AKSHAN SS-MERI Khushi last part on 8 Feb 2019 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
#21
Superb update 
Love it
Continue soon
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#22
Awesome update dear
Loved it
It was really an emotional update
Glad guddan is back 
Please do continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#23
You such a great dialouge writer 👏
I just love each & every dialouge of akshst.
Aj ke dialouges ne mujhe bhi immosnal kar diya😭😆
Lovely...update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#24
Akshat ki tadap for his beloved Guddan was 😭

Awesome update continue soon 👏
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#25
Wooow...Wonderful update...emotional overflow...loved AJs confession...litterly crying yaar...Plz update the next part soon 
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#26
This was so emotional 😭
The way he was remembering the chronology of their relationship... and his "Umar maang lunga" vachan 💔

Loved how the last moment in his train of thought was her "dimaag ke faisle humesha sahi hote hai" dialogue and he ended the train by mentally denying the statement, thinking they're not always sahi 😭

The way he got emotional in front of her and called her his aadat 💔 Then his haq jatana, his order for her to get well quickly 😭

How he remembered her "twist wali zindagi" convo and prayed that the ECG lines never become straight... damn 😭

Beautifully written! 👏👏
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Amazing waiting for next update
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Part-3


It was more than three days since guddu gained her consciousness. Now she was shifted to a normal ward from ICU.


Her shoulder was covered with a plaster as it was hurted from the muscles also.


She has to do all her work from her one hand which was her right hand.

In those days she found Akshat completely changed. Now he smiles to her. he helped her without her asking. He was sleeping on the bench outside since last three nights. But doesn't shows this to anyone.


In the afternoon everyone used to come n meet her. But at night only one person is allowed to stay with the patient.


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It was the day when she shifted to the normal ward and it was her dinner time everyone left with a goodbye.


It was only they two.

She was feeling something weird something which she never felt. His presence was making her so happy that she wanted to dance. But her condition didn't allow her to do so.


He came with a bowl of soup in his hands he arranged the table n sat in front of her.


He took out the napkin n tied it on her neck.When she was about to pick the spoon.he stopped her by his hands.

She looked him questioningly he hold the spoon n took it in front of her mouth.she looked him


A-ab kya invitation card print karwaun arre Bhai piyo.


G- Nahi wo ... Aap Kabhi ...


A-to kya jo pahle Kabhi Nahi hua wo abhi BHI Nahi Hoga.


He made her drink the whole bowl of soup. She Denied a little but then drink it.


When he was done he removed the napkin from her neck. Giver her the glass of water n wiped her mouth with his handkerchief.


Their eyes met. He just said


A- thanx for coming back into my life... just for me.


She looked him n found the answer of her most awaited question.


He was teary eyed and a drop of tear felt from her eye he just wiped it n guddan just hugged him.


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It was a week now... in the morning maa came with papa to meet guddan.


M-Kaisa hai Mera bachcha.

G-maa main bilkul thik hu ab mujhe Ghar le chaliye na yahan din bhar bore hote rahti Hu.



G-maa main bilkul thik hu ab mujhe Ghar le chaliye na yahan din bhar bore hote rahti Hu.


Just then he entered the room.


A-Jo mahaan Kam Aapne Kiya hai na guddan jiii us k liye apko do din or rukna Hoga yahan.


She replied in her full nautanki style. Rolling her eyes.


G- do din ... Arrre baaap re... Maaa ham to bore ho ho k pagal ho jayenge.ham do din or Nahi Ruk Sakte yahan pls Akshat jii pls aap Dr. Se Kahiye na ki mujhe discharge Kar de.


He burst out into laughter.


All three were stunned n the very next moment he found a pillow on him. With his all amusement he looked at her the other two persons also looked at her.


G- aapko itni si BHI sharam Nahi aati hame discharge mil chuka hai or aap Yaha mazaak Kar rahe Hain


All three looked at her then Akshat asked.


A- tumhe kaise pata?


G- aap k mazaak k standard Ka andaza lgana seekh gayi Hu main. Kitne bure hote Hain Mr. AJ k PJ. Seriously Akshat jii


A-agar mere PJ itne bure lagte Hain to rho yahi. Hospital me.


