Alvida Aye Dil (Diyar-e-Dil sequel FANFIC) - CHAPTER 4 UPDATE ON PG.4! - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Splendid update...
I m eager to read what's next...
Plz update soon..
And plz pm me..
Thanks...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Already PMed you haya.
Thank you everyone else :D I'm so happy people are enjoying this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is such a action packed sequel. Really liked the whole haveli section, the way you highlighted wali and farah's relationship in every scene and wali's concern for her was lovely to read. Their little family laugh in between was cute.
This moeez lol, such a unemplyed personality.
Keep writing farahwalikhan! You are a very good writer!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Hey, what a lovely fanfic!
I am glad I came across this on this first DED-less tuesday :(
It's interesting..
Please try to keep writing and update the next chapter soon..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you so much everyone! And Imane, you did read this one after all. I'm trying my best to keep the feel of the show but with some of your action/tension involved. Gosh, good thing Behroz isn't alive otherwise he'd have a heart attack seeing all that is happening with his beloved wife and daughter...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hope u update soon. love the story
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Hello guys, once again thanks so much for all the wonderful feedback I've gotten. Means the world to me, really and it's that which motivates me to constantly update this fic. This chapter isn't as fast-paced but that's because it mainly focuses on what they're doing.

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Chapter 3: You're Not Alone

Wali had informed Feroze uncle and the police but honestly, he hated sitting around doing nothing. But until he got Farah back to the haveli, safe and sound, he couldn't do anything because he knew his Tayee-Ammi or Bare Baba would always want him to protect Farah first before anyone else but still...he hated not being able to do anything. Luckily, Farah was fine and nothing major was wrong with her and she had simply had a panic attack from recalling what she had been through. He was able to take her back home. Lucky too, as Arjumand and Zarmine had been extremely worried.

"Farah!" Zarmine hurried over to hug her. "Thank god, main toh baut parechan ho gayi thi."

"Ab kaisi tabiyat hai beta?" Arjumand asked gently. Farah managed a weak smile.

"Theek hoon," Farah assured them before turning to Wali. "Wali, Mama kahan hai?"

"Tayee-Ammi toh aap logoon ke saath hospital mein thi right?" Zarmine asked, looking confused.

Wali winced, before taking Farah's hand. "Yahin kahin houn gi woh aao tum rest kar lo, Farah."

"Wali," Farah's tone booked no arguments. "Mama kahan hai?"

"Wali beta kahan hai Ruhi?" Arjumand asked as well, noticing her son seemed to be fidgeting.

"Woh...dekhein aap log..." Wali began, really not wanting Farah or anyone else to faint.

"Wali," Farah said firmly once more and Wali sighed. He couldn't say no to that tone. Not when it was her, even if he wanted to protect her from the truth.

"Tayee-Ammi mere saath hospital main hi thi lekhin," Wali exhaled. "Unko awwa kar liya gaya."

"Kya?" Arjumand said, putting a hand to her mouth while Zarmine pulled Farah into a hug. Farah leaned close to Zarmine, beginning to cry.

"Wali, please, mujhe police station le chalo," Farah said quietly. "Main apni saari statements wapis lene ke liye tayyar hoon lekhin mein Mama ko nahi kho sakti please Wali...please."

Wali winced, he didn't like the idea of his wife giving in to Moeez's demands, if they gave in to his demands now, there was no guarantee he'd give Ruhi back. "Nahi, Farah aur is liye nahi kyun ke meri ana ka masla hai balke isliye ke aghar tumhare statement wapis lene ke bawajud usne Tayee-Ammi ko nuksaan paunchaya toh koi bhi humari baat ka yakeen nahi karega."

Farah began crying more and Zarmine reached over, hitting her brother over the head.

"Uffo Lala, kuch toh khayaal karein," Zarmine scolded. "Farah waise hi baut parechan hai. Farah, relax raho, Lala jo hai Tayee-Ammi ko dhoond nikalein ge."

"Wali beta kuch karo aur jaldi," Arjumand said frowning. "Aghajaan ko yeh pata chal gaya toh woh toh baut parechan ho jayein ge."

Wali nodded. "Ji Ammi, main bas ja hi ra tha lekhin Farah ko haveli chor na bhi zaroori tha."

"N-nahi Wali main tumhare saath jaoon gi Mama ko dhoondne," Farah said, pulling away from Zarmine causing Wali to frown. He was about to say something but Zarmine spoke up instead.

"Kya ho gaya Farah?" Zarmine said bluntly. "Bare Baba aur Tayee-Ammi ne tumhe hamesha itna laad pyaar diya hai aur Tayee-Ammi apne aap ko kabhi bhi maaf nahi karein gi aghar Moeez ne tum koi bhi nuksaan paunchaya. Please yahan rukh jao, Lala humse in touch rein ge, kyun Lala?"

"Haan, Zarmine," Wali agreed, looking to Farah their eyes locking. "Farah, Bare Baba ki khatir tum ghar pe hi rukh jao."

Farah hesitated but sighed, nodding. "Theek hai, please meri Mama ko zinda salamat le aao Wali, please."

