Originally posted by: AnjuRish
so hearfelt
please add a SSS/FF/OS as the case maybe please :) so that more people read this beautiful story
WOW.
This was just so beautiful and touching ❤️
It was so real. It was such a treat to read/get to know Zara's inner turmoil after the emotional roller-coaster that Kashmir was.
I loved reading this piece.
Keep writing.🤗
Such a beautifully developed story. Loved it 😳
Please write more
TANU!!!!
This was exactly what I meant!Omg yaar it was breathtakingly beautiful...👏Thank you so much for writing THIS! I'm hoping ull continue but I know uve got examsBravo!👏
Originally posted by: laibaali9
Damn! This was one beautifully written piece, and loved how Zara climbed outta the window, typical angered-Zara behaviour! 😆
Also, the hints of Zara jealousy added the realistic touch to it, and Kabeer's care and concern for Zara would never not make me melt! ☺️Now I'd be eagerly looking forward to reading more of such One-shots by you, but I understand the exam pressure building up, so best of luck!
Originally posted by: MsChanadlerBong
Aww! Such a beautiful piece. You should write more!
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