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That. Was. Amazing👏
So there's smthng I'd like you to know- you are improving😃
As far as my skills say, u hv improved by leaps and bounds, in your writing style and vocab usage
Keep up the good work😃
Originally posted by: nish_vir
That. Was. Amazing 👏
So there's smthng I'd like you to know- you are improving😃As far as my skills say, u hv improved by leaps and bounds, in your writing style and vocab usageKeep up the good work😃
Part-2
Akshat ran in the corridor of the hospital while guddan was in his hands. all other members also rushed towards the same direction.
The doctor came n they took guddan on the strecher towards the OT.
Akshat just thud himself on the chair nearby the OT door. His heart was haunted by the demons of his life's most cursing wish.
He closed his eyes.
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He found himself in the memory land of his wife. Yes his wife whom he never accepted as his wife.
He remembered the very first day of their marriage
"Tum Soch BHI Nahi Sakti ki main. Kahan Kahan aag laga Sakta Hu"
What he said on shweta's attack day
"Shayad hi Kabhi ham mile ya hamari Soch mile".
The day when she was doing KC
"Kyon itna pareshan Kar rahe Hain aap hame"
The day of dhanteras
"Hame pata tha ki madad karenge aap do rupaye ki or akad dikhayenge do hazaar ki"
The day of Christmas
"Aap Sahi kahte Hain ki dimag se liye faisle hi Sahi sabit hote Hain"
"Aisa Nahi Hota guddan dimag Ka har kaam Sahi Nahi Hota." He thought in his mind he was back to senses when dr.came out of OT.
Dr- Mr Jindal aapki wife ko goli Dil k Kafi nazdeek lagi hai. Kafi khoon BHI bah chuka hai. Unki Jaan ko khatra hai.shayad wo...
A- listen Dr. Abhi to Apne ye kah Diya magar dobara mat boliyega. Do whatever u want to do call the specialist do what u need but MERI biwi ko Kuch Nahi hona chahiye.kuch BHI Nahi samajhe aap.
Dr.- Ji sir aap is consent form par sign Kar dijiye.
When he was about to sign he got the flashback of his vachan.
"Main apni bahuon ki nayi SAAS se unki Umar BHI mang Lunga ab agar iss Umar me shadi hogi to nibhane ko waqt b to Chahiye na"
He shrugged this thought n signed on the form.
Dr- sir jab tak ham operation ki taiyyari Kar rahe Hain aap Unse mil Sakte Hain.
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Akshat stepped inside the OT. He sits on the stool which was there.
He moved his hand on the bed came closer to hers he hesitated a bit but then hold it.
He looked on her face she was sleeping peacefully the life support system was attached to her body.
A feeble smile came on his lips.he hold her hand by his both hands now n said.
A- mujhe hamesha lagta tha ki jab upar wale ne tumhe banaya to tumhare andar power off ya mute Ka button dalna bhool Gaya kya. Jab b tum mujhse jhagda Karti mujhe Kuch na Kuch sunati to mujhe lagta tha ki tum chup kyon Nahi hoti.
Magar aaj jab tum Yaha is tarah khamosh Leti ho na to mujhe chain Nahi AA Raha guddan. Mera dimag Baar Baar mujhse yahi kah raha hai ki kash upar wala uss remote k power off button ko hi Nikal de or tum hamesha aise hi mere sir par halla Karti Raho mujhe chillati Raho.
Pata hai USS din jab mere b day pr Maine vachan liye the apni bahuon ki saas k liye.maine socha tha ki un vachano ko poori Tarah se nibhaunga. Magar jab se tum MERI Zindagi me aayi mujhe pata Nahi kyon magar Mera har wo wachan khokhla or bematlab lagne laga .
Mujhe Lagta tha ki mujhe Kisi b cheez ki aadat Nahi padti.magar main galat tha.dheere dheere hi Sahi mujhe aadat hone lagi mere Ghar me khushiyan dekhne ki, mere Ghar me hansi ki goonj ki, mere maa k chehre ki usi Purani muskurahat ki, mere kamre me nayi cheezon ki, mere kamre me naye rangon ki, Mere chehre per hansi ki, MERI Khushi ki, MERI Zindagi ki ...
