ZaYa SS| In Pursuit Of Happiness|Chapter 3- Page 12 Sept 6th

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This is an idea that haunted me for a week. And I already have The One, Reasons Why and after much debate, And then I met you to update.
So, I am afraid of starting something which I will not be able to continue, though I have ideas for atleast two updates.
But I would have gone mad if I hadn't written this.
So, yeah.
I'll cut short to the SS.
This has nothing to do with the current track or anything with the serial.
Just the charecters are same.
The plot is completely different.
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PROLOUGE
A ray of light managed to creep through the tightly drawn curtains upon a desk that wasn't dusted for days.
She sat on her bed, knees drawn to her chin.
The door creaked open.
"Aliya?" A voice said.
A voice she didn't register.
She felt the bed sink. She didnt even blink.
"Beta, kuch kha le. Kab tak bhooki rehegi?"
She kept mum.
"Mera bacha." She felt a hand on her forehead, stroking back her hair.
Shabana got up and threw the blinds open.
Aliya blinked, blinded for a moment.
"Khana rakha hai. Please kha lena."
She didn't move.
Shabana sighed and mobed to the door.
"Ammi" she called out in a small voice.
Shabana froze.
"Mujhe yaha se jana hai."
Shabana knew it was coming. She had already discussed with her husband about the transfer options.
"Thik hai Aliya, tumhare abbu-"
"Nai." Her voice now rang clear across the room.
"Akele jana hai."
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Likes and comments people.
Please read the post below.
I'll send pms in a while.
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INDEX
Prolouge- Above
Chapter1- Page6
Chapter2- Page9
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NOTE REGARDING PMS.
I have 63 friends in my buddy list currently.
And I pm 56 of them, others being pm ac of many.
I expect to receive at least half the appreciation or constructive critisism.
I can only pm 50 people at a time because of being a SM. And I am online through my mobile these days.
It is a nightmare honestly.
But still I update for you people.
So from now on, I'll pm only those who are in my buddy list AND commented on my recent work.
I am sending pms to everyone right now for this.
Those who want pms, buddy me and comment.
Those who are receiving my pms and dont want, feel free to unbuddy me.
And if I have requested pms for your works, inform me.
I will gladly stop bothering you.
Peace out
Leave behind likes and comments. I will be updating most likely by tommorow.
Thank you.
Loads of love.
-sanika. :)
Edited by arshipotterfan - 10 years ago
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prologue look really interesting.waiting for next part.
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Sanika..girl u r back with a bang..loved the prologue.You are at your usual best and even before reading the post,when i look at the usename which reads arshipotterfan,i know at once that the work is going to be great !๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds very interesting!!!!
please continue soon๐Ÿ˜Š
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Whoa sounds interesting
Continue soon! :D

PS: The title of your SS reminds me of the song Pursuit of Happiness :P
Edited by musicxolover - 10 years ago
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Wow!!! Prologue is very interesting plz continue ...will be waiting for ur updates๐Ÿ˜›
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Sounds interesting mahn !!! Excited to read it !! PM me whenever u update ๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by AashimaK - 10 years ago
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Wow sounds good
Interesting
Cont soon
cant wait for next part
and thanx for the pm
Edited by pinki123 - 10 years ago
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