their luggage.

Kabir embraced Pooja from behind.

Pooja blushed:Kabir...

Kabir:Pooja...tonight is our first night.



She became shy:What?

Kabir:Not only married couples but live in couples also have first night.

Pooja:Kabir..you are shameless.

Kabir was getting cozy with Pooja which Pooja was enjoying.It was their first intimate moment and the night became special for them.Their room filled up with sensual love.

Enna Sona kyun Rabb ne banaya

Enna Sona kyun Rabb ne banaya (2 Times)


Aavan jaavan te main yaara nu manawa

Aavan jaavan te main yaara nu manawa

Enna sona, enna sona

Enna sona o o o!

Enna Sona kyun Rabb ne banaya

Enna Sona o o

Enna Sona o o

Enna Sona aa aa aa, Enna Sona

Kol hovein te sekh lagda a

Door jaave te dil jalda a

Kehdi agg naal rabb ne banaya

Rabb ne banaya, rabb ne banaya

Enna Sona kyun Rabb ne banaya

Enna Sona kyun Rabb ne banaya


Aavan jaavan te main yaara nu manawa

Aavan jaavan te main yaara nu manawa(Ok Jaanu).





The next morning...

Pooja woke up from the bed.She was surprised to see Kabir standing with bed tea.

Kabir:Tea for us.

Pooja:So sweet of you.But there is only one mug.

Kabir:So what?We can share it.Right?The married couples share milk on first night.But we will share tea daily.

Pooja blushed:Your ideas are so romantic.

They started sipping  tea from the same cup.





Jaane jaa, jaane jaa, jaaneman jaaneman jaanejaa...(EBSS).



Pooja went inside the bathroom.She was stunned to see Kabir there.

Pooja:Why are you here?

Kabir:To bath with you.

She blushed.

He started removing her saree.She was really shy.



Mujh mein safar tu karti rahe
Har ik saans mein guzarti rahe







Kabir opened the shower.







Hum se ye jo bhi harqat hui hai
Mohabbat mohabbat mohabbat hui hai



They both drenched in the shower.They started bathing each other sensually.

Kuch itne hain hum tum
Kami kuch nahi hai
Jitna bhi jeena hai
Tujhko hi jeena hai
Jeete rahein jis tarah

Shaam-o-subah tu mera
Tere bina kya mera
Do jism jaan ek hai
Na hona kabhi tu juda

Teri meri kahaani
Hai baarishon ka paani
Ban ke jo ishq barse
Teri meri kahaani [x2](Gabbar is back).





They both got dressed up.Kabir pulled her closer getting romantic with her.

Pooja:Leave me Kabir...let me prepare breakfast.

She pushed him and went to the kitchen.

Kabir too followed her.

Pooja:You came here also?

Kabir:I just came to help you.

Pooja:Oh really?

Kabir:Ya...

They smiled.They both started preparing breakfast together 



and ended up getting romantic with each other.





Jaane jaa, jaane jaa, jaaneman jaaneman jaanejaa...(EBSS).



In  office…

Soumya asked Pooja:You are blushing too much.Did anything happen yesterday night?



Pooja was shy:Soumya..stop it.

Soumya:You both are under the same roof.That’s why I asked if anything happened.

Pooja:Shameless.

Soumya giggled.

After a month...

Kabir Pooja were in the mall.Suddenly Kabir bumped into a girl.He was shocked to see her.

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Pooja saw Namik in the ladies restroom and confronted him. Namik is so cheap that he misbehaved with pooja. Glad that Kabir saved her on time. Jabir love confession was romantic, Sad that both refused to marry because of their parents. Their fight with the house owner was dynamic. Jabir bedroom , bathroom, & kitchen scenes are romantic. 

Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update😳I was right it was Kabir who punched Namik..Pooja is relieved now and he got fired tooKabir expressed his love to Pooja and asked her too..She told she loves him but can't marry as she don't believe in the institution of marriage seeing her parents fighting and her Dad left home😔He revealed even he cannot so both decided for a live-in relationship..Got a house too and the first night🤪Morning scene was cute😳You wrote Soumya Gauri instead of Pooja..I think the girl is Kavya..Perfect pics and songs❤️

Posted: 4 years ago

Nice message- Better having meaningful relationship for self than compromised bond for society. 

Enjoyed reading 

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