OS - Mini's Dad - Part 3 pg 3

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Posted: 4 years ago

Its been six years when Babita's life had taken a drastic change and there was no looking back from then. Mini graduated from her college and also took up vocational course on photography with her mother's full support and her hanuman uncle pushing her to follow her dreams. They started from a small catering business to this large corporate catering centre with now more housewives joining them and supporting their business along. They had formed a eatery chain and quite popular one in whole Patiala and they were now thinking of opening more branches as there were offers coming from other cities as well.Babita's journey into this business world was not that easy though ,there were rough rides in between but it all went through with support of people around and her own high spirit and never say die attitude. Mini had seen her mother grow into this successful entrepreneur from a timid shy housewife. She was ecstatic as always and more so as today was the day when Mihir's parents were coming tomeet them. Mihir was her mentor in photography classes. Though unlike Bobby and Mickey, Mihir never proposed or tried to impress her. They still bonded over same passion and life purposes. Yes finally Mini had found someone who defined true love in her life. The journey of this love was more beautiful and dreamy than Mini had ever dreamt of.

Everyone in the house was screaming and panicking. Mini's lala uncle had many gifts in hand and roaming on directions of Babita while Naem Bi had taken out prettiest dresses from her wardrobe for Mini even though when she could have bought most expensive dresses ,she still preferred borrowing from NaemBi's secret wardrobe of yesteryear designs. Hanuman was overlooking the arrangement as there was evident tension on his face.  Babita had prepared lot of recipes for the guests asking hanuman to taste as he ran from here and there just making sure that all will go well.

 

Boy arrived with his parents soon. Babita and Hanuman greeted them and they  managed to make the day for Mini as memorable as she could imagine. She was so happy seeing everything going so well.

Date was decided and marriage was just around the corner. There were so many things to do and Babita was already tensed how will it all go. She was awake that night just before the wedding. Hanuman as always could sense her worried face by a mere look on it as he sat alongside her , both watching the door of that haveli sitting on staircase. Babita was somehow comforted by his presence always and tonight she needed him perhaps the most. It was her daughter’s wedding, her minnie’s wedding. She had mixed emotions inside, so many thoughts coming to her mind. With him she never needed any words as hegently gave her his handkerchief, she cried like a baby. She was going to miss her baby but she was happy that Minnie had finally found love and such goodfamily. Minnie was self-dependent and confident girl , Babita shared with Hanuman how proud she is of Minnie and how she wished Minnie lives her dream and reaches new height of success. Her Minnie had found true love which Babita didn’t as she mentioned that Hanuman’s eyes teared up a bit. How he wished she could read his mind and his heart. He wanted to fill that void in Babita’s life but fear of losing her even as a friend stopped him many times. Her friendship was his lifeline and Minnie was his life.



He shared emotions of missing Minnie in the house. Hanuman recalled his moments with her and felt heavy in heart. Babita sensed his voice choked up ashe praised his veer balika. Their relation was very special for Babita. She knew what Minnie was for Hanuman and what Hanuman was for Minnie. She held his hand as he felt weak hiding his tears for his Minnie..

 

Soon there was a knock on the door and doorbell too rang. Minnie too wokeu p with noise as Hanuman opened the door. To his surprise it was Ashok Khurana on the door..

 

To be continued…..

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Posted: 4 years ago

lovely os ...pls continue : )

which i liked the most in os  that mini finally found her true love.thank god that is not mickey & bobby.i too think they both are good as friends for mini not as a love partner.

even hanita emo convo was also good😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

oh god not ashok

i love hanuman and mini relation 

uff please just chuck this duffer out from house and their life.

please do write more.

bye sumi

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely OS.. Please continue soon

It's a priceless moment for Babita n Hanuman beautifully written

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Posted: 4 years ago

Here to claim the rights of father - the selfish thing is back 

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Posted: 4 years ago

What a lovely OS👌👌👌 Beautifully written..👏the Moments between Hanuman and Babes is nice one..And thank god it's a new guy for Mini..She found her true love... Continue with 2nd part... Waiting...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi Riti. Wow, thank you so much for this lovely piece on Hanita. Plz do not leave this unfinished. Would love to read further and will enjoy with this fiction until Babita accepts HS in the actual show. Update soon plz with cherry on top.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you everyone for lovely comments and liking the story.. posting part 2 today.. :) its more of Minnie and Hanuman's bond in this one.. but continuing with one more part for Hanita :)

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Babita was shocked to see that man on the door, she immediately rushed to be by hanuman’s side. What was he doing there? After what all he has done in their lives, he managed to show his face yet again. Babita asked him angrily…

Aap yaha kya kar rahe hain.. Mr. Ashok Khurana.. Iss waqt?

She didn’t realise that there was someone else too watching from terrace as scene unfolded..