Wali smiled at her. "I promise." With that, he left them hoping he'd be able to keep his promise. He needed to find Tayee-Ammi before those creeps did anything to her. He had always known Moeez was a creep but he hadn't thought he'd fall this low to get money or to get revenge from Farah. He still remembered the look on Tayee-Ammi's face after she had been betrayed by those whom she had trusted the most.

Wali had been just passing by when he heard the sound of quiet sobbing and frowned. That didn't sound like Farah nor was it coming from her room. He followed the sound and saw Ruhi crying silently. Unable to see anyone cry, he knocked on the door.

"Tayee-Ammi?" Wali said gently and Ruhi looked up.

"W-Wali?" Ruhi said in a choked voice. "A-ao."

Wali came inside and sat besides Ruhi on the sofa. "Tayee-Ammi, please mat roye, ab sab theek ho gaya hai."

Ruhi tried to wipe away her tears but ended up crying even more and closed her hands in front of Wali in a pleading gesture. "M-mujhe maaf kardo, Wali. Maine tumhare saath baut bura kiya hai, baut dukh diye hain tumhe, issi liye mujhe saza mili hain. A-aaj mere Allah ne mujhe bilkul hi akela kar diya ha. Mujhe apne kiye ki saza mil gayi hai, Wali. Ab toh mujhe maaf kardo."

Wali felt his own eyes water at Ruhi's words, grasping a hold of her pleading hands. "Yeh aap kya kar rahin hain Tayee-Ammi? Mujhe aap se koi shikayat nahi hai, Tayee-Ammi aur aap bilkul akeli nahi hain. Mein, Aghajaan, Farah, Zarmine, hum sab aapke apne hi hain. Aur woh logue...jinka aap sauch sauch ke ro rahin hai, woh aapke pyar aur bharosa ke laik hi nahi the Tayee-Ammi." He pulled Ruhi into a hug as she sobbed into his shoulder.

"M-maine apni bachi ki zindagi khatre mein daali, Wali," Ruhi said shakily. "Aghar aaj Farah ko kuch ho jaata toh main kya muun le ke jaati Behroz ke paas? Ke uski laadli ki main hifaazat nahi kar paye? Balke khud uski izzat aur jaan ko khatre mein daala. Behroz mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karega."

Wali's thoughts drifted to his Bare Baba and he smiled. "Bare Baba aapse aur Farah se baut mohabbat karte the. Woh aapko zaroor maaf karein ge. Aghar aapne humhe dukh paunchaya hai aur humne aapko maaf kardiya hai, toh Bare Baba kyun nahi karein ga?" He leaned over, kissing Ruhi on the forehead. "Waisi bhi Aghajaan bata rahe the ke aapne unse bhi maafi maangi hai. Jaanti hai ek baat Tayee-Ammi? Apni ghalti ka aitraaf karna, maafi maangna, baut mushkil kaam hota hai. Issi liye jab koi sache dil se maafi maange toh usse maaf kardena chahiye. Kyunke maafi maangne wala aur maaf kardene wala Allah ki nazar mein baut azeem hotein hain."

Ruhi managed a smile, wiping away her tears. "Ab mujhe pata chala ke Farah mein itna himmat aur hosla kahan se aya."

Wali had to look away to make sure the blush wasn't obvious on his face. "K-kya m-matlab?"

"Farah ne bhi mujhe yehi baat kahi thi jab meri himmat toot gayi thi, ke main maafi maang loon aur apne zameer ko har bauj se azaad kardoon," Ruhi said softly and Wali's heart skipped a beat. He had taught Farah that? How to ask for forgiveness and accept mistakes? He hadn't thought that but still...

Wali was distracted out of his thoughts as the phone rang then. He saw it was the police commissioner and quickly picked up the phone. "Ji SSP saab kuch pata chala?"

"Wali saab, humhe aik dead body mili hai, aap aghar yahan hospital aa sakte hain identify karne..."

Wali felt as if his heart had stopped beating as the police commissioner said that, phone slipping from his hands. No, it couldn't be. There must be some sort of mistake. Bare Baba and Farah's faces appeared in front of him. He could see the misery and disappointment on both their faces. His eyes watered, no this couldn't be happening, this was all his fault. He had known about Moeez's threats, he had known Tayee-Ammi was in danger, he should have taken her with him to talk to the doctor.

"Hello, Wali saab?" The police commissioner's voice was sounding increasingly alarmed. A tear cascaded down Wali's face and he grabbed the phone off the floor, putting it to his ear.

"J-ji commissioner saab main aata hoon," Wali managed to get out before hanging up the phone.

Ya Allah please, please yeh koi ghalat fahmi ho aur woh Tayee-Ammi na ho, ya Allah please hum kissi aur azmaish ke kaabil nahi hai. Ya Allah...

If that dead body was really Ruhi's, he didn't know how he'd ever be able to look Farah in the face ever again. He had promised that he would bring Ruhi back safe and sound. Gosh, he just hoped that was one promise he'd never have to end up breaking.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved it! keep updating :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The third part got me more interested now...
Ab kia hoga?
Wali kaisay dhonday ga ruhi ko...
Dead body...
Ab toh plx update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Don't worry, haya. Wali Behroz ka shehr bhatija hai remember? 😆
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