Mujhe aadat hone lagi..tumhari.
Or ab tum chahti ho ki main USS aadat ko chhod du. So for your kind information mrs.guddan Akshat Jindal, ki aap k pati Akshat Jindal ko Kabhi Kisi ki aadat lagti Nahi hai lekin jab aadat lag Jaye to na wo USS adat ko chhodta hai or na hi USS adat ko Khud ko chhodne deta hai.
MERI har BAAT ki Tarah iss BAAT ko b chupchaap Mano. Or Jaldi se thik ho k AA jao.
Saying this he touched her hand to his cheeks.n left away.
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It was two n half hour the operation was still going on. Akshat was sitting on the chair in the corridor. Just then Dr came he ran to him n asked
A- doc MERI biwi kaisi hai ab??
Dr- I m sorry Mr. Jindal hamne goli to Nikal li hai magar un k immunity system ne un k ghavon ko bharna shuru hi Nahi Kiya. Aisa Lagta hai Jaise wo jeena chahti hi Nahi un k jeene ki ichchaa khatam ho gayi ho. Un k pass jeene ki koi wajah hi na bachi ho.
Akshat just sat down with a thud. He recalled his wife was telling on the day when they was arguing about the bedsheet.
"Agar Zindagi ki sadak me mod or twist na ho to Zindagi kitni boring ho jayegi"
He replied to her
"Zindagi seedhi hi achchi Hoti hai aadi tedi lines Ka Zindagi me koi role Nahi Hota."
He rushed to her in the room ECG was showing lines moving.
He hold her hand with his one hand caressed her head n said
"Aaj in lines ko seedha mat kijiyega bhagwaan please. Main ab samajh paya hu ki Zindagi me tedhi lines ki important kya hai"
He dug his face on the bed. Just then he found a hand caressing his head he moved his head up n saw it was maa.
A- maaa kyon??... Mere sath hi kyon...
Main janta hu ki Maine ise bahut sataya hai bahut rulaya hai magar uska badla ye mujhse aise kyon le Rahi hai.
Main janta hu maa ki ye mujhse kahin na Kahi pyaar Karne lagi hai. Magar main isse bahut pahle se pyaar Kar chuka Hu. Main janta hu ki aaj tak jis k b kareeb Gaya wo mujhse door ho gaya. Pahle antara or ab ye...
Main jab kahne wala tha ki ye MERI Zindagi hai Mera pyaar hai MERI khushi hai tabhi tabhi Aapke kanha ko isse chheen na tha mujhse..
Maa mujhe ye chahiye.. mujhe MERI Zindagi chahiye..mujhe MERI guddan Chahiye maa... Main mar jaunga is k Bina ...
Saying this he hugged his mother.
Maa caressed his head n said
M- bahut pyaar karta hai na isse to ussi pyaar se bula usse. Dekh Lena kahin Nahi jayegi wo.
Usse rukne ki wajah to de wo Nahi jayegi tujhe chhod Kar..
Akshat wiped his tears. Turned to her
Caressed her head holded her hand.n said
A- guddan ... Guddan.. mat jao na yaarr pls. I need u... Abhi to hamare kitne jhagde Baki h. Tumhe maa k sath mil k mujh se pata Nahi kya kya betuke kaam karwana hai. Tumhe or maa ko mil k mujhe pareshan Karna hai.
Hame hamari Zindagi sath bitani hai guddan.uth jao plss...
The next sound was the melodious tune to his ears. He heard her saying
G- Ak..Akshat...
She was back for him for his love his life was back.
He just caressed her cheeks. She tried to smile.
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Sorry for the late update I was busy in a wedding now I m back.
Next update me janiye hamare Romeo Akshat babu ko.
Till then bane rahiye...
Love you alll
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