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Posted: 5 years ago

I would surely give a long update next time.😊Thank you for your positive reply.

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Posted: 4 years ago

MEETHI  BOLIYAAN

Part 4

At home

Preeti: Arre yaar Naina aaj to kitni practice kari. Waise sahi hai classes to nahi attend karni padti.

Naina: Tu to bus aise hi bahane dekh.

Just then bela Chachi calls both of them for lunch.

Preeti: Aaye mummy bus do minute.

Preeti: Waise naina tune dekha aaj kaise sameer ne aaj pehli baar humse baat kari.

Naina: Baat thodi kari sirf do teen sentence bole humse wo bhi munna swati ko pasand karta hai issliye.

Preeti: Arre mere liye to itna hi kaafi hai. Tujhe pata hai wo kisi bhi ladki se bina kaam ke baat bhi nahi karta. Saari ladkiyaan uske peeche bhagti hai.

Naina: Meri pyaari behen aise hi nahi MR Prfectionist hai.

Preeti: arre naina hume to apne aap to lucky kehna chahiye. Waise Naina ho sakta hai usse tu pasand aa gayi ho issliye aaya ho

Naina: Accha aisa bhi to ho sakta hai na ki wo tujhe apni cricket team me lena chahta ho!

Preeti: haan yaar aisa bhi to ho sakta hai na. Tujhe pata wo senior Vicky bhi to hai na cricket team me. Kaash aisa hi ho.

Naina: Sahi me preeti tu bhi na!

Preeti: Mazak kar rahi hu itni bhi wo nahi hu jo tu samjh rahi hai. Lekin naina tujhme kya kami hai. Sunder hai, accha gaana gati hai aur top bhi to karti hai.

Naina: Madam tu na zyada mat soch theek hai. chal abhi khana khane ke liye.

Then both of them went for their lunch.

 After Lunch

Naina: Chachiji aaj mai bohot thak gayi hu. Mai thodi der aaram karne jaa rahi hu.

Chachi: Aree naina beta, Bhagwan jhoot na bulaye, kya ho gaya? Teri tabiyat to theek hai na?

Naina: Ji chachiji mai bilkul theek hu

Chachiji: To phir?

 Preeti: Arre mummy wo next month music competition hai na isseliye zyada practice kar li.

Chachiji: Beta, Bhagwan jhoot na bulaye, itni practice karne ki kya jaroorat hai ha.

Just then taiji enters with a bowl in her hand.

Taiji: Oh Bai! Music competition, extra practice sasural me naak katwana humari.

Chachiji: Bhagwan jhoot na bulaye bhabhiji aisa kyu keh rahi hai aap. Aisa kuch nahi hoga.

Taiji: Haa haan tumhe hi to sab kuch pata hai. Mai to pehle hi keh rahi thi ki yeh gaana waana chod ke Khana pakkana seekh lo. sasural me kuch kaam to aata. Shadi gaana dekh ke nahi, khana dekh ke hoti hai

Just then tauji calls her.

Taiji: Ji aayi. Bela jara si cheeni de dena. Aaj  bohot thak gayi huna. Ek kaam karna chai hi bana ke bhej dena. theek hai.

Chachiji: Ji Bhabhiji aap ghar jakar aaram kijiye mai chai bhejwati hu.

Taiji goes

Chachiji: Bhagwan jhoot na bulaye kuch kaam kare bina hi thak jaati hai. Naina beta tu jakar aaram karle aur jaa preeti tu bhi aaram karle.

Naina: Ji chachiji

They both went to their room.

 Preeti: Naina ek baat baata tune to hamesha apna best diya hai aur agar humari college first nahi aati to usme teri kya galti hai.

Naina:  Galti jiski bhi ho mai iss baar apne college ko first aata dekhna chahti hu. Bus

Preeti: Lekin naina Kartik to har baar tujhe hi blame karta hai na. Khud to kuch karta nahi hai saari responsibilities tujh pe chod deta hai.

Naina: Woh chahe jo bhi kare hume to apna best dena hai.

Preeti: Yaar Naina yeh kartk sameer se kitna alag hai na. Sameer bhi to cricket team ka captain hai aur wo kitni mehnat karta hai. Haar ne par blame kisi aur pe nahi daalta.

Naina: Chod na preeti kya karna waise bhi last year hai. Enjoy kar last year.

Preeti: HMM!

Naina recalls how Sameer spoke to them today. He was concerned about their studies.

Naina: [ To herself] Sahi me yeh sameer kartik se kitna alag hai.

At college

Sameer: Munna mujhe na Music room ke pass kuch kaam hai to tu chalega.

Munna: Theek hai bhai chal Swati bhi wahi hogi.

Pandit: Bhai swati ke liye to tu kahi par bhi chala jayega.

The trio went near the Music room.

Munna: sameer tu jake apna kaam kar main to yahi khada hu.

Sameer moves towards the Sports room which is near the Music room and hands over some paper to the coach.

