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Now that was brilliant
A oh my god poor vivaan he has suffered so much pain since chidhood no wonder he doesnt want to ever love again
It ll be really hard for riha to break all those walls and reach dark places to heal him
Originally posted by: bahubalifan
Oh my buffalo !!!! So much pain !!Mother, Father, Guardian and lover all dead so he thinks anyone he loves would leave him and the world so he's distancing himself from all... nooo baby don't do that... Riha has come for you !! She won't leave you !!!! Waiting for Riha to get close to him. Riha should just hug him once and let him keep his head on her lap pour out all his pent up feelings then he will be ok.
Originally posted by: RyReyFics
Girl, where on earth do you get your inspiration from? You continue to amaze me with your writing, part after part! This one was particularly emotional, knowing that Vivaan considers himself responsible for others' short lived existence. It seems that he feels that he's jinxed, that whoever he loves end up losing their lives. No wonder, he's afraid to love or expose his soft, gentle side. Deep down, he has this guilt etched into his heart, a feeling of worthlessness, a strange kind of fear that getting close to someone might endanger them. Oh! Poor Vivaan! How I wish for the universe to prove him wrong. Knowing about Suhaana was heart breaking, the poor girl had a miserable existence and she ended it. How I wish that it never happened. But I see a ray of hope... Riha. Possibly, she is the light at the end of his path. She could probably be the one who'd break down his protective walls and heal his fractured self. As always, great update! This story is amazing. Looking forward to the next.
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