Main yaha tumse milne nahi aaya… main apni beti ke liye aaya hu… Tumhe shayad yaad nahi raha lekin Minnie meri bhi beti hain… aur ek baap hone ke naate.. Minnie ki shaadi ke faisle mein mera bhi haq tha jo tumne mujhse cheen liya .. Khair chodo mujhe yaha tumse koi behas nahi karni.. Main sirf itna btana chahta hu ki waise toh tumne mujhe meri hi beti ki shaadi mein bulana zaroori nahi samjha.. pas ehsaan mano fir bhi aagaya hun main baap ka farz nibhane.. uska kanyadaan karne..

His words .. hit hard.. somewhere harder than Babita expected... Minnie watched as Ashok proudly acclaimed his right on his daughter… His right. She didn’t want him yet againto cast his shadow even on the most auspicious day of her life... Before Minnie could even make them realize that she is watching and hearing everything… Hanuman stepped up to the scene realizing that Babita ‘s and Ashok’s angry confrontation could wake up bride to be.. He didn’t want to create any scene in front of Minnie…

Dekho Mr. Ashok Khurana abhi iss waqt tu yaha se chala ja.. Main tere haath chodta hu.. abhiyaha se chala ja… Jo bhi hain hum kal mil kar baat karte hain.. abhi iss waqtMinnie ko acha nahi lagega yeh sab dekh kar..

Ashok’s anger reachednew heights with hanuman’s intervention..

Tu beech mein matpadh.. tu hota kaun hain .. mere aur meri beti ke beech mein aane wala.. Ashok abusedhanuman Singh as Hanuman kept his cool but this whole scene enraged Minnie whojust screamed from terrace asking them to stop..

All were surprised tosee Minnie there, Babita really worried for her child just ran upto her calmingher down and assuring her that she will handle this.. Minnie need not worryabout it as it was already late and she had many rituals next morning, she mustgo to sleep... and also not take any tensions...

Mujhe aapko apnishaadi mein nahi bulana , Dhyan se sun lijiye Mr. Ashok Khurana..

Minnie.. Ashok shouted as he rushed towards Minnie, a shadow stopped him just at right time.. Her hanuman uncle was standing firm between her and her estranged dad..

Chala ja yaha se..Agarmeri veer balika ke aaspass aane ki zara bhi koshish ki tune.. toh abhi taksharafat dikhata aa rha hu bahot..ab na dikhegi.. khoon ka rishta toh na hain isse… lekin khoon ke rishte se bhi badh kar hain.. tu kya samjhega.. jo aaj tak kadar nahi ki apni beti ki.. Aaj aaya hain haq jamane..

Babita and Minnie were quietly watching Hanuman as he held Ashok by his collar and threw him out ofthe house..

He banged door on his face.. as Babita started crying for her daughter..

Babes.. tu ro kyu rahihain..  Minnie asked her while some tearswere in her eyes too.. but as usual she was acting stronger for her mom…

Woh jaise bhi hain Minnie .. woh tere ..

Woh mere kuch nahi lagte … samjhi aap.. kuch nahi.. bas kuch time ke liye aapse naata tha unka ab kuch nahi hain.. haan woh hoge mere biological father..par baap jaise kuch kiya nahi hain unhone…

Par Minnie baap k hote hue bina baap ke shaadi…

Kaun kehta hain kibina baap ke shaadi ho rhi hain… Minnie stopped her babes in between…

Mere hanuman uncle hain na

Minnie’s sentence shocked Babita and Hanuman as she looked with pride in her eyes towards her hanuman uncle…

Theek kaha unhone..khoon ka rishta nahi hain toh kya hua babes.. usse bhi badhkar rishta hain..

Jab main roti hu na toh woh bhi ro padte hain.. Jab main raat ko nahi soti .. toh aap ke saath woh bhi toh jaagte hain babes.. Jab mujhe chot lagti hain.. toh dard unhe bhi hota hain.. maine unse pehle kabhi nahi jaana tha ki baap ka pyaar kya hota hain..ab pta hain.. jo hain woh yahi hain.. uske liye kisi rishte ka certificate nahi chahiye.. rishta toh dil se hain.. aur hamesha rahega..

Rishta hain na Hanuman uncle.. She looked with those eyes seeking his blessings and love.. love that he has always showered upon her.. and blessings that have always come silently from his side.. He need not proclaim or shout to the world..that he is her dad.. but he has made sure that she nevermissed what having dad is all about ..

Minnie went to him ..and he hugged her and kissed her forehead as those tears fell on her cheek… She wiped those tears of his face.. as Babita too cried with her family.. her Minnie and her Minnie’s hanuman uncle.. together they walked upstairs and made sure that Minnie sleeps sound in her bed. with both their hands reaching out to her forehead together… They stayed together for long time... silently acknowledging each other’s place too in their own lives..

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Posted: 4 years ago

this is truly beautiful...😃


heartfelt piece....👏

Edited by cute.manasi - 4 years ago