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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome concept dear.
part 1
vivaan is so lonely, and wants to stay that way
felt bad for shruti, but then if she is well aware of his ways, she should keep away, but guess she likes him.

part 2
riha is a doc, and such a humble being on that one...she loves rains like crazy😆.
riha is so full of life.
rajiv is in one sided love with riha and is asking for vivaan's help...oh my..

part 3
wow, riha is so amazing, the whole pull like a magnet and stuff...who thinks like that😊
what was thaat!!...ugh vivaan is so mechanic...but the whole encounter was actually funny.
damn even i keep noticing prabhas's fingers while watching his movies😆...
raajiv is so dead now😆

part 4
vivaan is a good cold man.
what are those nightmares??
hahhahaa...raajiv and riha are so funny
btw who is suhana??

part 5
shruti's mom is riha's patient
and shruti wants riha to come over at her place...yeah she could meet vivaan there.
You may have endured pain in life, but that doesn't really give you much right to pass on the pain."
this is said by shruti for vivaan right
oh and riha and vivaan meet again..that too so soon.
the whole part was so nice..
vivaan is a real mystery

part 6
riha is so affected by vivaan
and raajiv is such a great friend to him
vivaan's life has been so sad...no wonder he believes that he kills people
yeah!!...riha decided to go to shruti's place
oh my!!...so suhana is the girl vivaan loved and she committed suicide...that's sad
and he reads the letter every year 😭

part 7
so shruti and riha are friends even.
shruti is getting engaged to someone else..thats nice, as it is vivaan was always aloof from her.
and riha asked the million dollar question!
well shruti's life with vivaan was great to...
so riha waltzed her way to 2D and vivaan was so funny and chilled out with her.
and riha too is stuborn

part 8
what a part...
riha and vivaan had a good time dancing in rains
and they have decided to be happy strangers

part 9
fabulous part...its amazing
so riha loves vivaan and her mom knows it too...
vivaan has been typical himself even with her.
and finally he decides to tell riha about his past...and its hurtful..its really sad.

part 10
wow...vivaan is so much better after sharing his griefs with riha
they went for a movie...oh wow
but riha fainted...hope shes fine

part 11
awesome part
15 days later, with no vivaan around, and riha still fine.
the whole deal after she fainted was so nice, vivaan is scared for her.
she proposed, he rejected...damn, couldn't remove the fear from his heart and mind.

part 12
so riha planned to get over vivaan and get married to some person
finally vivaan is ready to agree to himself and say that he loves rihaa
he's going to london, awesome

conclusion
damn...am i a sadist to think that something like this would happen..😭
you write awesome, this story is just superb
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sammy4u

awesome concept dear.

part 1
vivaan is so lonely, and wants to stay that way
felt bad for shruti, but then if she is well aware of his ways, she should keep away, but guess she likes him.

part 2
riha is a doc, and such a humble being on that one...she loves rains like crazy😆.
riha is so full of life.
rajiv is in one sided love with riha and is asking for vivaan's help...oh my..

part 3
wow, riha is so amazing, the whole pull like a magnet and stuff...who thinks like that😊
what was thaat!!...ugh vivaan is so mechanic...but the whole encounter was actually funny.
damn even i keep noticing prabhas's fingers while watching his movies😆...
raajiv is so dead now😆

part 4
vivaan is a good cold man.
what are those nightmares??
hahhahaa...raajiv and riha are so funny
btw who is suhana??

part 5
shruti's mom is riha's patient
and shruti wants riha to come over at her place...yeah she could meet vivaan there.
You may have endured pain in life, but that doesn't really give you much right to pass on the pain."
this is said by shruti for vivaan right
oh and riha and vivaan meet again..that too so soon.
the whole part was so nice..
vivaan is a real mystery

part 6
riha is so affected by vivaan
and raajiv is such a great friend to him
vivaan's life has been so sad...no wonder he believes that he kills people
yeah!!...riha decided to go to shruti's place
oh my!!...so suhana is the girl vivaan loved and she committed suicide...that's sad
and he reads the letter every year 😭

part 7
so shruti and riha are friends even.
shruti is getting engaged to someone else..thats nice, as it is vivaan was always aloof from her.
and riha asked the million dollar question!
well shruti's life with vivaan was great to...
so riha waltzed her way to 2D and vivaan was so funny and chilled out with her.
and riha too is stuborn

part 8
what a part...
riha and vivaan had a good time dancing in rains
and they have decided to be happy strangers

part 9
fabulous part...its amazing
so riha loves vivaan and her mom knows it too...
vivaan has been typical himself even with her.
and finally he decides to tell riha about his past...and its hurtful..its really sad.

part 10
wow...vivaan is so much better after sharing his griefs with riha
they went for a movie...oh wow
but riha fainted...hope shes fine

part 11
awesome part
15 days later, with no vivaan around, and riha still fine.
the whole deal after she fainted was so nice, vivaan is scared for her.
she proposed, he rejected...damn, couldn't remove the fear from his heart and mind.

part 12
so riha planned to get over vivaan and get married to some person
finally vivaan is ready to agree to himself and say that he loves rihaa
he's going to london, awesome

conclusion
damn...am i a sadist to think that something like this would happen..😭
you write awesome, this story is just superb


It means a hell lot to me that you read this story. Apart from all stories,this holds a great significance to me being my first pranushka story, and the love these two characters got. I really miss some of the readers to this story who don't visit anymore, but I'm equally glad that I got new readers like you. Vivaan and Riha will always be the closest to my heart no matter how many stories I write. And it gives me immense pleasure seeing people stumble upon them. Thanks for your precious reviews of each chapter.
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