Alvida Aye Dil (Diyar-e-Dil sequel FANFIC) - CHAPTER 4 UPDATE ON PG.4!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys, so I decided to write my own sequel to Diyar-E-Dil up only because the series needs a sequel. I might even find a way to send it to Farhat Ishtiaq requesting her for a sequel for it.

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Chapter One: An Unexpected Call

Farah felt as if she would die from embarrassment with how Wali and Aghajaan were looking at her. "Acha bas karein na, chalein Mama aur Chachi ko dekhte hain."

Wali and Aghajaan both laughed but in agreement, Wali wheeling Aghajaan out of there with Farah following closely behind. They were only barely out in the open when Gulkhan came up to them with the landline phone.

"Farah bibi aap ke liye phone hai," Gulkhan said handing the phone to her. Farah frowned a little, thinking who it could be and a little nervous at who it could be. Ruhi was here with her in the haveli and they had no contact with any of their other relatives. Wali seemed to able to sense the anxiety from look on her face because he reached out one hand, intertwining their fingers. Just that simple action seemed to give Farah the strength she needed and she took the phone from Gulkhan.

"Hello?" Farah said into the phone.

"Kya samajti ho tum khud ko? Baut haseena ho?" Moeez's voice came from the other end causing Farah to pale a little, subconsciously squeezing Wali's hand tighter.

"Moeez, tumne mujhe kyun phone kiya hai?" Farah's voice shook a little and Aghajaan was about to say something but Wali squeezed his shoulder with one hand while keeping a hold of Farah's hand, although the happiness from his face had drained out and it was all he could do not to snatch the phone away,

"Apni statement mere khilaaf wapis lo," Moeez said, almost growling. "Emraan bhai meri zamanat toh karwahi dein ge aur jab woh karwadein ge toh aghar tumne apni statement wapis nahi li toh main phuppo ko awwa karwadoon ga."

"Habar daar jo tumne Mama ko chua bhi," Farah said, tears falling down her cheeks but quickly wiped them away. Like hell she was going to give Moeez the satisfaction of getting to her. "Main abhi police ko bata ti hoon ke tum mujhe kis kism ki dhamkiyan de rahe ho."

"Haan, shauk se batao," Moeez challenged her. "Main phuppo ki issat ko ek minute mein khatam kar wa sakta hoon, tum kya chahiti ho Farah? Is umar mein unki issat loot jaye. Tumhare baap kya sauche ga?"

Wali had had enough of this, he could see the terror and worry on Farah's face, grabbing the phone and cutting the line. He could hear Aghajaan breathing rapidly and was unsure of who to help first.

"Farah beta kya hua?" Aghajaan was panicking and Farah managed a shaky smile, wiping away her tears.

"Sab theek hai Aghajaan, aap please fikhar mat kijeye," Farah said giving him a small hug, trying not to cry. "Main abhi ayi." She left from there and Wali felt torn, but knew he needed to reassure Aghajaan first before going after Farah. She wouldn't forgive him nor would he forgive himself if he left Aghajaan worried due to his already decaying health.

"Aghajaan, sab theek ho jayega," Wali said gently, squeezing his shoulder gently. "Farah bas thodi parechaan hai, Tayee-Ammi ke saath wakt guzare gi toh teekh ho jaye gi, aap please parechaan mat ho."

Aghajaan exhaled a little, managing a weak smile. "Theek hai beta, lekhin tum Farah ke paas jao...uski haalat mujhe theek nahi lag rahi, usko dekh lo."

Wali smiled, managing to hide his own concern but the truth was he was worried about Farah too. Moeez calling her and upsetting her like this, he didn't like it. "Aghajaan main dekh leta hoon, aap please fikhar mat kijiye. Gulkhan, tum zara Aghajaan ke paas raho." Gulkhan obeyed, moving to Aghajaan's side, allowing Wali to follow after Farah. He came just in time to see Farah forcing Ruhi in her room.

"Chalein ammi andhar please," Farah was in tears, unable to control them any more and this made Wali's heart ache. He hated seeing tears in her eyes, no matter mad he got at her, he hated seeing her cry and not be able to do anything about it.

"Farah please calm down," Wali said gently, going inside the room.

"Farah yeh tumhe kya hogaya hai?" Ruhi sounded very concerned. "Tumne Arjumand aur Zarmine ko bhi wahan parechan chod diya hai."

