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This is so sweet actually.

Originally posted by: Penfolk

I love you Hasi di! I am so glad if this was what you wanted. And please don't ever be afraid to ask anything to your sister. I love you and keep inspiring me.

Love u too choti.. I was scared bcoz didn't want to mess up with writer's flow... Keep writing... 🤗
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Kaushi <3

Thank you so much for the special dedication! Means a lot! :)

I as a person did buy your original plot anyway. Like I said, the ending you created will be the ending for me as well. But you know what? This 'What If' is something that actually justified your original climax fully. Since I've been looking at your story like a movie, this is something like an anticlimax for me. The Tamil movie 'Vinnaithaandi Varuvaaya' shows something like that too. What actually happened and what would have happened if things had worked differently at one particular moment.

What bothered me the most was not exactly their plight, but the fact that Riha decided to end up marrying someone else like any other girl. While I read the second last chapter I was sure that it was just a blatant lie. I was sure that Riha very well knew she'd have to face a lot rejection,and wouldn't give up so fast. But the very next chapter concluded everything, leaving a lot of things unanswered. And that left me confused.
BUT you just made up for all that with this! :) In this, Riha even justifies their unfortunate deaths on the basis of their undying love!

To me this is not the ending I wanted ( I would have accepted any ending from you ).
To me, this is what made that ending of yours meaningful and complete! 😊 Thank you so much for this!!

PS : Sorry for the late reply, was held up with few personal things :(
All the very best for your exams! Come out in flying colours and continue the Puzzle soon. You've left us hanging on a cliff ! 😭
And I am still greedy for Vivaan Riha flashback moments. 😛 When you're bored or free maybe! :D

~Big Massive Sigh~ Now wasn't that a heart warmer? It's hard to say which ending would have been better. This one definitely is satisfying and warm and probably would have been comforting to a lot of readers. The original ending though sad is powerful. And like I told you before girl, be bold, fearless and write where your heart takes you, that's where the perfect story lies.

Originally posted by: sarcasticme

Kaushi <3

Thank you so much for the special dedication! Means a lot! :)

I as a person did buy your original plot anyway. Like I said, the ending you created will be the ending for me as well. But you know what? This 'What If' is something that actually justified your original climax fully. Since I've been looking at your story like a movie, this is something like an anticlimax for me. The Tamil movie 'Vinnaithaandi Varuvaaya' shows something like that too. What actually happened and what would have happened if things had worked differently at one particular moment.

What bothered me the most was not exactly their plight, but the fact that Riha decided to end up marrying someone else like any other girl. While I read the second last chapter I was sure that it was just a blatant lie. I was sure that Riha very well knew she'd have to face a lot rejection,and wouldn't give up so fast. But the very next chapter concluded everything, leaving a lot of things unanswered. And that left me confused.
BUT you just made up for all that with this! :) In this, Riha even justifies their unfortunate deaths on the basis of their undying love!

To me this is not the ending I wanted ( I would have accepted any ending from you ).
To me, this is what made that ending of yours meaningful and complete! 😊 Thank you so much for this!!

PS : Sorry for the late reply, was held up with few personal things :(
All the very best for your exams! Come out in flying colours and continue the Puzzle soon. You've left us hanging on a cliff ! 😭
And I am still greedy for Vivaan Riha flashback moments. 😛 When you're bored or free maybe! :D

Originally posted by: RyReyFics

~Big Massive Sigh~ Now wasn't that a heart warmer? It's hard to say which ending would have been better. This one definitely is satisfying and warm and probably would have been comforting to a lot of readers. The original ending though sad is powerful. And like I told you before girl, be bold, fearless and write where your heart takes you, that's where the perfect story lies.

Talking about powerful, you have used some very powerful, breathtaking dialogues and phrases in this shot. It simply blew my mind. Some of them being...

I promise to be your kerchief forever... this one was more cute than powerful.

Love doesn't kill... it fills you with the strength of dying together if that be the fate.

If something can go wrong, it will. And things went wrong, on and on and on! Maybe because I never gripped the end of the rope that was slipping off, maybe because I never screamed out loud, STOOOP! Stop hurting me you damn world!

Powerful dialogues, phrases and memorable plots don't come to everyone, only a chosen few are blessed with it, you being one. Never stop writing, and write where your heart takes you, no matter what the ending.

As always, your settings, the way you describe them is perfect. Vivid and colorful. Damn, you always leave me sighing. ~Sigh~

And by the way, all the best for your exams!! Will wait for you to come back with a bang on the Jigsaw Puzzle and much more! ⭐️

Thanku thanku thanku so much for an alternative ending. I was so miffed when you killed them. I mean I know you're the writer and you know the best but I literally wanted to unread the last chapter because I cannot handle that much sadness but you made up for that by giving thos wonderful update. Thanku so much. Keep writing :D

Okay now, this is just because I wanted to write something. Sorry han!😛

Oh wow😭👏

And the biggest hugest thankyou🤗 for writing this