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Read all the three parts in one go..
very refreshing story.
Keep it up
Continue soon
Originally posted by: shafy_MN
Read all the three parts in one go..
very refreshing story.Keep it upContinue soon
Originally posted by: bahubalifan
Vedant-Saroja...Prince-Cinderella 😳❤️I liked the names you have given them giving me a Jai-Vennela vibe not only them but the entire family maybe they were Jai-Vennela in their last birth that's why when they collided into each other they felt something ?? Cute ! Waiting to know more about Saroja 😉 😆
Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688
Omg what do i say
U ve got me spellboundThat was amazinggg👏Rachna that is so awesome and uve named her saroja and the cindrella touch is simply superbBut cant wait to know whats the past why it has to be kept hidden so much of suspenseLovinggg it❤️
Originally posted by: tweetie19
This was beautiful ☺️ and the similarity to Cinderella made it even more awesome and gave it a fairy tale vibe.
Eager to know who saroja is..can't wait for the next part 😊
Totally totally totally loved it.
Your choice of words are definitely worth a bow. And also the almost rhythmic style you choose to write in.Saroja... was she brought by Gopi mama?Don't people in the house know of her presence?Or is she almost locked away just because of something else? Some events of her past? Or some superstitious beliefs?Update. Sooner than ever.
Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu
Thanks for Update,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊Vedant Cinderella Moment was so Interesting.😊Cinderella Name is Saroja,it was so Nice.😊The way Vedant thinking about Saroja was so Interesting.😊The Flashback Part was so interestingly explained.😊Vedant's Mama said that Saroja is a Guest in their House,it was so Interesting.😊Vedant disturbed on thinking about Saroja,it was so Interesting.😊What is the Mystery about Saroja? Waiting for it.😲The Story is getting So Interesting.😊Please Continue Soon.😊PriyaSweety-Anu
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