DriKshit TS: Kaash

LabyrinthTV thumbnail
Love Couple India Season 2 0 Thumbnail Anniversary 5 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

KAASH


Part 1


*********************************


With the help of Anjaan,Romi and Shikar, Drishti saved D. D was now her Divi only not Divyachini. They defeated pisachini. The evil soul was now dead. But while saving D, Drishti was injured brutally.

*                              *                            *

Shergill house.


“Mrs Shergill kaha ho tum.Kabse wait kar raha hoon main tumhara. Pata nahi mera man itna bechain kyu ho raha hain. Tumne hi toh mujhe kaha tha khudse dur rehne ke liye. Toh main kyun pareshan hoon tumhare liye?. But please Mrs. Shergill jaldi se aa jao. I'm waiting for you. Agar aaj tum nahi ayi toh majburan mujhe Lavanya se shaadi ke natak ke liye haan kehna padega. Jo mein bilkul nahi chahta.” He thought to himself. His thoughts were roaming but everything stopped on his wife. She was not just destination of his heart but also his mind. She conquered his mind too.


“Toh kya socha tumne Rakshit, mere offer ke baare mein.” Lavanya asked with a wide smile.


This voice. If there was a award for the most irritating voice. Lavanya would have won that without any competition. She was so good at that.  He mentally clapped for her.


“Lavanya maine kaha na ki aaj tumhe jawab mil jayega. Baar baar puch ne se mera  jawab badal nahi jayega.” He  informed her.


“Rakshit tumhari biwi kaha hain?” She asked him.


“Mom she is actually......” He trailed off.


“Woh actually kya Rakshit?, mein batati hoon tumhari biwi hamesha ki tarah gayab hain. Use toh kisi cheez ki parwah hi nahi hain. Hum kab se uska wait kar rahe hain aur woh...”Mahima had enough. She wanted to see her son happy but she failed to see his happiness.


“Rakshit see I want you to be happy.  Drishti tumhe kabhi khusi nahi de sakti. She doesn't have time for you. Agar use rishte nibhane nahi the toh usne yeh shaadi kyun ki? Bus Rakshit ab aur nahi  maine ab faisla kar liya hain.” She declared.


“Kaisa faisla ?”

*                               *                            *


Hospital


Romi was pacing back and forth. His eyes had tears. For Romi his di was everything and now she was fighting with death. D was crying a river.Shikar was consoling her. 


“Agar aaj di ko kuch hua toh mein khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paungi. Yeh sab meri wajah se Hua. Meri wajah se di aaj is haalat mein hain.” Divya’ voice was weak and shaky.


“D don't cry. Isme tumhari koi galti nahi hain. Yeh toh us pisachini ke wajah se Hua aur ab woh mar chuki hain. Ab sab thik ho jayega.” He gently hugged her.” Bhabhi bhi jaldi se theek ho jayengi. Don't worry.” He comforted her.


Trio was becoming anxious. There was only one ray of hope for them. The doors of the ICU opened and Doctor came out.


“Doctor, di kaisi hain ?, kya hum un se mil sakte hain.? Romi asked in one breath.


“She is out of danger now. You can meet her after she gain Consciousness.”


Romi and D was beaming with excitement.


“Thank you doctor.” 

*                                  *                            *

Shergill house.


“I will wait 10 minutes more for your wife. Aur agar woh nahi aayi toh mere pass doosara option hain.” She said with a wide smile.


“Kaisa option ,Mom?”


“Agar woh nahi ayi toh aaj tumhari aur Lavanya ki sagai  kar doongi.” She declared.


Rakshit was shocked. How can his mother think like that. Can't she see how happy he is with his wife. He knew that his mother was upset with his wife but what he didn't know was that she hated her. How can she hate her? What is there in Mrs. Shergill to hate. She is perfect. If there is something beyond perfect then she is. Sometimes she do behave weirdly but that doesn't mean she wants to end this relationship. He had seen in her eyes that she loves him. He just need to find out what is stopping her from confessing her feelings. 


He wanted to tell his Mom about this. But his mother didn't give him a chance to speak. Nothing new. He thought to himself.


“Bas Rakshit! Baki ki baatein hum 

baad mein karenge.” She left.

*                        *                             *

~ Swara

Edited by Daydreamer123 - 4 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

15

Views

10695

Users

14

Likes

37

Frequent Posters

sweetnoori thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 4 years ago

Swara🤗

Nicely  written  

Good start 👍

Uff lava and mahima cannt tolerate 😷

Oh poor dri  😢 

Update sooooon 👍

MudrasV thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Good beginning. Do update soon.

Edited by MudrasV - 4 years ago
chavi12345 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 4 years ago

Good start . Plz continue

RainOfDew thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome updt

Poor Dri..Mahima Shaitan Lava ki shadi karana chahti hai Rakshit se😡

Hope he say smthing

Cont soon

Thnx for pm

plmzaq thumbnail
Anniversary 7 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome start

Love it

Continue soon

Silver_dew11 thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Nice one 👍

Please update soon..will be looking forward to your next update 😊

Roselada thumbnail
Anniversary 8 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Awww

Baby sis’s story🥳

Amazing start swara.👏

Feeling really bad for injuried dri n divi😒

U have amazingly  described rakshit’s feeling for dri.

His care impatience patience.😇

Mrs. shergill totally occupied mr. shergill dil aur dimaag.😆😆

Yup lava ‘s voice 😂😂😂

The award goes to her for most irritating voice

Mahima is blind n stupid then if she can’t see n understand rakshit properly.

Haan lava will make him happy n usse rishte nibhana bhi aatha hai🤦🏻‍♀️😑😑😑

Romi n divi❤️❤️

Rakshit’s words for dri 👏👏

Thanks for the pm.

Continue soon.😇

Manu_986 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Nice start swara.👏 

Poor dri is in hospital... Loved romi's concern toward his sister. I remember shikhu never addresses dri as bhabhi in show. But here he gave respect by Calling her bhabhi. Nice..... isn't it?😳

DesiiiiGirllll thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 4 years ago

This mahima is so annoying yaar! Hopefully Romi and Shikhar inform Rakshit and he takes a stand for Drishti!

Waiting for more!

Update soon❤️

Edited by KhayalonKiMalik - 4 years ago