"Na Hrudayamlo Nidurinche Cheli" MG FF nxt thrd lnk pg-147

uma

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Posted: 9 years ago

"Na Hrudayamlo Nidurinche Cheli"

The heart where you rest(english meaning)

Hello freinds .

let me introduce myself dearies.my name is Uma.This is my first attempt ...

pls guys support me in this .i'll try not to dissapoint u guys.pls give ur view point to this new start...

love

Uma 🤗

This wonderful banner is by my dear friend Nishi(..Twinkle..) .thank u sooo much dear 🤗

This wonderful siggy is by my would be IAS(gunjar )...thanx alot dear 🤗

Note- Dont worry guys title is in telugu but story is in english and hindi only 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Prolugue

One newly married girl around 18 years is sitting in the middle of a decorated king size bed ,her palms turned cold due to fear and was praying to god continously!!!!

Geet - "oye geet teri kismath itni phuti kyu hai...hamesha tere saath hi kyu ha...kya mera pati cum lecturar bhi saare patiyon ki tarah aaj tere saath ringa ringa roses khelega kya bed pe? 😲 babaji !!!! nai aaj sirf babaji nai jesus,allah sab bhagwan meri rakhsa karna iss rakhshas se pls god"(oy geet y ur fate is bad...always y it happens with u only...will my husband cum lecturer also behave alike all husbands ??will he too play ringa ringa roses on bed with me 😲...babaji !!!!!!no not babaji today jesus,allah all gods pls save me from that devil" )

Tears clouded in her beautiful almond eyes dreading of her future ...

CREAK...!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just then door opened and and and ...to be continued 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

CHARACTER SKETCH :

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HE-
The most eligible bachelor of delhi.Heart throb of female species.Age 25 years.No.1 businessman of delhi and worlds 8th richest man.MD of MNC(Multi national company)
Khurana's.Has a heart of a gold(mai iski taarif karte thakhti nai 😆) .Owns many orphanages,hospitals,colleges too.Teaches Computer subject for students in morning session in "Nalla Malla reddy engineering college
for women" for which he is half owner.Every emotion for him is extreme either it is care
,hate or LOVE...he is none other than MAAN SINGH KHURANA .

SHE-

Fresh like a dew drop.As beautiful as a fairy.Innocence personified.As fiesty as a tigress.Bro's angel.Princess of house.Age 18.Student of Engineering ,branch IT
(Information technology).studies in NMRECW.But was intrested in Medicine. She is the
GEET HANDA.

Sangeeta Khurana-

Maan's mom ,kind hearted,loving and caring mom.takes care of
orphanages etc.more than a best mother she is a best Mother- in-law.

Suraj Khurana-Hmm maan's dad.Dont live with family has reasons.His character sketch
is given by u only as the story continues...😆

Mohinder handa-Geet's dad.Most lovable dad and MD of Handa MNC.loves Geet a lot.

Rano Handa-Mother of geet.sweet and little strict too

Jay Handa-he is geet's bro .Best bro any one could wish for.can go to any extent for geet's happines.Intrested in music.Maintains a band.

Pratam Arora-
Cunning business man.has an eye on geet.He is the route cause for maaneet's marriage.

ADI-

Is intro is needed 4 him 😆

Disha- 😉

geets best friend,studies in same clg and class as geet.very talkative,understanding and loves geets a lot

more characters r added as per story demand...

NOTE- Guys my story contains all flavours drama,comedy and LOVE.Its main motive to show is strengh of love.All in all its intense story...

i hope u all like it 😃 and din't dissapointed u all !!!!!!!!!!

Love

Uma 🤗

Imp- guys its not based on any movie story...its completely different dearies 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 1- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4105429?pn=20

PART 2 -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4105429?pn=35

PART 3-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4105429?pn=74

PART 4-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4105429?pn=91

PART 5-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4105429?pn=107

THREAD 2-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4114546

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tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

welcome to maneet world..

waiting for ur story

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drrose31

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thud 🤢

Congozz sweets ... For your first ever work... 👏 👏 👏

Reading the title I was like what ????? 🤓

But phew you clarified ... so .. why its REST there in the title ??? 😕

Okhh... coming to prologue ... what a way to stop...😡

chrs ... baaki saab tou thek hai... but that pratam... hawww... He is a negative ch ??? I mean look at him yaar... Its Rakesh we are talking abt ...

It will be interesting to see HIM in grey shades ... 😆

where 's part 1 ???? 😛

thnx for pm sweets

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AshelySpinelli

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Posted: 9 years ago

Uma u too startd writng wow dats gd congratz 4 ur 1st story abhi ye maaneet ki shaadi ka mystry kya hai jaldise solve karo na nd nice CS waitng 4 d part update soon
love
Pie 😃

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uma

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Posted: 9 years ago

@ rose

hey dear thanx a lot !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

love u !!!!!!!! 🤗

ya

u have to till mystry is solved 😉

next update is tomm 😛

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uma

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Posted: 9 years ago

@ pie

thanx a lot darling

ya solve karungi mystry

love u!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: umamaaneet
@ rose
hey dear thanx a lot !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

love u !!!!!!!! 🤗

ya

u have to till mystry is solved 😉

next update is tomm 😛

My pleasure sweets

Ahh!! Cool...

Will be waitng ...

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&quot;Na Hrudayamlo Nidurinche Cheli&quot; MG FF nxt thrd lnk pg-147

"Na Hrudayamlo Nidurinche Cheli" MG FF nxt thrd lnk pg-147