Mina I happened to read the first part a couple of days ago and I was totally lost in your world of imagination but then you surprised me with this addition. I'm hooked to this one and honestly hoping that you continue this because you have a way with words even when you write a steamy scene, its sensuous and romantic.
I liked that you wrote a morning after scene where Raman was horrified that he might have forced himself on Ishita and his happiness to find out that she wanted this as well was awesome. I'll definitely like that third part you're thinking of writing, take your time but do write it somewhere in the future.
Brilliant! I would love to see his reaction to remembering the details of night, and wondering how he makes it up to Ishida, in full Raman Kumar Bhalla mode!!! Please continue!👏
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