Manan SS:key to my heart part 12 (who has kidnapped her?)pg 112 12/6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Prologue


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"Ajk bad tum mujhei bahir nazar mat ao...mein tumhei yaha isleah nhi laia samjhii" he said gritting his teeth

"Tum kia chahtey ho ...y can't you just leave me " I shouted at him


He pulled me with a jerk and I hit with his chest...


"Listen you I'm not even interested in you but unfortunately tumharei sath bandh dia gia hu...So now bear it..!!" He said his eyes were fully red with anger


Oh God those eyes in anger too they look so enhancing and attractive... Stop thinking like that nandini... It's just a comprising relationship


"Meraaa hathhh chorooo" now this time I shouted composing ... trying to free myself


He left my hand stared at me and left from there


"Kiun hamesha is jagah per mujhei sakoon milta hei jis jagah se mein sabse ziada nafrat kerty hu"I thought... I really don't know why ...kiun ye mujhei effect kerta hei our marriage is just a compromise for Dada and papa or mein bus Dada ki health ki waja se yaha hu


" nandini Dada bula rhei hei"said the maid breaking the chain of my thought



Hello guys... Fatima here ...u must be knowing me if you read my SS:zahenaseeb (nhi pertey to go have a look at least ๐Ÿ˜†)

So this was the prologue this story is gonna be of three chap only that too depending on the response...its concept is somewhat like a drama serial but I have completely changed it...do you want me to continue..????



chap-1

chap-2

chap-3

chap-4


chap-6

chap-7

chap-8


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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
awesome prolofues...
compromise...

continue soon

and ya will read your story definitely (both the ones)

LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cutesanjana1008

awesome prolofues...

compromise...

continue soon

and ya will read your story definitely (both the ones)

LOVE
SANJANA


Awwie I'll be waiting for your comment sanjana :*
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dyaray dil ki story tou ni ;)
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Confused..
Coz he said dada..
No maddy okay!;
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ohh woo..that looks nice๐Ÿ˜Š
so manan are married...nice concept dear๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey... Fathima
I loved your prologue
It's interesting...compromise relationship is always treat... We can witness every flavor of relationship.. First hate.. Friendship... Caring.. Love... Etc
Waiting eagerly
Continue soonish
I'll suggest you to change the story name... Because it's already there as "you hold the key to my heart"... So it's your wish to change or keep it same
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

Dyaray dil ki story tou ni ;)


Kind of ...seriously that drama is on my nerves ...aren't they cuteee :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Hey... Fathima
I loved your prologue
It's interesting...compromise relationship is always treat... We can witness every flavor of relationship.. First hate.. Friendship... Caring.. Love... Etc
Waiting eagerly
Continue soonish
I'll suggest you to change the story name... Because it's already there as "you hold the key to my heart"... So it's your wish to change or keep it same
Take care stay blessed


Thanku jaana ..per the story is related to the title :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing concpet
Will be waiitng
Is it a three shot?
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