Munal n ragnan: pyar dosthi hai upd part 11 - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

75

Views

7113

Users

13

Likes

94

Frequent Posters

taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#41
Fantastic and so Beautiful story 
I'm totally enjoying this story thus far
taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#42
Will be waiting for the next chapter 
honeyrosid-6 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 0 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 5 years ago
#43
Tq fr cmnt guys
Next part

One day 
Kunal n mouli r  njying with friends
Mouli: buddie plz teach me how to whistle 
Kunal : y yar...suddenly
Mouli: arey yar ..In 15 mins freshers event is starting...I too want to whistle like u guys do
Kunal: ok ok...Will teach...
He showed how to keep fingers round 
n told her to keep below her tongue n asked her blow air
She tried bt it didnot work out
Kunal: arey mouli dont give up..Try try try
Mouli is triying
Bt its vein
Mouli: uff nahi ho payegi...thak chuki hai yar
She said with little disappointment
He cant able to c her like this
Kunal went towards her
He circled his finger n took them towards her lips
Mouli looked at him confusingly
He signed her to open her mouth
Mouli opened as per his order
Kunal kept his fingers inside her mouth n asked her to blow air
Mouli felt butter flies in her sto much
Mouli did like wat he said
Shockingly whistle came with big sound
Mouli got big smile
Mouli: kunal i got it
She hugged kunal happily
Kunal to hugged her
At that time peon came
Peon: kunal n mouli principal is calling u both
Kunal n mouli looked at each other
Kunal: lets go n c y he called us
Mouli; ok
They both went to principal room
Kunal n mouli: good evening sir
Principal: good evening both...
Munal: sir ...peon told u called us
Principal: yeah ..Need some help frm both
Munal: wat v have to do sir
Principal: u know na today rohan dance performance is there...He is dancing star in our clz...Literally all r waiting fr his performance...Bt he called me now n said he is not well so he can't able to come...Now if students get to know he is not coming ...They vl disappoint...So u both should give such aperformance..So that student frgt abt rohan
Mouli n kunal shocked
Kunal: bt sir...How it is possible that too with in this short span
Mouli: yes sir...How can v
Principal: yeah it's short span..Bt i know u both can manage
Kunal: sir bt v can't sir...
Principal : plz kunal n mouli..Plz do some thing..
Mouli felt bad cing his pleading face
Mouli: ok sir v vl do...U don't worry
Principal smiled
Kunal shocked
Kunal: arey mouli how can v do yar
Mouli hold his hand n took him out
Mouli: v have to do kunal ..Atleast fr our sir
Kunal: u vl b happie if v do this
Mouli nodded as yes
Kunal: then any thing fr.my mouli happiness
Mouli smiled
Kunal: let's go
Event started
Kunal n mouli reached the stage
Bt still they confused to do
They trying to manage by creating some funny moments
All r njying
Bt all r shouting fr dance performance
Mouli n kunal didn't understand wat to do
They r looking at each other
Crowd: v want dance...v want dance
At that time they heard voice

Koi mil gaya
Koi mil gaya
Koi mil gaya

Kunal n mouli n all students looked in that direction
They saw nandini coming on the stage from back side with guitar in her hand
Kunal n mouli r excited
Nandini came to him 
She gave guitar to him n signed then to join. Her
Kunal took guitar n started playing it
N he started singing along with dance
Mouli n nandini joined him
Mujhko kya hua hai

Kyon main kho gaya hoon
He sang looking into nandini eyes

Paagal tha main pehle 

He sang looking towards mouli
Mouli smiled
She rubbed his hair with her hand

Ya ab ho gaya hoon
Behki hai nigahein 
Aur bikhre hain baal
Tumne banaya hai
Kya apna ye haal
He took nandini hands n started dancing
N later he took mouli hands n danced with her
Koi mil gaya
Koi mil gaya
Mera dil gaya
Now three of them danced together 

Kya bataoon yaaron
Kya bataoon yaaron
Main to hil gaya
Main to hil gaya
Koi mil gay mil hi gaya
Mil gaya hey mil hi gaya
Mil gaya

