Abhi-Pragya FF: Rockstar (COMPLETE- ALL PARTS ON PAGE 64) - Page 28

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Asma-

I didn't expect the kiss
But it was so beautiful I wonder how things will turn after that kiss.
Will he go to America I don't think Pragya will go with him.
That Dadi's speech about everyone have to go one day made me quite emotional:)
I can understand the pain in Abhi's eyes
I'm happy that Pragya is here to comfort him.
I'm super glad you updated so fast I just wake up and I saw it
It was Amazing Tia :)


Thank you Asma. I hope my next update doesn't disappoint.
I am glad you liked Daadi stuff.
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Posted: 9 years ago
this was very heart touching buddy, i love it ...do continue super soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tiaa awesome!
So the weather here right now isThunderstorm...
And I read all of the parts today.
IT WAS FABULOUS!

Okaayy so with the two plots you have in your mind... I don't know. I wan't Pragya fulfilling her dreams with the PhD thing, but I don't want her to leave Abhi! What I would love to read is that Abhi stops her from going. Do whatever. We will like it.



And BTW I loved the kiss😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

{I opened the food pack I had got from the hospital canteen, and held a piece to his mouth without saying anything. He looked at me for a moment and I didn't say anything. And I was so glad he took the piece from my hand I fed him more pieces until he refused to eat anymore.}
When I read this I was like Aww ,,I loved it because it wiped away the bad memory of the same scene in the show when he said to her ( I gave this right to Tanu only... yuk 🀒 )

I saw that no one give you a direct comment about the plots ..I will...😊 you know me I'm romance and happy ending junky so I want this moment to continue as far as you want it to go ( she was in his bathing gown I mean come ooon this had to lead to something beyond a kiss na ?) and I want them to choose to stay in this marriage ..I love the way you write so as long as these two general Ideas are included in your update I will love the way you will write them ..( If you choosed another plot I will read it too but with heavy heart if the end is not happy )
I start to love Tanu's appearing in your updates what you write about her suit her very well 😊


Nuha, thank you so much for the feedback on the plot. Hope you will like whatever I choose.
Yey! I am glad you like my Tannu.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: simsim25

Tia! What a powerful update, the mood changed completely from the last update but I loved it! This actually made my eyes water, the Daadi and Abhi convo was so heart touching and seeing Abhi in this state was horrible, so glad Pragya is there to support him and the kiss! Didn't expect it but I loved it! <3


Thanks Simmy.. yeah this update got a bit serious with Daadi's surgery. Old woman na, so not easy.
Thanks for what you said about Abhi-daadi.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

wow what a ending to that update, wonder what will happen next? I want them to stay together even if they take a break while Pragya is away in London studying for her phd

Thanks Sonali.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Diahh

Okay first of all DMB, about your plots decision, I am okay with any ending as long as you are giving us a happy ending for AbhiGya!

Coming to the story... HE KISSED HER!!yayyy! πŸ˜† Lol! IDK, as soon as you said Pragya saw his wallet, drink, I knew there would be a kiss! But TBH I thought Pragya would kiss him, maybe coz we are reading from her POV. Anyway waiting to know what happens now!

Loved the feeding scene! Just like in the show! All the Abhi-Daadi feels!! Awww!! Pragya starting to count the days! πŸ˜• And What happened to Aalu!!

And Tannu!! UFF!! But it's okay as long as she doesn't make an appearance & Abhi knows her true face!

Great update DMB! πŸ˜ƒ Lots of love!


Oh you predicted the kiss! Glad at least one reader expected it..
Tannu might make one more appearance and that's it.πŸ˜†
Thank you Diahh!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: illa8

this was very heart touching buddy, i love it ...do continue super soon.


Thank you illa!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: UltimateFangirl

Tiaa awesome!

So the weather here right now isThunderstorm...
And I read all of the parts today.
IT WAS FABULOUS!

Okaayy so with the two plots you have in your mind... I don't know. I wan't Pragya fulfilling her dreams with the PhD thing, but I don't want her to leave Abhi! What I would love to read is that Abhi stops her from going. Do whatever. We will like it.



And BTW I loved the kiss😳


That must have been a lot to read. Thank you so much for taking the time and commenting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
So I'm finally all caught up on the updates πŸ˜†
And and and...
I think they are fantastic, actually, beyond that! I mean... Is it normal that I teared up at the scene where AbhiGya were riding the rides and she felt like a kid? It's just that.. It's beatifully written and I felt as if I was Pragya myself.

This has been so moving. I honestly think Abhi has clinical depression. Like severly. But that doesn't explain why he's taking sleeping pills. Does it? Or maybe he just has anxiety from whatever he's truly going through. I say 'whatever' because you're good at keeping the suspence in this. I mean... You actually left me with final thoughts after each update. I'm like...

"Where is Aaliya?"

"She dead? Or Missing?"

"Hold up! They kissed?" (Well to be fair, I accidently skipped that part and started reading the comments and went back to double check)

The kissing part was really quick, but well-put because I think the true concept of this story is for Abhi to heal and for someone to find him. It's as if he's a lost boy. The detailed kissing and sex would take away from the point.

I mean that's just my opinion. Feel free to counter me haha. I think I'm wrong at interpreting this deeply.

PS: I'm a lune for thinking this, but I kind of want a sad ending.
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