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Dear friends I am writing a short story on our Samaina. I am always in love with this pair and this story was revolving in my mind from many days so i just thought to write it. I am not a very good writer. This is my first story so please express your feelings that should I write it or not. Thank You
LOVE from shana.
Here are the characters of the story:
Naina: A simple yet beautiful girl with a talent of singing. She is also a studious girl who top her school and college every year. Moreover she has a beautiful heart. She is the cultural minister of her college.
Sameer: Known as MR. Perfectionist. He is perfect in everything except to studies and music. He is the charm of the college. He is the head boy and also the captain of college's cricket team. Through every girl wanted him to became his boyfriend he never pays any attention to them.
Kartik: The grandson of the school's trustee. He is also handsome but not lik sameer. He is the leader of the school band because of his grandfather.He is a flirtious boy.
Sunaina: Current Girlfriend of kartik. She is always jealous of naina due to hr beauty and her singing ability. She can sing a little bit but not like naina. She is good at nothing except for gossiping and being jealous.
Swati: Best friend of naina. She always help naina whenever she is in need. She is her best friend from school. She loves munna. Like naina she is also good at playing piano.
Preeti: She is the cousin sister of naina. They both live together. She is also the Hanuman of naina. She helps naina in every situation. She is good at playing guitar.
[Naina, Preeti and Swati have joined the music class two years back in the summer vacation. While preeti and swati chose guitar and piano, naina choses singing. With her daily practice she now became a very good singer in her college. She always comes first in any singing competition. While preeti and swati also became good in their respective instruments. The trio is in the music band of the college.]
Munna: Best friend and cousin of sameer. He loves swati but can't express his feelings to her. Never leaves sameer alone.
Pandit: Another best friend of sameer.
So, these are the main caracters of the story. I will introduce other characters in the story.
[All of u can you suggest a name of the as I can't decide. Please]
PART - 1
Naina:[on the phone] Swati kaha reh gayi tu. Kabse tera wait kar rahe hai. Aaj phir se class late pahuchna hai kya?
Swati: Nahi yaar traffic me phasi hu. tu class attend kar. Mere liye bhi notes le lena.
Naina: [laughs] Theek hai. Bye !
[After class]
Kartik: Naina chal jaldi sab tera wait kar rahe hai. Tujhe pata hai na INTER COLLEGE MUSIC COMPETITION next week month hi hai. Hume abhi practice karni chahiye.
Naina: [in her mind] khud to kuch karta nahi hai bus khali instructions deta rehta hai [loudly] OK!
Kartik and naina both are in the same band in which kartik is the leader and naina is the singer. Preeti and Swati are also in the same band. Their band name is Rock ON which is suggested by preeti.
Entering the Music Room
Naina: Sorry guys mai late ho gayi. Meri wajah se tum log bhi practice nahi kar paye.
Swati: Its ok . Hum bhi bus abhi aaye.
Naina: Oh! to tu aa gayi. Class nahi attend kar sakti hai lekin practice me kabhi late nahi hoti. Yeh le tere notes.
Swati: Thanks naina yaar. Tu nahi hoti to mai aur preeti pass kaise hote.
Preeti: Such me yaar. Chalo ab practice karte hai.
Everyone starts practising the song they have chosen.
Kartik: Priyank mujhe competition ke rules ke paper to pass karna.
Priyank: Hmm [ Hands over the paper to him]
Priyank is kartik's best friend. Though he is not in the band but he still wanders with kartik everywhere.
Swati: waise mujhe pata chala hai ke iss baar PATEL college me se do team part le rahi hai. Un dono teams me se jo accha perform karega wohi team Inter College Competition me perform keregi.
Preeti: Achha! Wo college jo pechle do saal se 1st aa rahi hai aur hum 2nd.
Naina: Waise humare college me se bhi do teams honi chahiye
Priyank: Lekin kyu?
Naina: [ Turning her face to Kartik] Ho sakta hai na ki humse aacha bhi koi ho.
Kartik: OK everyone. Now stop this and listen to me
[Everyone starts listening to him]
Kartik: The following are the the rules of the competition:
Every Band should have minimum 6 participants and maximum 8.
There would be three rounds.
Only on team can participate from one college
Judging would be based on mostly on the voice, of the singer
Kartik: Naina abse tumhe zyada practice karni hogi. Aagar iss baar bhi hum second aaye to wo sirf tumari wajah se
Preeti: Lekin Kartik [ At that moment naina stops her and she whispers a small Yes]
As the Band was practicing on the new song that they have chosen, someone just passes that way. But suddenly he heard someone singing so graceful. HE stood there till the whole song completed. He was just amazed to hear such a beautiful voice.
SO, Friends this is the first part of the story. I know its very short part but u can all suggests me that should i contiune or not. IF yes then I will surely give the long update. Thanks all of you
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