G- arree Nahi Nahi... Achcha sorry pls ab Ghar le chaliye naa.


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They entered into the house. Maa did her arti n then she came in.


All the DIL were also happy that she was back.


Everyone left to their respective room.


Guddan came in the room n turned to go out.


Akshat who was behind her asked


A- arre Kaha ja rahi ho.


G-ye kiska room hai


A- arre MERI maa ye hamara hi room hai ab chalo andar.


Akshat just pushed her inside the room.which was used to be dull but now it was fully changed. The colour of room was changed into a bright colour. The curtains were red n white. Those creepy cat statues were removed n there was something on the wall which was covered.


She looked at him


A- surprise hai ...chalo


They came in front of it he Asked her to remove the curtain when she does so


She was at the 7th sky


It was a beautiful collage with their pics.


There was pics of their engagement Sangeet reception party makar sankranti n many more.


She looked at him smilingly he smiled her back. She just hugged him n said


Thank u soo much.


He hugged her back.


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After some chit chat guddan got up from the bed n started to go towards balcony.


He asked


A- guddan jiii Kahan ja Rahi hai aap


G- ji main sone ja rahi thi balcony me


A- tum chahti ho ki main ye balcony Tudwa du


G- aap aisa kyon bol rahe Hain.


A- wo kya hai na ki tum ko Shayad balcony Kuch zyada hi Pasand AA gayi hai. Magar main ye kaise bhool jaun ki tumhare hath me plaster hai tumhare liye ek bed fit Karwa deta hu balcony me isiliye poocha balcony ko Tudwa k uska size badhwa deta hu. Kya kahti ho???


At this she burst out into laughter came near to him on the bed pushed him at the other side n said


G-mujhe right side me sone ki aadat hai aap USS side par soiye jaa k..


When they slept she slightly moved towards him n gave him a side hug.


He didn't resist n they slept peacefully in each others arms.


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In the morning when she woke up she found Akshat was not in the room. He just then arrived with a cup of tea.


A-good morning mrs. Jindal

G- GM Mr. Jindal..



G- GM Mr. Jindal..


He handed her the cup of tea.


A- ye lijiye aap ki chai. Pee k bataiye kaisi hai.


She sipped the tea.a broad smile came on her face n she looked at him n was about to say something


A- revati ne bataya tha ki tumhe adrak or ilaichi ki chai bahut Pasand hai.


He got up from the bed hold her n said


A- chalo ab chai ho gayi hai na Jaldi se utho or jaa k Naha lo.. or suno door lock  mat Karna..


G- kyooonnn...


A- sath me aa k company dunga tumhe...


G- kyaaa...


A- arre yarrr hath me fracture hua hai agar gir gayi to ... isiliye do not lock the door.ok


She nodded in a yes n then went to take bath.


Akshat was waiting for her to come out but he heard a wince of pain he went near the door of Washroom n asked


A- guddan tum thik ho naa?? ...


G- aan... Ha ham to thik hai magar ye dress kaise pahne ...aaah..


He understands the problem as her could not move completely


A- guddan main madad Karu kya??


G-kya aap ... Hmmm... Ok... Ek min ha ... Ha ab AA jaiye.


Hearing this he stepped inside hesitantly his heart skipped a bit when he saw her she was covered with a bathrobe over her dress the wetness of her hairs was enlighting her innocent beauty.


He reached near her. He asked


A- may I...


Saying this he covered his eyes by her hand n made her wear the dress. After it they came outside.


He helped her in tying the belt on her shoulder.


He made her sit in front of the dressing table. He combed her hairs.


His hands reached to the sindoor dibbi he picked it. Guddan looked into his eyes.


A- main waada karta Hu tumse ki iss rishtey ko poori imaandari se nibhaunga. I promise you that...


Saying this he applied sindoor in guddan's maang.


She looked him with alll her love.


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Agle update hogi Kuch pyaar bhare lamho k naam.


Till then stay tuned.


Love u alll

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Posted: 5 years ago
#29
Nice update
Update the next part soon
Edited by KajalTiwari - 5 years ago
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#30

So cute akshat ji ne dil jeet liya

Update soon kavya