ZaYa SS| In Pursuit Of Happiness|Chapter 3- Page 12 Sept 6th - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
very interesting prologue
cont soon
n pls pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: jazly_zayafan

nice prologue
pls cont soon


Originally posted by: poojaloveskajen

seems really interesting! :)
thanks for the PM
update soon! :)


Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

Prologue seems interesting..
Continue soon...


Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

very interesting prologue
cont soon
n pls pm me


Thanks guys, I'll pm u.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

Akele kyun Jana hai??😕

Shabana is talking about Transfer? To mumbai na?

Mene guess karna shuru kardiye hain.I am excited.As it is written by 'Sanika'.

Good Prologue.👍🏼
I love your writings.😃
.Update jaldi nahi mili to qatal kardungi aapki!😉


Lol, keep guessing.
And written by 'sanika'.. kuch zyada hi nai hua? 😆
And if u qatal me.. update kaise milega? 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan


Readers who are lost 🤣
first of all thanks suri 😊
secondly- when are u updating mmhts 😛
Nd yes, i couldn't think of an apt title 😛
Yes, the movie was of will smiths.. it is a very good movie..
But thr storyline of my ss is different 😊

That movie was great just the type which impresses me.
oh about MMHTS i will try updating it soon. Just a lil busy with uni stuff!😆
Continue soon btw how many works of yours are ongoing rightnow?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
^ oh dont ask 😆
This, reasons why, the one, malhar, and a os that vinu is forcing me to continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan

^ oh dont ask 😆
This, reasons why, the one, malhar, and a os that vinu is forcing me to continue

lol very difficult to tackle all at a time. i have seven on the go 😆 and am in deep shit for now.
btw you never told me the meaning of Malhar?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Chapter1- A new beginning
Italics are flashbacks.
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"Shukriya Ammi" a girl of ten in pigtails squeled. She ran inside her house, into a room where her baby sister was coloring.
"Ayat, dekh, Ammi ne mujhe dus rupaye di." She said, her eyes shining with enthusiasm.
"Haww! Ammi har waqt apko hi paise deti hai. Ice cream khilaogi Appi?"
"Nai." Aliya said, indignantly.
"Mein save karungi."
She went to her desk and opened the lid of a massive mason jar and grinned satisfyingly when she heard it drop with a plonk.
"Aap inn sab paiso ka kya karogi Appi?"
"Tujhe ek secret batau?" She whispered, her eyes shining with excitement.
Ayat scrambled near her.
Aliya pressed her mouth to her ear and said-
"Mein India ghumna chahti hun Ayat. Humara poora desh ghoomna chahti hun."
"Bhopal se aage bhi kuch hai kya?" Ayat replied in childlike wonder.
Aliya chuckled, looking more mature than a ten year old.
"Haan Ayat. Ek alag hi duniya hai." She sighed dreamily.


Present.
The excitement in her eyes were lost in tides of time. And the dream one dreams in their childhood- to become an astronaut, a movie star, to travel the world, became just that.
A childhood dream.
She decided, enough was enough.
"Nai." Her voice rang clear this time through the room.
"Akele jana hai."
Of course there was protest and emotional blackmail at first.
And they had held a quorum and this topic was discussed much.
After all, she was a twenty two year old 'jawan larki'.
Char log sunenge toh kya bolenge?
But she was adamant.
And they had to give in eventually.
They were guilty for her situation after all.
And as she sat there in the dark, trying to escape the clutches of her past, her eyes fell on her dusty desk.
On it stood four large mason jar filled with coins and notes.
She gasped loudly, trying to reign in her tears that she had been spilling for days.
The coins glinted in the sole ray of light, tempting her to spend them, as they did a lot of times before.
She didn't spend even a quarter.
But this time?
This time she gladly gave in to the temptation.
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Dont forget likes and comment people.
Inspired by my 'bucket list'.
I was reading my 10th std ki diary, where me and my friends had scribbled down what will we do before we kick the bucket. Means before we die.
Some are extremely childish and some unrealistic.
So what is the harm if my Aliya lives it all?
If you want pms, make sure you are in my buddy list AND have commented on the latest update.
Note regarding pms
Feel free to crtisice if you did not like it.
But please be gentle :P
Thank you for reviewing in advance.
Loads of love
-Sanika
Edited by arshipotterfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
res
unres
so she wants to go around india? i an sure it aint safe going alone. so i know who is going with her.
surprise me by proving me wrong. lol
it was nice. a sustained wish finally braking the shackle.
cont soon.
p.s. these days i am outta tym
Edited by AshesToDust - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Res.
*****
Sanikaaa!🤗

I loved the FlashBack! ❤️ That was sooo -Cute.

VoIndia ghoomna chahati hai?but why akele?See i've started guessing.So next chapter bhi jaldi update karna.😛(Its okay,take your own time 😆)

Awesome Update.But itna short kyun?I want lamba updates!! Mujhe chahiye!Chahiye!Chahiye!*pouts like a kid*
And are the notes valid now?😛

Thanks for updating soon! 🤗


Edited by Tit_For_Tat - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Ress!
Lemme read the prologue and chappy 1 😛 So many pms 😆
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I'm sure you are too much free these days that's why wiriting so much. and yeah, pm me each and every work of yours. I come here, like, once a week.. so i will be missing your works if you don't send me any pms. And you better know i don't wanna miss any OS or SS 😛😉


This is wonderful! first chappy was quite short, though 😛 But still awesome! 👏
Edited by -ZaYalicious- - 10 years ago
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