OMG what a brilliant start Swara 👏
I love how you started it with Rakshit's POV and his helplessness. He wants Drishti to show up or he'll be forced to marry Lavanya, which he doesn't want.
Ugh...I could almost hear Lavanya and Mahima's voices in my head. And now I have a headache 🤢
Divya blames herself for her sister's condition but Shikhar is there to support her. Finally a subtle ShiVya scene that's missing from the show.
Drishti is fine now but she won't be able to make it to the house any time soon. Rakshit is given an ultimatum by his mother and now he can't refuse.
I loved reading it yaar. This was so beautifully written ❤️
Thanks a lot for the PM
Please update the next part soon and don't forget about the other story too.
Swara🤗 sorry I’m late 😆
Okey so first of all loved that we got to see what was going on in Rakshits head. Secondly congratulations u got mahimas character spot on as she managed to irritate me 🙄 and thirdly omg drishti she needs her dr raks 😆
But Anyway I’m interested to see how u take it from here...I’d love for drishti to reach on time but then again she’s in hospital 😩 also I’m glad u included romi I love his and drishtis bond.
Hope to see an update soon ❤️
Please please update soon
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