New OS: Jab Tum Ho Saath pt 2 pg 5 (Bitter Nahi Sweet Truth) 10/06 - Page 5

Originally posted by: super_cutie

It's really such an unexpected twist👏

Loved tis update a lot

Continue your works

All the best for ur future works

I am glad you all liked the twist

THANKS A LOT FOR THE APPRECIATION
AND THANK U SUSHMA FOR MAKING THE PART FOR BEAUTIFUL !!!

Mera puttar ko sab milkar bewakoof banaya...



Int twist

Originally posted by: dundumol96

Mera puttar ko sab milkar bewakoof banaya...



Int twist

Here you can throw chappals slaps or whatever you want.. Bcz what i am gonna say.. You are not going to like it for sure
Bcz i didn't like this twist.i know i am going to be the only one to say this but I can't say a lie k i liked it. Even though for this i got banned report unfriend or whatever.
The essence of the story was. Ishita's illiteracy and Raman's acceptance
When Raman's father said
isliye I requested her to behave uneducated if front of you and make you fall in love with her innocence
That innocence for me changed to fakeness.
I might be wrong or sound like an idiot but that's my view point.

Still i loved sapna's writing the narration n writing n dialogues were apt.
I will cherish the first part as a golden work for sure.

Second part ka truth ek thoda prank hota toh i would have digested.

I am sorry again if i am sounding arrrhhh even i don't know what to say how i sound.
As i said chappals are welcomed for this gustakhi.

Haha.. I read all the comments and I am the only one who didn't like the twist
I am an alien
I am insane kya
I am odd one out.
I don't know lol

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Here you can throw chappals slaps or whatever you want.. Bcz what i am gonna say.. You are not going to like it for sure
Bcz i didn't like this twist.i know i am going to be the only one to say this but I can't say a lie k i liked it. Even though for this i got banned report unfriend or whatever.
The essence of the story was. Ishita's illiteracy and Raman's acceptance
When Raman's father said
isliye I requested her to behave uneducated if front of you and make you fall in love with her innocence
That innocence for me changed to fakeness.
I might be wrong or sound like an idiot but that's my view point.

Still i loved sapna's writing the narration n writing n dialogues were apt.
I will cherish the first part as a golden work for sure.

Second part ka truth ek thoda prank hota toh i would have digested.

I am sorry again if i am sounding arrrhhh even i don't know what to say how i sound.
As i said chappals are welcomed for this gustakhi.

Hey dear ...I appreciate your honesty
Sab ko sab kuch nahi acha lag sakta in ishita's language

Lol

On serious note i think it was her innocency which made him fall for her.
His father wanted him to see the girl inside . She lied but never step out of her relationship . She fulfilled all her duties as his wife .

This is purely my point of view. And i completely respect yours

Thanks for reading it
And no chappals from my side but lot of good wishes for being frank and honest.

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Here you can throw chappals slaps or whatever you want.. Bcz what i am gonna say.. You are not going to like it for sure
Bcz i didn't like this twist.i know i am going to be the only one to say this but I can't say a lie k i liked it. Even though for this i got banned report unfriend or whatever.
The essence of the story was. Ishita's illiteracy and Raman's acceptance
When Raman's father said
isliye I requested her to behave uneducated if front of you and make you fall in love with her innocence
That innocence for me changed to fakeness.
I might be wrong or sound like an idiot but that's my view point.

Still i loved sapna's writing the narration n writing n dialogues were apt.
I will cherish the first part as a golden work for sure.

Second part ka truth ek thoda prank hota toh i would have digested.

I am sorry again if i am sounding arrrhhh even i don't know what to say how i sound.
As i said chappals are welcomed for this gustakhi.

Originally posted by: sapna_22

Hey dear ...I appreciate your honesty
Sab ko sab kuch nahi acha lag sakta in ishita's language

Lol

On serious note i think it was her innocency which made him fall for her.
His father wanted him to see the girl inside . She lied but never step out of her relationship . She fulfilled all her duties as his wife .

This is purely my point of view. And i completely respect yours

Thanks for reading it
And no chappals from my side but lot of good wishes for being frank and honest.

Originally posted by: sush_avina

right suku .. everyone has their own way of perceiving it..

and sapna dear u have done a good job am.. so i applaud u.. its ur first work and its really nice...

Thanks buddies for sparing me... I was having my helmet on lol

Ok first to sapna I agree sab ko sab kuch acha Ni lag sakta... N I AM damn choosy.
Plus its upto someone how he or she perceive something

But I do love your writing sapna dear

Now I am going to change my thoughts a little
Sush sun mere lie pehla part ek alag story
Second part alag story jis me i will imagine Ishita ne apne would be hubby ko April fool banaya by saying I am illiterate

Piraaabbbluuummm solved.

K gals????