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here go part 8

 here go part 8

scene 1:

raman wakes up after passionate night.. and thinks : aj madrasan aisa surprise doonga kay tum bohat kush hojao gi... and leaves the room silently so ishita does not get disturbed...

ishita wakes up after 20 mins and says: ye raman kahan chale gaye...  

raman: mein ne kahan jana hai yahin hoon and comes with breakfast... places on bed...

ishita : nashta ... ap ne banaya???

raman: haan aj humari birthday hai na aj ka din mein tumhare liye yaadgaar banana chahta hoon... chalo khao... 

ishita: nahe..

raman: yeh kiya??? itni mehnat say mein ne tumhare liye nashta banaya aur tum kah nahe rahi??

ishita: ap kilao to khaoongi... and smiles...

raman: ohoo romance in breakfast... haan good... chalo aj yeh bhi sahi...

raman feeds ishita breakfast 

ishita: ap bhi khao na.. yeh lo... bohat tasty hai... 

ishita also feeds raman... both lovingly look at each other... 

raman: mein ne tumhare liye itna acha breakfast banaya chalo muje isky badaly gift do...

ishtia : kiya chahiye apko???

raman: morning kiss...

ishita feels shy but then gives raman a light peck on his lips... raman was shocked to see this side of ishita...

scene 2 

ishita: ramna jaldi na mandir jana hai ... wapsi per ap ne muje mere birthday ka surprise bhi to dena hai...

raman coming in living room says: dheeraj madrasan dheeraj... sabar ka phal meetha hota hai...

both was about to leave ... landline rings ishita receive the call...

ishita: hello ... raman apka phone...

raman took the phone and says: no its not possible... i cant be there ... i m busy... okay i will try...

and cuts the call.

ishita: kiya hua...

raman: kaam hai muje abhi chandigarh waly office jana hoga... choro mein nahe ja raha aj tumhara birthday hai... pata nahi kitne time lag jaye... phr tumhara surprise bhi to dena hai na?/ mein nahe ja raha ...

ishita: koi baat nahe raman ap kaam pay jao wesy bhi abhi to hum ne mandir jana tha na jaldi say kaam kar kay wapis ajao... jao...

raman: per...

ishtia; no problem jao...

raman: okay... chalo mein tumhain mandir drop kar deta hoon...

again phone rings... ishita took the call and says: mummy jee... Jee... theek hai... mein khareed loongi...

raman: kiya hua?

Ishita: wo mummy jee ki call thi wok eh rahi thi kay yahan unki favorite lawn ki sale lagi hai to mein madir kay baad wahan ja kar kuch shopping kar loon..

Raman: maa bhi na...

Ishita: koi baat nahe jab taka p kaam karo gay to mein bhi busy rahoon gi ph rap muje wahan say pick kar laina theek hai...

Raman: yeh lo mere office ka no jab free hojana to call kar dena okay chalo... thinks: wah beta good plan kay mutabiq ja raha hai sab...

Raman drops ishita and goes to airport to pick family...

Scene 4:

Ishita calls raman: haan raman hogaya ap ajao ...

Raman: yaar mein kaam mein phansa hoon tum khud ghar chali jao... okay I m in meeting talk to you later bye... Says in one go and cuts the call..

Ishita: raman bhi na...

In house

Raman: sari tayari hogayi wo yahan 20 min tak ajaye gi ...

Ruhi: yes papa...

After 20 min

Ishita enters suddenly all family member shouts: happy birthday to you...

Ishita was feeling on cloud nine to see all her family ... ruhi comes and hugs ishita and wishes happy birthday  ishima...

Ishita: ru.. ap yahan??

Ruhi: haan ishima mein ne papa say baat ki aur papa ne ye sab preparation ki ap happy hona...

Ishita kisses ruhi and says: yes I am so happy this is my best birthday...

One by one all family member wishes her birthday... raman comes and hugs her and wishes her birthday... ishita says thank you ... And smiles...

Adi: ishima mein ap kay liya guitar bajaon?

Ishita: ya go ahead..

Adi plays a beautiful tune and both ruhi and adi sings mere dil mein rehti bholi bhali meri maa

Ishita feels so much happy...

Then they cuts the cake and enjoys...

One by one all family member gives gifts to ishita... raman also gives two gifts... ishita opens all gifts and likes them... raman gifts ishita same gown which ishita had liked and a locket of heart shape in which there is a picture of raman, ishita, ruhi and adi...

Ishita s happiness has no boundaries... Ishita thinks: aj lagta hai murgan ne duniya ki sari khushiyaan meri jhooli mein daal di hain...

Raman thinks: ishita tumahin khush dekh kar bohat acha lag raha hai ... Yeh to kuch bhi nahe muje yaqeen hai dekhna agay humari zindagi mein aur kitni saaari khushiyaan humara intezaar kar rahi hain

All family enjoys fullest and next day they fly back to dehli where more happiness are waiting for them

Precap: LEAP OF HAPPINESS

I am very busy nowadays... just got short time to write this I will update next Tuesday... I know it is short hope you will like it...

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Edited by sparkingsoul - 8 years ago

Yipee I am first lovely update
Love Ishra romantic breakfast and surprise birthday party
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here go part 9 sorry for late update ...

