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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's beautiful written
Loved it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful. How his feelings are expressed in a few lines... Can't you expand this into a full story? 
Can't express what I felt reading this...Lovely
Thank you.
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Congrats for New story - OS...👏

lovely OS...superb written...I also don't know how many times i read..excited for ff..
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beautifully written,,beautifully expressed..it was amazing reading it..loved the diary entry form of witting finally maan got his other half of the heart it was really wonderful reading this
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Beautifully Written each and every emotion..
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I became sad initialy then had happy tears
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Beautiful. 

First I was heartbroken.  I felt so bad that Maan was not able to express his feelings and so he lost his first love.

But then he finds love again and that was beautiful.

I loved what Geet wrote and that she cherishes him so much!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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so lovely...
just loved his POV
so beautifully written
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Beautiful OS. So beautifully expressed all happenings of his life from getting his first love to the divorce and getting married to geet and then having blissful happy married life with two kids. Liked that he didn't stop geet to read her confession letter to his first love. Loved it T.