"Mama, mujhe is waqt sirf aapki fikhar hai," Farah said, wiping away her tears, not seeming to hear Wali's words. "Mama, please mujhse vaada karein aap is kamre se bahir nahi jayein gi. Please, Mama. Aaapko Baba ki kasam hai."

Before Ruhi could answer, Wali moved over pulling Farah in his arms. She attempted to resist at first, trying to go to Ruhi but Wali held her tight. After a few more moments of futile struggling, she broke down against Wali's chest, sobbing. He kissed the side of her head, stroking her hair gently.

"Farah, mujhpe bharosa rakho," Wali assured her. "Tayee-Ammi ko kuch nahi hoga, tum aur Tayee-Ammi ab akele nahi ho, main tum donoon ke saath hoon."

"N-nahi W-Wali, M-Moeez jo hai usne mujhe dhamkiyan di hain ke woh Mama ko awwa ka ra lega aur unki issat ko..." Farah's voice was so choked and Ruhi's face paled as she heard her daughter's words causing Wali to reach out pulling his Tayee-Ammi into their hug too and Farah wrapped her around Ruhi's shoulder.

"Tayee-Ammi, Farah, aap logue please Moeez ki dhamkiyoon pe dehaan mat dein," Wali assured both of them. "Main Feroze Uncle se baat karta hoon."

"W-Wali, mujhe baut darr lag raha hai," Farah choked out.

"Ya allah, Behroze kaash tum aaj yahan hote," Tears fell down Ruhi's cheeks and a sorrowful expression crossed Wali's face as he took in the fearful and worried looks of his wife and aunt's faces. Seeing the two of them like this heightened the sense of responsibility that he already felt towards them. Since the moment his Bare Baba had died, he had felt as if Farah and by extension Ruhi were his and Aghajaan's responsibility. He felt as if that's why Bare Baba had taken the promise from him to always keep Farah happy and safe, because he wanted his beloved wife and precious daughter in safe hands.

"Tayee-Ammi, Farah," Wali pulled away from the hug for a moment, looking at both of them. "Bare Baba is duniya mein nahi hain, lekhin aap yeh mat samje ke aap logue akele hain. Moeez se darne ki koi zaroorat nahi aur Farah tumhe apni statement wapis lene ki bhi koi zaroorat nahi hai. Moeez mujhse bach nahi sakta, humhara defence baut acha hai."

Ruhi placed a hand on Wali's cheek, more tears running down her face. "Main hamesha yeh khwaish karti thi ke mera beta hota. Moeez ko bachpan se maine beta mana, jab mera rishtoon pe se aitbaar uthne laga toh mere khuda ne mujhe yeh dekha diya ke asl beta kaisa hota hai."

Farah managed a smile through her tears, her eyes meeting with Wali's as he looked down a little shyly at her mother's compliment. He didn't get a chance to reply as at that moment, Arjumand and Zarmine burst in.

"Farah, kya hua?" Zarmine sounded very panicked. "Aik dam se tum Tayee-Ammi ko apne saath le gayi...Lala, kya hua hai? Tayee-Ammi aur Farah roh kyun rahi hain?"

"Woh..." Farah began but Ruhi cut her off.

"Aao behto," Ruhi said gently. "Main sab kuch bata ti hoon. Arjumand, tumne Wali ki baut achi tarbiyat ki hai."

Arjumand smiled, placing a hand on Wali's shoulder who smiled back at her before she looked back at Ruhi. "Meri kul qayinat hai yeh. Aaapki Farah bhi baut pyari hai. Lekhin baat kya hai?"

"Chachi aap behtiye toh," Farah said. "Tum bhi behto Zarmine."

Zarmine went over, sitting besides Farah whilst Arjumand and Wali sat together. Ruhi sat nearby as well.

"Ab batayein," Zarmine said. "Kya hua hai?"

