Thank you for your precious feedback. Sure I will continue iff you promise to be my critique forever.Originally posted by: captainplus
waiting to see how AJ apologizes & what follows next 😊
continue soon dear 😳
Thank you for your precious feedback. Sure I will continue iff you promise to be my critique forever.Originally posted by: captainplus
waiting to see how AJ apologizes & what follows next 😊
continue soon dear 😳
No I don't worry about comments but as I am writing for very first time I thought it to be an disaster .and don't feel bad as guddu there is a twist with guddu's family but for it u will have to read story and give ur feedback as well and parv toh yahaan bhi kamina hi banegaa. now I seriously have to think hard that how Aj will apologise as all aer waiting for it and I haven't thought about it honestly. Thank you so much! keep showering love.and I will continue it don't worry.Originally posted by: Secretfollower2
Just read all 5 chapters..you should continue dear..dont worry about comments..is forum ki thodi si yahi problem hai ki views jyada hote hain but comments kam because there is less active members and more silent members😕
Coming 2 point feeling bad guddan have no family.pervy ne yhan bhi creep vali harkat ki..he is a creepster😆 waitingthat how aj will apolize in hus own styleYou described all characters in their right places durga is also like a j like a headmaster😉Beautifully written.continue soon😳
Abhi se 20-25 tarikh baad kya hoga After 20-25 I will be a goongi member for sometime.Originally posted by: kayafever
Gayatri intehaan ho gayi intezaar ki update soon
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