Originally posted by: sweet_diksha
good chapter, Stuti...
but frankly , I hate to read even a word abt Cheapu...if possible plz, finish his character soon..
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Originally posted by: sweet_diksha
good chapter, Stuti...
but frankly , I hate to read even a word abt Cheapu...if possible plz, finish his character soon..
Word Count: 0
Originally posted by: durgeshnandini
Dearest Vanilla Ice cream,
OMG! π² I am vanilla ice-cream! π² πBack to reality, aren't we?! πYes! πSo after all the perilous stunts by the river banks, and long drives on horse back the couple makes it to the war camps, quite unnoticed - reasons obvious π. The hangover of the moon struck tryst, still not gone - quite understandable! π Some more sweet nothings and stuti style innuendos, and mischief - damn enjoyable!π And then voila! Comes the 440 volts jerk back to the world of realistic love - very remarkable! πWhat a crispy description of the whole scene Wow!! Enjoyed it. πHonestly, I didn't quite expect the Samar-Shareef plan to materialise so soon and so flawlessly, that the wine found it's way straight to the Emperor's khema. If Samar has managed all of it, he definitely is something more than a meager pawn, at least, calibre wise!To be honest, I hadn't planned to materialize such an assassination attempt by Samar Singh at this time before. I thought it will be interesting if I can add a masaladar twist at the end of Akdha romance, so added this scene at the last instance of writing. So you might find it hasty, and maybe some loopholes will be there too, but still... πI'm not getting surprised if this scene gets continued as a melodramatic you-saved-my-life-as-a-true-soulmate-does moment between the love birds! Going by your expertise at romance, the idea isn't really sluggish, rather it makes my grey cells salivate at the impending. And if such a thing doesn't materialise, no ill bearings, lady, I will rejoice your flair for frequently going off the beaten track!Do you think I will write something like- "Aapne hume nayi zindegi di...aap na hote to kya hota" type aarti-utarna scene? π It will be all normal, even not a mere thanks-for-saving-me line will be there. πOn a serious observation, the night's adventure has served it's purpose, whatever residuals of ominous foreboding overshadowed their passionate impulse, and darkened their spirit of togetherness has now cleared away like thin wisps of smoke in blue void, never to return again! So all is well in that front.Yes! π³And Fakr my muse, hungry fires of Hell might have clouded her features, but taller she stands than the towers of the Kabul fort, even in the heights of devilry she emnates an aura, a spell cast of awe. She's like the evil omen of Disney princess tales, loathed, feared, a force to reckon with and yet the one you really cannot do without!What a perfect analysis of my Fakhr! @bold: Even I could not imagine these beautiful analogy...βοΈSo now she's receiving secret missives from an unknown friend, who knows to drive the arrow home by a mere salutation! I'm very curious!Don't be so curious... He is a very known person! πWith loads of lovely wishes,Update soon! πThank you so much for such a beautiful review dear!!
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Originally posted by: srivarshini
superb..πππ³ chappy was soo cute...joja romanceπ³π³was soo cute but feeling bad for Suja...
Originally posted by: sweet_diksha
good chapter, Stuti...
but frankly , I hate to read even a word abt Cheapu...if possible plz, finish his character soon..
Wonderful and an intriguing update,Stuti!π
Samar,Sharif,Fakhr..everyone is busy with their own plans for political gain!Just when I thought thank God,Jalal is safe as Jo didn't let him drink the alcohol,you threw Sujamal into suffering.. I hope you don't kill him!π€@BOLD: ummm!!! π π I know it will be sad... but his character should get a proper end. πLoved Fakhr's part and I'm curious to know what happens in Amer and Kabul next! So,pls update soon and thanks for the PM!π
Supurb
Naughty Jalal π angry Jodha
Precap interesting
Update sooon
Thanku
Originally posted by: kartikaJA
fabulous update
love it
Excellent chappy dear
Joja part was awsome
N loved conversation between joja
So jo saved jalal's life unknowingly
I think malika e kabul is a dangerous lady
Precap is scary
Update next chappy soon
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