Mujhko kya hua hai
Arre kyon main kho gaya hoon
Ay paagal tha main pehle 
Ya ab ho gaya hoon
Behki hai nigahein 
Aur bikhre hain baal
Tumne banaya hai
Kya apna ye haal
Koi mil gaya koi mil gaya
Mera dil gaya mera dil gaya

Kya bataoon yaaron
Kya bataoon yaaron
O main to hil gaya
Main to hil gaya
Koi mil gay 
Mil hi gaya mil gaya
Mil hi gaya mil gaya
Now all students joined them
Even faculty came to stage n joined them
They started dancing
Kunal n nandini dancing intently
Mouli who saw this felt bad
She got tears
She rushed from there
She went to play ground area n started crying
At that time she found some one holding her shoulder
She looked the owner of person
( He he kunal nahi)
Mouli: riya
Riya: wat r u doing here mouli...N y r u crying
Mouli hugged her
Mouli: i don't know y riya...I can't able to c this
Riya: wat u saw
Mouli : i can't able to c him with any one...Including nandini..Ya nandini is my bestie bt still i can't c her with my kunal ..I don't know y
Riya smiled 
Riya: buddhu that is called love... n every lover is possessive like u only
Mouli: bt i feel kunal likes nandu
Riya: uff yar...He just danced with her doesn't mean he like her r love her...U r just thinking too much
He loves u only...I can c his love fr u in his eyes
Mouli: really
Riya: ha baba

Mouli hugged her 
Mouli : tq so much yar

Riya: no tqs between friends
Mouli smiled
Riya: ok let's go ...Otherwise ur kunal vl b tensed if he didn't find u beside him

They left the place
They saw kunal who is searching.fr mouli
Riya : c how ur hero is searching fr u...I said na
Mouli smiled
Kunal saw them
He rushed to them
Kunal: arey mouli wr u went leaving me...U don't how much I tensed...wr u went without telling  me
Riya: arey i only took her ..To eat golgappa..Can't i take my friend
Kunal : ha u can very well take...Bt along with her u should.also take me...I can't allow u take her without me..I can't live without her beside me
Mouli felt so happie
Riya: ok baba frm now on if I want to go out with her...I vil take u both 
Kunal: that's good

Next day
Kunal n his gang chit chatting
Guy: arey yar wr is ur fevistick
Kunal looked at them confused
Guy: ur mouli
Kunal smiled
Kunal: oh...She told she vl come late..She has some work
At that time nandini came
Kunal eyes brightened by cing her
Nandini: can i join 
Kunal: ofcourse
They r chitchatting
At that time they heard voice of guy in their gang 
Guy: omg beautiful
All saw in that direction
They saw.mouli who is red saree coming.towards her
She is struggling with saree 
N with that heals
Kunal n nandini surprised
All guys looking at her without blinking their eyes
Kunal to mesmerized by her beauty
Bt mouli who is struggling with her heals fell down
She shouted with pain
Kunal: mouli
Kunan rushed to her
Kunan helped her to stand
Kunal mouli r u fine
Mouli: muy leg is paining yar
Kunal took her in arms n kept her in chair
He hold her foot
Nandu brought spray
He applied spray 
N massaged her feet
Mouli saw tears in hos eyes
Mouli: kunal it's ok..Nothing happened yar
Kunal: thum chup...bilkul chup...Wat is the need of this yar...c becz of this u got hurt...n i already said fr u no need wear sarees n prove ur beautiful...When u r not habituated with all this...y to do all these adventures
Mouli felt happe fr his concern
She slowly stud up

She kept her finger on his lips
Mouli: kunal..Plz yar...Stop ur scolding...First of all I'm.angry at u
Kunal: y 
Mouli: u didn't say how i am
Kunal : i thought u already understud by looking into my eyes
Mouli smiled
Mouli: bt want to hear from u
Kunal smiled
Kunal: speechless
Mouli hugged him
Nandu who saw this
Abt to go
She was stopped by hold
Yes kunal hold her hand with one hand
Nandu smiled

