A scene after their wedding - updated on page 16 - Page 4

maza agya

Beautiful update! Eagerly waiting for the next one :)

Originally posted by: SS88

@bookworm

What''s your name ?That is , if you don't mind.

Rula diya yaar. I know I'm going to cry buckets on Wednesday too, but aapne to pehle hi rula diya.

Originally posted by: Push-pull

This is so overwhelming and heart touching.. Loving the way Asfi is taking it slowly with her and letting her be.. Giving her thr time she needs.. Finally when she's gonna open up crying she's not gonna regret it.. She'll embrace life all over again.. For all thT she deserves..

Originally posted by: SanFrangirl

@bookworm123, please dont stop. I am like literally hanging on to your words.

Beautifully written and somehow I think this is how the scene is going to pan out on this Wednesday.

Wow you pack so much talent.

Please , please, phir kya hua???

Originally posted by: masooma98

Another beautiful update! You convey their emotions so beautifully it feels real. Please do write more, love it!

This update is really overwhelming and and touched my heart,.❤️ You nailed their emotions, so perfect fitting to their characters. Love the way Asfi is giving her space, Poor Zubia, had tears in my eyes, she needs a big hug.. You penned all the emotions so beautifully, Please do write soon, I can not wait to read what's next. Thanks so much for this lovely chapter..🤗

Originally posted by: fanraya

Wow👏Absolutely beautiful, loved it so much, already read two times, you have conveyed their emotions so well, had tears in my eyes, please do continue, I d love to read more, next part of the conversation, loved the way you kept the characters intact, Asfand is such an amazing guy, hopefully we get something like this in the drama too,

Originally posted by: --HiNa--

Tell me you don't want to marry me", he said.

"I do not want to get married", she responded.

"I did not ask you whether you wanted to get married. Look me in the eye and tell me you do not want to marry me", he insisted.

"This conversation is making me uncomfortable", she said, hoping he would relent. "I am sorry but I need your answer", he said, not sounding sorry at all.

When she did not respond, he removed his glasses and looked at her intently. She tried to look away but could not.

"Zubia, I am sure you know how I feel about you. I don't know when exactly things changed between us but for quite some time now, I have been thinking about you all the time. I..I don't know if I admire you more or adore you more.."

this is soo beautifull <3 <3 this is what asfi would sdo remove his glasses watch her intently <3

loved it please keep it coming ,

Originally posted by: octaverider

Loved how you write Zubiya's fragile side. And this:



Asfi's uncompromising strength.

They really balance each other well.

So beautifully written. But then I always knew you had the writing keera in you! 😆