Originally posted by: rajkamal02
Good interesting start...sister ah...hmm..lets see...waiting for next
Originally posted by: sarcasticme
Yo! 👏
What a gripping start! Very well coinceived. Very well written. Totally out of the box and I loved the detailing.( I'm already in that musty antique wooden room!)
Many mysteries to unfold.
How did the accident happen?
What was that 'reason' Joy had behind bringing there?
Cause of Mr. Oliver's worry!
Just cannot wait for next! 😲
Originally posted by: RoshiniluvPrAja
res!!
mene sirf strt ka padha...❤️ loved it..hay prabhas n anushka's strynaaki ka will read later
Originally posted by: RyReyFics
Man! What a start! And it's soaked with a lot of mysteries. For starters, how did Anushka end up in that state? Was it really an accident or did someone purposely try to harm her and why? Second, Joy's alibi about Anushka being his cousin sister Shelly - is he trying to hide her from someone? And why? There seems to be more to the mystery? And the breathtaking backdrop of the Himalayas and its surroundings only adds to the mystery. You've set up this story very well! Characters, location, everything! And I can't help but sense that there's something fishy about this guy Oliver! I wonder... is Joy's story about his cousin sister Shelly true after all? He seemed to be in pain when he said that !
Originally posted by: .LovelyDreamer.
Intriguing update re.. Thanks for the PM...cant wait for the next one..Want to know more about Joy , Anushka and who is this Shelly
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