Mouli in her room
She started dancing crazily
Tum paas aaye yoon muskaraye 
Tumne na jaane kya sapne dikhaye
She slept on bed
Bt she is not gettingsleep
Kunal is coming in her dreams
She sat on bed holding her pillow
Ab to mera dil jaage na sota hai 

Kya karoon haye kuchh kuchh hota hai 

Kunal is dreaming nandini coming to her
N kissing him
Na jaane kaisa ehsaas hai 
Bujhti nahin hai kya pyaas hai 
Kya nasha is pyaar ka 

Nandini is dreaming kunal hugging her from side n kissing her

Mujhpe sanam chhane laga 
Koi na jaane kyon chein khota hai 
Kya karoon haye kuchh kuchh hota hai 


Kya rang layi meri dua 
They both prayed fr their love should be success

Ye ishq jaane kaise hua 
Becheiniyon mein mann 
Na jaane kyon aane laga 
Tanhai mein dil yaadein sanjota hai
Kya karoon haye kuchh kuchh hota hai

They three decided to confess their love to their love

Recap
Kunal:Ha mouli im realised im in love with nandini...Today i decided to confess her

Mouli heart broken 
She left place
She started crying badly: meri pehla pyar adhura rah gayi

Nandu:raghav..I have to say some thing
Raghav himself : ik m waiting fr ur confessions
Nandu: i love kunal

Raghav shocked

Riya - Adah khan
Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 5 years ago
jasminerahul thumbnail
Anniversary 18 Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 0 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 5 years ago
#44

Maunal whistle scene was romantic.loved kunal saying anything 4 mauli's happiness.i just loved manual kunan koi mil gaya dance.i liked how you described the scenes of the song. Poor mauli felt sad seeing kunan dance.loved riya consoling her.loved her dialogues too.surprised to know that riya is Ada Khan.happy that u cast ada in a positive role.many writers cast her in negative role.But I feel ada deserves positive roles.I loved kunal saying how much worried he was without seeing mauli n telling riya that he cant live without mauli so wherever riya takes mauli she should take him too.wow Mauli wore red saree  n kunal was lost in her beauty.so romantic.loved mauli falling down n kunal helping her to get up...putting spray on her leg n massaged her leg.loved kunal telling mauli that she doesn't have to wear saree to prove her beauty.loved him saying that he thought she wud understand from his eyes  how he finds her new look n saying speechless.i liked this scene more than the real scene from d movie where everyone teased Anjali.Kunal holding nandini's hand stopping her from going is romantic.when I saw the movie I hadn't noticed this part properly.but in a magazine some college students said that srk holding tina's hand when she was about to go during Rahul anjali hug scene was very romantic.that time only I noticed that part.loved the tum paas aye song sequence.liked how u described it.it was romantic.wish u had shown raghav's dream too in the song tum paas.interesting precap.cant wait

What dress does Nandini wear in this story?Modern or traditional?

Do u have any plan to introduce pari mishti  n ishan in this ff?

sharda_123 thumbnail
Anniversary 8 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago
#45
Awesome superb nice update dear
Thanks for pm
gopsss thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#46
Superb update dear👏!!! Aww MuNal scene... Kunal taught Mouli to whistle😳❤️... MuNalDini performance... Mouli felt bad as Nandini n Kunal were together... Mouli wore saree to show Kunal... Kunal's concern for Mouli❤️... Oh precap... It increased my curiosity... Loved it to the core dear... Eagerly waiting for next part... Thanks for the PM...
Linsie thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 8 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 5 years ago
#47

awesome update...👏
kavitha_r thumbnail
Anniversary 18 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 5 years ago
#48
Kunal teaching Mouli to whistle was romantic. Mouli loves Kunal but is broken-hearted to see him with her bestie Nandini. Loved Kunal's concern for Nandini. Shocking that Kunal & Nandini are in love with each other.
taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#49
Just Fabulous and so Interesting Chapters 
Linsie thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 8 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 5 years ago
#50

Beautiful update
Thanks for the pm..