Part 9

Scene 1

A happy morning in bhalla house. Ishita standing near the window of her room and thinking : aj mein bohat khush hoon... pechly 6 mahenoon mein yahan bohat kuch badal gaya hai... romi sarika ki shadi hogayi hai aur ghar mein naye member ka izafa bhi hogaya hai romi ka beta "karan", simi bhi apni zindagi mein agye barh gayi hai wo khush hai job karti hai independent hogayi hai... mihika ki bhi abhisekh say shadi hogayi hai ... vandu akka ki beti "mansi"... sab khush hain... raman aur mein bhi bohat khush hain... sahi kehte hain raman abhi hum ne aur bhi khushiyaan dekhni hain...

Ishita lost in her thoughts when a voice came ... ishima...

Ishita: adi...

Adi runs and hugs her...

Adi: good morning ishima...

Ishita: good morning...

Adi: aj ka kiya plan hai aj papa aur ruhi ka birthday hai... Papa to Mumbai say sham tak ayengay na?

Ishita: haan aj hum surprise party rakhain gay... Ruhi romi chachu ka saath papa ko receive karne jaye gi jab papa aur ruhi ghar ayengay aur darrwaza khoolain gay to hum sab shout karain ga surpise HAPP BIRTHDAY... Nice??

Adi: very nice... Gift kiya dain gay hum???

Ishita: sochty hain... idea ruhi ko uski favorite doll ka set aur papa kay liye branded watch... theek hai?

Adi: haan theek hai accha mein chalta hoon preparation bhi to karni hai...

Ishita: hmmm jao... Per ruhi ko shak nahe hona chahiye... kuch dair tak bala jiju aakar ruhi ko apne ghar laye jain gay... go...

Adi leaves room...

Phone rings...

Ishita: hello...

Raman: hi madrasan... kaisi ho?

Ishita: hi theek hoon... Phone kiyon kiya? Koi kaam tha ab ye mat kehna meri socks nahe mil rahe romal nahe mil raha... Mein yahan nahe hoon jo muje pata hoga...

Raman: arey tum to antaryami niki mery kehne say pehle hi sab pata chal gaya??

Ishita: rooz ka mamool hai apka muj say baat karne kay bahane dhoondtey ho... chahe ghar per ho ya meeting kay liye out of city...

Raman: accha phir lecture mat shuru karo aj special hai wish kar jaldi say raat bhi mein wait karta raha...

Ishita: kiya special hai???

Raman: tumhain yaad nahe???

Ishita: nahe...

Raman: ay mata rani kis bhulakar say shadi karwa di????? And cuts the call...

Ishita laughs...

Scene 2

Ishita: jiju agaye ap...

Bala: ruhi kahan hai???

Ruhi: mein yahan hoon... Ready bhi hoon mien... chalo na jaldi mein ne bhi mansi ko milna hai... Chalo

Bala: haan chalo...

Romi : ruhi chui mien 6 bjy tujhe lane aonga papa ko laine jana hai yaad hai na?

Ruhi: haan chachu yaad hai...

Bala and ruhi left...

Sarika: chaplain bhabhi preparation start karte hain...

Abhishek mihika mihir and rinky comes... And says: humare bina hi tayari karogay...

Ishita: acha hua tum sab agaye chalo bohat kaam hai jaldi karo...

Mihir: yes bhabhi...

All start to work... mihika and sarika helping ishita in making food... abhishek mihir and romi decorating the house...simi and adi  wraping the gifts...

Mihika: ary wah akka jeeju kay liye Italian???

Ishita: haan bohat pasand hai na unhain... Aur ab to muje sahi banana bhi agaya...warna pehly...

Romi: kiya pehly bhabhi...

Ishita: rehne do...

Sarika: batain na bhabhi...

Ishita: mein ne aik baar try kiya tha aur office mein lunch lay kar gayi thi itna horrible bana tha... yuck... Lekin raman ne phr bhi mery liye kha liya tha...

Rinky: how sweet...

Mihika: mery jeeju hain hi romantic... Abhishek sekhoo kuch tumhain to haar waqt bas remand aur criminal ki hi pari rehti hai...

Abhishek: ary mihika...

All laughs...

Elders sees and smiles and thanks god for giving happiness and prays for lasting happiness

Scene 3:

Ruhi playing with mansi... bala and vandita goes to near icecream parlor...  mansi starts crying...

Shravu: ruhi tu ne meri behan ko rula diya??

Ruhi: nahe wo khud ro rahi hai...

Shravu: tu bad girl hai isley meri behan ro rahi hai ab mein tujhe mansi say kehlne nahe doonga...

Ruhi: meri bhi to behan hai aur mein bad girl nahe hoon ishima kehti hai mien good girl hoon...

Shravu: nahe tu nahe kehly gi...

Tear welled in her eyes...

Shravu: tu kab sa god sa pray kar rahi hai kay wo tujhe behan ya bhai dain per nahe diya na... amma kehti hai kay god good people ki sunta hai...

Bala and vandu listens and shouts: shravu...

Vandu: kiya keh rahe ho tum say sorry...

Bala: say sorry...

Ruhi: its okay peri amma ... shravu dekhana god meri pray zaroor sune gay...

Shravu: sorry ruhi... Chal dono mil kar pray karty hain...

Precap: raman and ruhi birthday party... 

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Edited by sparkingsoul - 8 years ago

Wow!! When I was reading ur story I was like... Kya mein story padh rahi hu ya YHM dekh rahi hu?? I could imagine the every scene over here... Beautifullt you written it.. 😉 next time please do pm ya...