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Hi ,
Some people like Sameer have a lot of difficulty in opening up or speaking about their inner feelings...
This piece deals with Sameer's inability to open up which he is very well aware of...
In fact this piece is an exploration of why is he not able to open up... Probably Sameer inner fight between his head and heart that he should have opened up to Naina...
Itni Tanhayi dekhi hai,
Ke alfazon se dosti bhi na kar paye...
Khamoshiyon ke melon mein rehne wale ko,
Khamoshiyon ke melon mein rehne wale ko,
Ab jashn kaise raas aaye...
Jab sirf ghum mein maze aaye ho aur andheron me daaman mein beetaho bachpan,
Jab zindagi ne har mausam mein aankhon mein sirf nami bhari ho,
Toh ab Dardnuma dil ko mehfilein kaise ho pasand,...
Hum dil ki dil mein rakhte hain,
Inn Jawaan dhadkano ki bas yehi hai ek khata...bas yehi hai ek khata...
Jab sirf ghum mein maze aaye ho aur andheron me daaman mein beetaho bachpan,
Jab zindagi ne har mausam mein aankhon mein sirf nami bhari ho,
Toh ab Dardnuma dil ko mehfilein kaise ho pasand,...
Hum dil ki dil mein rakhte hain,
Inn Jawaan dhadkano ki bas yehi hai ek khata...bas yehi hai ek khata...
Would like to know your thoughts on the above piece...Infact if there are any males out in this fandom(of course those who like a bit of shayari),I would like to know whether I have been able to capture the inner turmoil of a guy's mind of not being able to open up to his wife...
Love,
Ria
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