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow this is so superb! Amazing writeup farahwalikhan, and i loved your username haha, pls don't tell me your original name ever, like ever okay?
And its sucha good concept, the sequel too endearing too read!
Loved it, continue soon! :))
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Posted: 8 years ago
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yay!! i was looking for a FF on diyar e dil and i found yours, & it's soo good!! please continue, and please PM me!!!😊
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amazing..
rukhsati scene and other romantic stuff zaroor likhna plzz😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I will definitely show rukhsati scene, haha. Thank you everyone for the comments, I will update soon and Zehra, I will PM you soon.
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Thank you zee :) Hey guys, Emraan bhai would be around Tajjamul and Ruhi's age right or is he younger? I can't tell his age but he seems a lot older than Moeez.
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wow dear..
really well written..
that kamina moiz is never going to change
please update soon
as there is no more DeD,... fanfics are guilty pleasure 😆
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Wow this is splendid...
I wished they could rrad this and continue...
I miss WaFa scenes...
I miss them badly...
PS:- can u pm me the next time??
update soon...
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Thank you so much everyone! I really hoped to see a sequel to the series, so I wrote one myself because I'm not too great at collaborations.

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Chapter Two: The Past & The Present

Ruhi exhaled, taking a deep breath as she looked at the others who didn't already know. "Main Tajjamul bhai ke ghar thi, seeriyan uttar ke neeche aa rahi thi, jab maine Moeez ki baatein sunni. Woh bahut ghusa main tha, us waqt mujhe pata laga ke usne mujhse aur meri beti se kabhi pyaar nahi kiya tha." Tears fell down her cheeks and Arjumand got up from besides Wali, going to sit with her, placing a hand on her shoulder. This gave her some strength to continue.

"Maine toh ussi waqt Moeez aur bhaijaan se rishta tod diya balke main toh Farah koh phone kar ke usko Moeez ki saari haqeeqat bata dena chahiti thi," Ruhi said. "Lekhin Moeez ne mujhe kamre main ghaseet ke, mujhe andar lock kardiya aur mujhse yeh kaha ke jab tak woh Farah ko yahan apni biwi bana ke uske hisse ke saath yahan nahi le ayega, main uss kamre mein lock rahoon gi."

Arjumand held her head in her hands. "Ya Allah yeh kaise log hain?"

"Allah ka shukhar hai chachi keh kuch logoon ke ghinonein chehre saamne agaye," Farah said firmly and Zarmine squeezed her hand, resting her head on Farah's shoulder gently.

"Phir kya hua?" Zarmine asked.

"Moeez haveli aya tha," Farah continued the story. "Mujhe phone kiya tha. Usne yeh kaha ke Mama ko brain hemorrhage ho gaya hai."

Arjumand and Zarmine both gasped while Wali's fist clenched in fury. He didn't know that Moeez had said that or locked his Tayee-Ammi up in the bedroom. The more he heard the more he felt like finding Moeez and murdering him.

"Itna bara jhoot?" Zarmine gasped out. "Oh my god Farah, tum toh baut parechaan hui hogi?"

"Mere toh bilkul dil beht gaya tha," Farah admitted. "Bahut darr gayi thi ke Mama ko bhi nah koh doon. Main Agha Jaan ko iss tara se chod ke nahi jaana chahti thi, lekhin parechani mein kuch samaj main nahi aya."

"Farah tum khud ko mat zimedaar tehrao," Wali assured her. "Main tumhari jage hota toh main bhi yahi karta."

Farah managed a smile at that before continuing. "Main uske saath nikal gayi. Parechaani mein phone apna kamre mein chod gayi. Poore rasta mujhe sharminda karta raha ke meri waje se Mama ki tabiyat kharaab hui hai." Wiping away her tears, she looked at Arjumand. "Aaap ko pata hai chachi jab maine Wali se maafi maangi thi, toh usne mujhse kya kaha tha? Ke woh kabhi aisi ghatiya kharkat kar hi nahi sakte ke Aghajaan ki bemaari ka sahara lekhe mujhe majboor kare ke main uske saath rishta nibahoon." She had begun crying again. "Lekhin Moeez itna zarf wala nahi hai...itna usne Mama ki bemaari ka drama kiya ke main emotionally blackmail ho ke Wali ko aur Aghajaan chod doon."

"Farah..." Zarmine said pulling Farah into a hug as she cried while Wali moved to sit besides them, taking Farah's hand in his own.

Zarmine stroked Farah's hair. "Farah, Lala tumse sachi mohabbat karte hain. Uss Moeez ki tara jhoota dekhawa aur fareb nahi karte. Aur mohabbat mein koi zabardasti nahi hoti."

