|Deception|- PreRish SS (Part 4 PG 13)(Updated 11OCT)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Teaser

He looked up from the book he was reading and tilted his head slightly in mock amusement.

Her fingers clenched tightly around the hilt of the large wooden door as her gaze flickered towards the right corner of the four post bed where a woman in a skimpy red lacy nightgown was sprawled, almost wantonly.

"To what"

Her gaze shifted of its own volition to the man who was now picking his shirt off the floor and was soon approaching her as he slipped his hands into the sleeves.

"Do I owe the pleasure of your company, Mrs Ba...Basu?" He raised a bushy brow in query whilst his eyes drank her appearance.

Her chest was heaving wildly as if a monster had been chasing after her. Her sindoor was slightly smeared over her forehead and her dupatta had almost slipped off her shoulder revealing the low cut zari work blouse. 

"We need to...talk" Prerna spoke, sense of urgency creeping up as she crumpled her lehenga between fingers of her left hand, dread seeping through her veins and reality sinking in.

'What had she done?!'

INDEX IS RIGHT BELOW IN NEXT POST

So this is the teaser of the story. Hope you all will like it

This is a work of pure 'fiction'

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Posted: 4 years ago

Index:

Part 1 - Despair (PG3)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151248143?tid=5112520

Part 2- Disaster (PG 7)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151324808?tid=5112520

Part 3 - Deceit (PG 10)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151401439

Part 4 - Downpour of Doom - The Beginning (PG 13)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151506295

Edited by nish_vir - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Being human doesn’t mean to be disloyal or infidelity 

But I think you know what you are writing, so continue..

You are writing for Preish fans so we all appreciate it

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sneha_17

Being human doesn’t mean to be disloyal or infidelity 

And i never said that. These two points were written separately. What i simply meant was that people commit mistakes and sometimes to hide them, they commit even more. This may not be a global thing but yeah it exists. It seems like you misunderstood my point so I have deleted it entirely.

But I think you know what you are writing, so continue..

You are writing for Preish fans so we all appreciate it

Edited by nish_vir - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

oh gosh does this seem interesting or what! Im quite excited for this one...love reading the darker more gritty tales

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Posted: 4 years ago

Looks Interesting.....Pls continue soon dear.......🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Seems like a dark ff ...love these sort of stories... really fed up with sharif characters ....update soon😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Intriguing.update soon plz. Thanks 

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Posted: 4 years ago

This is very interesting. Please, continue.

Edited by MR21 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey yaar I am sorry. I haven’t meant to hurt you.

You don’t need to compromise anything on your story for me. Please write as you prefer, you need to feel happy and content of your work first.

I give more importance to respect, trust and loyalty than love in a relationship. 

Infidelity is one thing I can’t stand whatever it might be the situation cheating/ backstabbing is the worst.