"Na Hrudayamlo Nidurinche Cheli" MG FF nxt thrd lnk pg-147 - Page 2

Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago

1

Reply

Quote

uma

@umamaaneet

IF-Rockerz

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

@mahi

kya hua phir se shock lagi kya dear 🤣

Reply

Quote

Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: umamaaneet
@mahi
kya hua phir se shock lagi kya dear 🤣

tum tino na muje ab ghost ke
jaise lag rahi hu dar lag raha hai

2

Reply

Quote

Sittu Sharma ki Dulhania

@Sittu_pe_Lattu

Senior Member

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Naa hrudayamlo nidurinche chelii...kalalalone kavvinche sakhi...😳
😆
I was humming this song while reading the prologue ...
First of all...thanks u for reminding this beautiful blissful song ...
As is the song...so is the pro...

The title itself has pulled me here. .

Awesome concept ...

MT (multi tasker) Maan...hayeee...
😆

Marriage with teacher...aww
Students do have crush on teachers...but getting married to a teacher ...is somewhat unexplainable

Waiting eagerly for ringa ringa roses 😆

2

Reply

Quote

uma

@umamaaneet

IF-Rockerz

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

@ Sittu_pe_Lattu

aww loved ur comment a lot dear

ya its my fav song too

thanx a lot dear for ur lovely comment

wait 4 next

i hope u will like the rest of story too 🤗

1

Reply

Quote

uma

@umamaaneet

IF-Rockerz

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

@mahi

aap dont worry drink some cool water and relax take deep breaths dear

now say how is ur basu's new start????????

ur opinion matters to me the most!!!!!!!!!! 😃

Reply

Quote

uma

@umamaaneet

IF-Rockerz

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

@IsleOfCapri

thanx dear 🤗

i hope u dont get dissapointed

Reply

Quote

Madhu

@Madhu_31

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Superr...Superrr... Basu!!

Congrats for your first story👏

Really amazing Basu..😳

Prologue kahan katam ki tum ne😡

did maan accepted this marriage for some revenge😲...coz of that evil😡

maan's father😕..mystery

geet is just 18 aur shaadi😲 😲

geet is soo naive i think...ringa ringa roses🤣in SR..

will SR happen😕

aur meri intro🤣 🤣 🤣🤗

Welcome to the land of writers...

ek baath yaad rakna...daily i want updates without any gaps😡samji😆

i am sooo happy for you basu...may this story be super duper hit😳

yipeee...meri basanti😉 story likna shuru kar diya...Basu let us do our fav dance on this happy occassion...

Edited by disha31 - 9 years ago

2

Reply

Quote

uma

@umamaaneet

IF-Rockerz

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

@dish

Was eagerly waiting for u only dear

i was biting my nails!!!!!!!!!!

ya pura mystry more than u iam impaitient for solving mystry!!!!!!!!!! 🤣 u know me na crazy

thanx a lot dish for lovely comment

love u

basu...🤗

2

Reply

Quote

739578

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

mana maneet forum ki swagatam sus swagatam.

i cannot believe this is u r first time writing a story.chala baga raasaru.

comming to the prolouge i loved it.but yaar what a cliff hanger,continue soon

i loved the charecter sketch but yaar why oh why would u pick raqesh vashisth as the bad guy.look at him doesn't u r heart go dhak dhak 😆

jokes apart, love the start.looking forward to read more

can u pls pm me when u update.thx

1

Reply

Quote

&quot;Na Hrudayamlo Nidurinche Cheli&quot; MG FF nxt thrd lnk pg-147 - Page 2

"Na Hrudayamlo Nidurinche Cheli" MG FF nxt thrd lnk pg-147 - Page 2