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Gems.musingsRN

@Gems.musingsRN

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#201

Very well written kaushi👏..

Riha is the bravest girl I've ever read about. ..but I thought vivaan would melt but NO BACK to square one.

The moment he pushed riha,I wanted to give a vennela smack to his head and I swear if he goes behind a random girl to keep riha off, I'm going to take an AK47! !and I mean it.

I'm fed up of third angles ruining good stories. .I hope for a change...vivaan pursues riha strongly now...it's time to come out of all the wrong notions.but seriously no other man/woman to break this Soulmates pls. ..

Riha has gone through a lot...and its time for vivaan to make amends..that push was too much!does he realise he's badly breaking her heart every time! Time for redemption and wooing back riha,vivaan!

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#202

Ohhh nooo

Why vihaan why for once once give life a chance

Why???

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tweetie19

@tweetie19

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#203

Vivaan u foolish fellow 😡 u will surely come running back to Riha coz u cannot stay without her 😳

Once again a lovely chapter Kaushi 👍🏼

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bahubalifan

@bahubalifan

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#204

Rihaa !! Don't give up girl!! Go after him !!! 👏

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hasi.83

@hasi.83

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#205

RIHAA 😭 😭 😭

He should realize that she is his destiny and end to all his misery...

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#206

Your giving us a dose of D and S everyday girl...😆can't thank you enough...

like I know how difficult it is to write something (being so creative) every day and update..

you do that for us so thankyouu <3

Noo he can't go back to square one..something has to happen...Riha ko bimaar kar do or

maybe Rajeev trying to knock some sense into him??or even Shruti would do...

Well the hero is in a shell and heroine needs to help him come out of

it and she has been doing it beautifully...like almost succeeded...

but kameena pyaar...he is scared to fall for her now what if destiny takes her away from him..

sad...it is...

Oh I forgot to mention..I loved the staring session in prev part...OPD mein ghooor raha tha Riha ko...😆ahh u come up with such brilliant scenes na and unique...

Waiting for confession or realization from hero's side...thankyou =))

-Laddoo

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Sravya

@sram21

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#207

Well put Pen! Vivaan is more broke inside than I thought! He is not thinking logically.Nothing happened to Riha! Well for Riha , I think she needs to break the myths in him before she make him a normal person, (probably when Vivaan was growing some one ( who disliked Vivaan) might have said something that he killed his parents, that made a deep scar on him..)! anyways I was a little disappointed with how the things turned out here.. but it was obvious from the beginning!

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Bangaram35

@Bangaram35

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#208

@Penfolk

👏👏👏

What a great piece of writing...Please keep up the good work.

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emerald39

@emerald39

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#209

Another brilliant chapter, Kaushi. I knew Vivaan was going to do something like this. Silly fella. Well, I hope he returns to his sense soon, and I hope Riha doesn't give up on him. As always, looking forward to the next update, Kaushi.

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#210

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Part.😊

The way Vivaan worried for Riha was so Nice.😊

Rajeev and Shruti Supported Riha to confess her love to Vivaan,it was so Nice.😊

Vivaan came to meet Riha after fifteen days,it was so Nice.😊

The Dance Part was so Interesting.😊

But this Vivaan didn't look to her Eyes,it was so sad.😭

Riha Confessed his love to Vivaan,it was so Nice.😊

Vivaan don't want to accept,due to his fear.😭

It was so sad to see Riha like this.😭

I Hope everything will be fine.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

PriyaSweety-Anu

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