Is Dard-E-Dil Ki Sifarish RaGa SS epilogue-pg30

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Is Dard-E-Dil Ki Sifarish...Recommendation for the painful heart Introduction

This is inspired by the show Mohi.Its originally written on another couple.But converted it for my sweet friend Mansi.



Indravadan Singh Deo  :A business man.But his passion is photography.


Tej Singh Deo  and Jhanvi Singh Deo :Loving parents of Indravadhan,Dev and Vicky.

Bhagyavanti Devi Singh Deo :Mother of Tej and a loving grand mother.

Dev Singh Deo  and Naintara:Dev is the eldest brother of Indravadhan.He is a business man and a nice homely person.
Naintara is Dev's wife and Indravadhan's loving sister in law.

Vicky Singh Deo :Indravadhan's youngest brother.College going and a fun loving person.

Anvesha Banerjee:Vicky's girl friend in college.

Naina Batra:Indravadhan's fiancee.An engineer.

Roshan Batra:Naina's father.

Asha Batra:Naina's stylish mother who is a fashion designer.

Gayatri Handa:A dark village girl who is white at heart.

Damyanti Handa:Mother of Gayatri.




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First of all congrats on ur new SS n thank u so much for writing it specifically for me 🤗nice n intriguing CS it's surprised to see Tej and Jhanvi as Indravadhan, Vicky and Dev's parents 😳but u didn't showed who will play their grandmother 😕WOW Rubina as Dev's wife n Vicky too got a GF another surprise is here Drashti is having two roles- Naina who is fiancee of Indra 😳n Gayatri who is a village girl 😊eagerly waiting for it's first part 
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WOW very happy to see my fav actress as Dadi 🤗
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Thx a lot.Dev's wife Naintara was done by 2 actresses in GHSP.But I thought 4 a change I will use his real gf Rubina as NT.
 

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First of all congrats on ur new SS n thank u so much for writing it specifically for me 🤗nice n intriguing CS it's surprised to see Tej and Jhanvi as Indravadhan, Vicky and Dev's parents 😳but u didn't showed who will play their grandmother 😕WOW Rubina as Dev's wife n Vicky too got a GF another surprise is here Drashti is having two roles- Naina who is fiancee of Indra 😳n Gayatri who is a village girl 😊eagerly waiting for it's first part 

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thx a lot.Dev's wife Naintara was done by 2 actresses in GHSP.But I thought 4 a change I will use his real gf Rubina as NT.

 

My pleasure 🤗I didn't knew that...Thank u for telling me 😊but I really loved ur choice of using his current GF 😃
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Awesome start.
Loved the introduction of all the characters.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Is Dard-E-Dil Ki Sifarish...Recommendation for the painful heart Part1

I dedicate this part to Mansi as a birthday gift


It was a beautiful village named Bhavanapuri.It's more like a forest.

Birds were flying.Small animals enjoyed on grass.
A dark complexioned middle aged lady was working in the open area.She was Damyanti.
"Gayatri".
Gayatri came running.
"Maa".
Damyanti:Why did you become late Gayatri?Did you supply milk?

Gayatri:Yes Maa.
Damyanti and Gayatri work in the rice fields and also sell milk.
Damyanti:Why do you look dull Gayatri?
Gayatri was gloomy:Maa...some people are still teasing me.

Damyanti:Don't get hurt Gayatri.Even I was taunted by people for my dark skin when I was young.Dark complexion does'nt make anyone ugly.You are pretty though dark.
She smiled:Really Maa?Am i pretty?
Damyanti:Yes Gayatri.You are pretty.
Gayatri ran towards the mirror and looked at it with a smile.
Gayatri:Maa...were you also pretty during your younger days?
Damyanti blushed:Your father used to say that i am pretty.
Gayatri:Guess he was flattered by your looks?
Damyanti blushed:Ya.He found my dark skin shiny.
Gayatri:Then why did he leave you Maa?
Damyanti became dull.

Damyanti:I don't know Gayatri.He married me in the temple.We were living together happily.But his mother fell ill and he went back promising to come back soon.But He never came back.People say that rich men cheat poor village women like us as there are many other women too in our village like that.But I won't believe that your father cheated me.He must have been forced to leave me.He loved me a lot.I am sure that he has not cheated me.
Gayatri:Yes Maa.My father can't cheat a nice lady like you.
Damyanti:I hope you won't face my fate.I am praying for that.I am sure that God will hear my prayer and give you a nice husband.Yes Gayatri..you will get a Prince who treats you like a Princess and those who made fun of your dark skin will not be able to face you.
Gayatri blushed.
She asked innocently:Really Maa?Will I get the Prince of my dreams?
Damyanti caressed her:Yes Gayatri.You will get.
Gayatri blushed.




