Phir Le Aaya Dil... TS (Continuation) Completed!! - Page 5

Originally posted by: SanayaBarun

It was a perfect ending loved it!

Originally posted by: hasiniangel

Beautiful ending

Originally posted by: RibelleDelCuore

Fabulous!!
Thanks :D

Originally posted by: swamii92

hey nice one...thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: Rozy77

amazing, hot and passionate part☺️
loved it😃
thanks for continuing and giving the story a well-deserved ending🤗
take care

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Thanks so much for the PM!  Such a great way to end this terrific OS!

I love your writing style and the 'realness' of your ISHRA.

Great work, can't wait to read more from you!

Originally posted by: N.R.Rona

It was amazing..so hottish with emotions and actions..

 

great work it was..my gutterish mind is hoping the further actions happened in that aingle room .thanx to you that cant stop blushing..

loved it..both parts..fabulous

Originally posted by: peace..

brilliant brilliant! so beautifully worded! u r a brilliant writer.👏

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

Aww...Priya..thank you so much for the HOT closure.. ☺️
This was just so beautiful..<33 The way she wanted him..her pain when he coiled away from her touch! It was all so perfect! Like I said before, you have your own way with their emotions..They just come out so well. <33 Their convo was ADORBS! ❤️ He was grumbling like a kid and she was no less..melting him away with her tears! 😳😳

Aahhh, what followed next is history as they say! ☺️☺️ Finally they united..☺️

Loved it! Thank you once again for giving it a wonderful ending and for the PM as well 😃

Originally posted by: yhmmylife

priya it is beautiful and sensuous..

but i loved these lines they are perfect

she was only one defective piece that was perfect fit with the broken puzzle that was his life!