Shayar Sameer-His inability to open up - Page 3

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RangnRia

@RangnRia

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Posted: 5 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: mehraan
Beautiful lines Ria ...👏 U hve captured Sams essence so well that the lines depict the immense sadness n emptiness that he has been engulfed in...rather this abyss of hollowing pain has become his mode of survival n defense...!

Thanks a ton Meher Di!!!.

You have replied to me for the first time..Aaj aisa lag raha hai jaise mujhe meri Idii mil gayi...

Aapse yeh lines padhke laga that probably I have slightly succeeded in unraveling Sameer's inability...You are so right...Sam is falling into an bottomless pit and his mind has already made that dark pit his home...

No one captures the beauty behind each scene as well as you.Thanks Di aap finally meri shayari padhne ke liye waqt nikal payin...and these lines coming from you mean so much to me...

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Suparna13

@Suparna13

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 5 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: RangnRia

Thanks Suparna...
Tell me one thing...aapke comments se aap pure Delhi ki dhaar lagte ho "cha gayo"...par naam mein Bangali tadka...Zara iss confusion ko durr karne ki zehmat karen... 😊

Request nahi bilkul order kar sakti ho aap...But unfortunately mujhe yahan ka abhi tak kuch zyaada pata nahi hai...Index kaise banana hai and all..btw thanks for the suggestion to create an index...Mere dimaag mein bhi nai aaya...But ek baat batao ab tak toh maine shayad se 3-4 Sameer-wale Shayaris hi likhi hun...Index toh zyada entries ke liye hoti hai na???

Hu to mai bengalee!! Thik hai ab se order pesh hongi di! Mujhe bhi jyada to pata nahi lekin shayad aisi koi baat nahi hai ki zyada entries ke liye index! Aur index ke baare aapko chaaru information de payegi! Wo khus hi kuch din pehle apna index banayi hai IF pe! Aur wo delhi ka dhaar ka to pata nahi kyunki ab tak to kabhi delhi gayi nahi!!! Aur aap mat bolo mujhe mai aapse choti hu!!

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