HOSTAGE

Hey you guys i wanna  start a new fanfic its temporaraly called hostage and i think i might change it kk

 

and guys the fanfic is about anghad and kripa tell me if i should write it kk

ill post a part as soon as possible kk and i think im gonna post a part up in like 1 hour

kk

 

avantika_4ever

latest important notes page---- 20

~PARTS~-

*Part 1- page 1-posted December. 4,2006

*promo- page 2-posted December. 5,2006

*part 2- page 3-posted December. 6,2006

*part 3- page 5-posted December. 9, 2006

*1st part of part 4- page 6-posted Dec.12,2006

*2nd part of part 4- page 8-posted Dec.18,2006 

*part 5- page 10-posted December.26,2006

*part 6- page 11-posted December.27,2006

*part 7- page 12-posted December.28,2006

*part 8- page 13- posted December.29,2006

 

please read page 20 there is a very important message that i posted today and sorry that i couldnt continue today

*part 9- page 16   - posted January.01, 2007

*promo-page-18- posted january. 07,2007

*part 10- page 20- posted january. 19, 2007

Edited by avantika_4ever - 17 years ago

Sweet. This section always encourages new authors and fan fics. Looking forward to reading yours. 😊

ppl comments plzzzzz i wanna see if i should continue
😕

Hostage part 1

a girl was walking on a beach. shes wearing a blue tangtop with a white knee lengh skirt. you see her
teary hazel eyes and her shivering bright pink lips, then you see her face and its none other than our
darling kripa!! Shes sobbing like anything and is talking on the phone with a person lets see wats she's s
talking about and who she is talking to

P- Kripa stop crying and like tell me wat happened
K- fine i was on the computer and then mom came in the room with her fiance and like she told me shes
getting married again i told her that this is to much she needs to just stick with a man and just settle down ]
and then she just started yelling at me
P- Kripa shes your mom and you shouldnt take her words seriously
K- alliyah your saying that how can you, you noe that she treats me like shit and you also noe that i cant live
with her like that house is a living hell for me

yes the person on the phone is none other than alliyah

A- ok kripa why dont you come over then we can talk about it
K- ok
A- ok now stop crying like a baby i think pritvi is enough and i dont think that i need another baby and u noe that i dont like you crying and if you dont stop crying then i will start crying to ok
K- (starts laughing) ok
A- now thats like a good girl
K- ok enough im coming over now ok
A- ok see u in a couple minutes
K- ok bye
A- bye

so this is the beginning ok tell me if i should continue andplzz tell me the truth

Avantika_4Ever

 

 

Edited by avantika_4ever - 17 years ago

i think im only gonna continue after atleast 10 comments ok max only 10

so if you want me to continue then plzz start commenting
but only 2 comments per person kk toodles 😳

well if i post 10 commemts would that count 😉 😆

interesting, continue soon!!!! 😊

Originally posted by: armaghan0

well if i post 10 commemts would that count 😉 😆

 

im sorry but only 2 comments per person but good point thanks for pointing it out but i have to tell u guys that if i dont continue then just pm me but just to let u noe ma hindi is very bad so this ff will be in english and mabe ill write some in hindi

cool starting....i reckon angad will kidnap kripa n make her a hostage 😆 lol nah great starting cont soon 👏

promo #1

u see three men talking

g1- i heard that the girl we kidnapped from the beach, that some one was willing to pay 50 grand for her

g2- i dont think boss is going to sell her, i think hes gonna keep her and like u noe do somtin to

g3- ya thats true




who r the 3 men talking about and how does it concern kripa
keep reading hostage to find out