Sameer: Chal Munna mera kaam to hogaya.

Munna: Arre ruk na abhi Iss Frock wali pandit ko to dekh lene de.

As Sameer turns his face to the music room he saw Naina practicing with Preeti and Swati.

Sameer: arre munna Agar tu Swati ko itna pasand Karta hai to phir directly jake bol dena.

Munna: Direct hi bolna hai lekin Abhi Nahi Time aane de Sameer phir dekhna iss Frock wali pandit ko kaise impress Karta hu.

Pandit: Yeh Time kya hota bhai. Agar abhi nahi bola to phir school ki tarah college bhi khatam ho jaega.

Saying this Sameer and Pandit takes him inside the music room.

Sameer: Hello everyone. Main hu Sameer Maheshwari. I am sorry ki maine aap sab ko disturb kiya but mere friend munna ko kuch kehna hai. Munna bol de ab. Yehi sahi time hai.

Naina was shocked that how Sameer Maheshwari came to Music room today. 

                                   So, guys, this was the 4th update. I hope that all of u liked it. Please leave your comments. And I Hope that this one was a little longer than the previous one. Thank U.😃

                                                                             Shana

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Posted: 4 years ago

Please update the next part

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful update.

Waiting for the next

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update

Please update next part soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

hey guys, i am really really sorry because i couldn't post for few months. But i was really busy with something. but now i  am thinking to continue the story. So guys please support me. And i would be posting tomorrow the next part. Once again Sorry.

Thanking YOU

Shana

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Posted: 4 years ago

Good to hear i m waiting for this only

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hii guys as promised i am here to post the next part. Thank u for your positive replies.😃



MEETHI BOLIYAAN

PART 5

 

Sunaina: Oh Hii Sameer tumhe konnahi jaanta. aao na. Please sit.

Munna: H.. Haa.. Wo mujhe kehnatha ki...ki

Swati: ki ?

Munna: ki...  Sameer ko tumhari Practice dekhni hai.

Sameer: mujhe?

Munna: Haa Sameer tu hi to kehraha tha na ki tujhe apne headboy hone ki duty nibhani hai. Usse bhi to patahona chahiye ki Music competition ki taiyaari kaise chal rahi hai.

Kartik: Headboy hai School kaPrincipal nahi. Tum bus apne cricket match ki Practice dekho. Yaha dekhne keliye main hu.

Sunaina: Rehne bhi do kartik.Akhir dusro ko bhi to pata hona chahiye ke kaise chal rahi hai humari praticekyu Naina?

Sameer: nahi mujhe naina pe to koi doubt nahi hai woh to har baar apna best hi deti hai lekin kuch log haiyaha to kuch kaam hi nahi karte bus order dete rehte hai kyu hai na Kartik?

Kartik: Tumhara matlab kya hai ha

Naina: Ek minute Sameer head boyhai. Uski duty hain yeh sab check karna. I hope kisi ko isse problem nahi hai.

Everyone except kartik : Nahikoi problem nahi hai.

Kartik : Lekin….

Sunaina: Bus kartik ab aur kuchnahi.

Sunaina takes sameer and munnato the chairs kept in one side of the room and sits beside them close tosameer.

Sameer: Munna iss taraf aa ja.Mujhe yaha garmi lag rahi hai.

Munna: theek hai bhai aa ja.

They both exchange their seatsleaving sunaina unsatisfied.

Everyone starts practising.

Sameer is completely lost.

After the practice,

Kartik : Chalo aaj ke liye itnakaafi hai.

Preeti : Iska man hogaya topractice khatam nahi to aur practice karo. Pata nahi isko leader kyu banana tha

Sunaina: kuch kaha tumne preeti??

Preeti: Nahi nahi main kya bol sakti hu. Kyu naina? 

NAINA: Chup

Kartik : Kal humare college me Quiz competition ki wajah se chutti hai but tum sabko practice ke liye aana hai.

Swati: Tum sabko matlab tum nahi aaoge?

Kartik: nahi kal mai aur sunaina bahar ghoom ne jaa rahe hai to hum nahi aaenge.

Preeti : Waise bhi tum dono ka hona na hona koi fark nahi padta.

Sameer: Nahi aaoge matlab. Yeh sab tumhari responsibilities hai. Sab ko bula ke khud ghoomo ge.

Kartik : Sameer tum na apne kaamse matlab rakho theek hai. Chalo sunaina.

Sunaina: theek hai. Bye sameer.

Sameer ignored her

Pandit: bye sunaina.

Sameer: koi aaye ya na aaye mainto practice dekhne jaaror aaunga.

Naina: iski koi jaroorat nahihai sameer.

Sameer: arre wo kal main matchki practice ke liye to aa hi raha hu. To mujhe to aana hi hai

Naina: ok then bye.

Sameer: bye

So this was the fifth update. I hope that u all liked it. Please leave your comments.

Thank you

Shana