Sorry was so busy in uni to comment this beautiful piece of work!
Where to start? The beginning; your title is awesome that's the exact word to describe that scene, that magical pull they feel for each others and the way he was drowned to her.Loved that sneaky reference to your other story "the inticing desire to have her in his embrace". Anyway your writing style is so mesmerizing. You twist the words and bring us into your story's web, that's what I love most about your stories! ❤️The Jaadu is not only in the looks it's also in your words! And with your brilliant use of gifs!This is so magical❤️Anyway (late) Happy Arshi Diwali to you too!
hi faiqa,
happy diwali. beautiful post. great gifs and as i was reading i thought, yeah, there was so much touching and intimacy in the lead up to that almost kiss... drank from the same glass too as you point out... and yet such innocence, something so untarnished, so pure about them and their interaction. miss it all a lot really.
thanks.
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