It took Farah a few moments to calm down but the others were patient and Arjumand looked like she wanted to come to Farah's side as well but didn't and stayed besides Ruhi. When Farah had calmed down a little, Wali wrapped an arm around her shoulders and she leaned into his embrace gently. Wali's arms around her made her feel safe, confident and secure, even a little shy to be so affectionate in public, which was why after a moment, she pulled away slightly, her cheeks heating up slightly.

Wali laughed at that causing Farah to blush more, pulling away at the others' laughter and a knock on the door. The door opened to reveal Aghajaan with Gulkhan standing there.

"Kya ho raha hai?" Aghajaan asked.

"Aye Aghajaan," Wali got up from his seat, wheeling Aghajaan inside the room. "Farah bas kuch baatein bata rahi thi hum sab ko, aapki tabiyat kharab ho jayegi is liye aapko nahi kaha."

"Nahi beta, Ruhi mujhe thoda baut bata chukhi hai," Aghajaan assured Wali, who smiled staying besides him then, although kept an eye on Farah as she continued.

"Haan toh Moeez mujhe kisi construction site pe le gaya tha," Farah said. "Maine baut haat chura ne ki kaushish ki maghar woh mujhe andar legaya jahan uska asl chehra mere saamne agaya. Kehne laga ke meri aur Wali ki koi happy ending nahi ho gi...maine baut kaushish ki ke main wahan se bhaag jaoon, lekhin usne pistol nikal li thi, baar baar mujhe choone k-ki...kaushish kar raha..." She couldn't speak anymore, she shuddered as she remembered how Moeez kept trying to touch her. At that time, she had really wished for Baba to be there because he would punch Moeez and pull her into an embrace, protecting her from the things Moeez wanted.

"Farah?" Zarmine said shaking Farah gently but she didn't respond.

"Farah beta?" Aghajaan said as Wali slowly approached Farah.

"Farah, meri taraf dekho," Wali said gently taking Farah's wrist but she didn't respond. Ruhi got up moving towards them and pulled Farah into an embrace.

"Farah, haush karo meri bachi," Ruhi said gently.

"M-Mama, M-Moeez baar baar mujhe choone ki kaushish kar raha tha," Farah's voice seemed to be in a trance. "M-maine Moeez se kabhi muhabbat nahi ki aur us waqt tak Moeez yeh baat jaanta tha ke main Wali se mohabbat karti hoon...lekhin baar baar woh..." Her vision was beginning to blur and everything was fading in front of her. Soon, her blurred vision turned black and she knew no more, passing out in Ruhi's arms.

"Farah!" Ruhi cried, catching her. "Farah! Farah! Wali..." She was crying and Wali's eyes had widened as he hurried to call the ambulance. Zarmine and Arjumand stayed back with a very worried Aghajaan while Wali and Ruhi went to the hospital.

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Wali brought some water for Ruhi. "Tayee-Ammi, aap pani pi lein aur bharosa rakhiye Farah inshallah bilkul theek ho jayegi."

Ruhi was crying. "Mere is waqt kuch khane pina ka dil nahi chah raha Wali, bas meri bachi teekh ho jaye..."

Wali squeezed Ruhi's shoulder, hoping the same. He understood how he felt. Seeing Farah like that, looking so frightened and sad made him feel like the most useless person on the planet. Honestly, he should have stopped Farah that night from going with Moeez...none of this would have happened if he had. "Main doctor se mil ke aata hoon." He went to go talk to the doctor and was relieved to hear that Farah would soon gain consciousness. He was discussing about the medicines for Farah when a shrill shriek from Ruhi "WALI!!!!" came through.

Heart catching in his throat, Wali left the doctor running to where he left Ruhi waiting but saw she was no longer there. Oh god...Sweat developed on his forehead and he felt his jaw drop as he saw some men dragging Ruhi into the car.

"Tayee-Ammi!!" Wali cried, rushing down and ran as fast as his feet would take him but only managing to touch the car door as it drove off. He stumbled a little but managed to remain standing. He wiped the sweat from his forehead. Once again, he could almost see Bare Baba's face in front of him.

"Wali, meri Ruhi ko bacha lo," Bare Baba was saying.

A lone tear ran down Wali's cheek. "Bare Baba, main Tayee-Ammi ko zaroor dhoond ke laoon ga. Aur Farah ko hamesha mehfooz rakhoon ga." He went back inside the hospital, dialing Feroze Uncle on the phone.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow this is excellent 👏
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