A beautiful house...
Indravadan got ready and came for break fast.
Indravadan:Break fast is not ready?
Jhanvi:Indravadan...the table is full of different dishes.

Indravadan:Mom...you know that my taste is different.
Vicky:Only Naintara bhabhi can make Indravadan bhai's favourite breakfast.

Everyone smiled.
Naintara came with pancake:Here is your pancake Indravadan.
Indravadan:Wow..thank you bhabhi.
Indravadan tasted it:Yummy.
NT:But after your marriage I won't cook for you.Naina will make nice pancake for you.
Indravadan blushed.
Bhagyavanti:I can't wait for Naina to come here as the daughter in law.



Indravadan murmured:I too can't wait.
While serving breakfast Dev held Naintara's hand romantically.Naintara gave him a stunned look.
He winked at her.
NT whispered:Others will see.
Dev gave her a naughty smile.

Naintara pinched his hand.
Dev took off his hand.She smirked.
Tej:Indravadan..so today you are leaving for photography?
Indravadan:Yes dad.I am going to the Village Bhavanapuri.I need to take the best photographs for the international photography competition.



Tej:That's really good.All the best beta.

Indravadan:Thank you dad.
Jhanvi:Before going you will be visiting Naina.Right?
Bhagyavanti:What's the need of asking that?Indravadan will definitely visit his beloved Naina.
Indravadan blushed while all others smiled.


Naina got ready in a salwar suit.
Her mother Asha:What have you worn?You know that Indravadan is coming here.Why don't you dress up well?

Naina:Is'nt it neat mom?
Asha:It's not at all stylish and it looks traditional.Why don't you wear modern dress?
Her dad Roshan:Oh Asha...Naina is not a fashion designer like you.So she won't be as stylish as you.Let her what she likes.What difference does it make?


Asha:It makes difference.She is my daughter,so people expect some style statement from her.I designed so many nice dresses for her.
Naina:I do wear them mom.You know that.But i can't wear them to the office.Right?I need to go to office after meeting Indravadan.
Roshan:Exactly.
Asha:I am not arguing with father daughter.
Suddenly Indravadan reached there.They all smiled.
Roshan:Welcome Indravadan.Ready for the journey?
Indravadan:Yes Uncle.
Asha:Indravadan..you tell Naina to dress well.
Indravadan:Whatever she wears she looks beautiful.
Naina blushed.Indravadan and Naina exchanged romantic glances.
Roshan Asha smiled.They both walked away giving them privacy.
Indravadan:Naina..today I am leaving.I will miss you.
Naina:All the best Indravadan.Do well.
Indravadan:Your support is my strength.
He held her hand.They shared a sweet eye lock.



Indravadan travelled to Bhavanapuri.
Gayatri was walking through the green forest area.She saw some men staring at her with their lusty eyes.
She gave them an angry glare and walked.They came in front of her.
They:How can you ignore us?No one will even look at the ugly dark girl like you.But we are willing to adore your skin.
Gayatri fumed with anger:Cheee...I don't want anyone to adore my skin to fulfil their lusty needs.Dirty people!



She tried to walk away.But they pulled her towards them:How can you just go like that?
Gayatri bit their hands and ran.They chased her.Gayatri was scared:God..please save me.
Indravadan who reached there saw this and started fighting with the goons punching them.


They ran away.
Gayatri looked at him smiling.
Gayatri:He is a real Prince who saved me.
Gayatri remembered Damyanti telling that she will meet her Prince one day.
Gayatri blushed:Is he my Prince?
Indravadan walked towards Gayatri:Are you ok?
Gayatri was not taking her eyes off him.
Indravadan noticed her face.He was stunned.
He thought:Why do I feel that she resembles Naina?Only the complexion is different.

 

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First of all thank u so much Jazzy for dedicating this part to me as a birthday gift 🤗Very beautifully written ❤️Loved Damyanti n Gayatri's bonding 😳Loved how she explained to her daughter 👍🏼Sad her father left them 😔Even I think he was forced to, but 😒Lovely bonding between Indravadhan n Naintara 😳How cool before leaving he went to meet Naina 😳Her mom wants her to wear only stylish clothes 🤔Loved the cute scene between IndraIna How cheap this people are 😡Good Gayatri bite on their hand n ran away 👍🏼Loved to see Indra fighting with them Gayatri thinking him to be her prince charming as she fell in love with him at first sight He is confused as her face is similar to Naina 😕Are they sis or step sis or some twist 😕
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Introduction & part 1 was Fabulous...Eagerly waiting for update... & Thanks for the pm.
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Interesting character sketch dear 
Interesting start 
Loved it!! 
Gayatri was waiting for entry of her prince charming in her life. Rana and Naina are in love with each other. Rana comes across Gayatri and is stunned to see her.
Nice pics !
Thanks for the pm !
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