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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi all...

I am POOJA

and my first attepmt to write something on MAANEETโค๏ธ
i dont knw its future myself but will try to keep up to your expectations..
pls forgive for mistakes as i am a disaster queen๐Ÿ˜›


now about the story
currently i hav a rough sketch in mind...n abt that i can only say that i will try to make it different and surprising.
it is a rom-com as of now..๐Ÿ˜ณ
bt not sure wht i may write in flow๐Ÿ˜†
it will not be too long most probably an SS
and i will try to finish it max by a month as i hav results due next month.



and now the most obvious question...why CA
well for that...
1. i am from same field so it saves my time as i will not need to do research to frame situations
2. while i have been here i have developed a great respect for the people and the degree as well...so i cannot think of anything else
3. its new as far as i hav read in ff's didn't come across this yet
many more are there.
pm me if u hav any doubts or difficulty in understanding.

at the end...
plz read my post after CS will giv u a bsic knowledge abt the field as it is required to understand the updates...will try not to get into technicalities and keep it simple as far as possible.

request to all pls try to give reviews about how it is coming out and it is understandable or not...and suggestions always welcome...



IMPORTANT

1. The initial 4-5 parts may be boring... so pls bear with me๐Ÿคฃ

2. Pls add p_OO_ja for pmz or ask me to add u๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago

(banner by gunjar my sweet sis๐Ÿ˜Š

love u dear)

prologue

there was a girl

all lost in her studies

little kiddish

little mature

and most of all very introvert

still she managed to have gem  friends

what happens wen she is about to arranged married  her TEACHER..??๐Ÿ˜ฒ

 





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~~~INDEX~~~




part 1   scroll down๐Ÿ˜‰

part 2 - pg 19



Edited by mirror1521 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
characters:
as the name of the story suggests
there will be more focus on the educational qualifications of all characters
but it wont bore u
 

geet handa:
22yrs
appeared for CA-finals in may'14
waiting for results 
loves her father the most
rest u will knw as story proceeds



MSK:
29yrs
koi shakk he's a CA too๐Ÿ˜†
rest is not relevant๐Ÿ˜‰


Mr. Mohan Handa
a well established business man 
he is a complex character
little orthodox specially wen it comes to marriage
dead against love marriage
though loves geet the most bt is hard on her
as he wants best for his daughter
and cannot see her wasting her youth like other youngsters
life has made him like coconut tough outside bt soft inside 
very very emotional
though h knows well how to hide his emotions



Mrs. Rano Handa
a very dedicated wife n mom
fears her hubby's anger alot..
bt can do anything for her kids.

yash
18 yrs
geets bro 
shares the tom n jerry relation with his sis
little rebilleous bcoz of dad's nature
bt good at heart

pari:(not like pari of ghsp)
22 yrs
geets CLOSEST friend bcoz she is very much like her by nature excluding studies๐Ÿ˜‰ and that she is lost in dream-world of maaneet ff's๐Ÿ˜†(just like me๐Ÿ˜›)

geets  group members
shruti, pari, disha, ayush, etc


Mrs. Avantika Kurrana
maans mom
her son is her world
LOVE is something that has given her deep scars still she believes in love




RAHULL...!
naam toh suna hi hoga๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Maan's friend
or better to say 
only friend
in short..
like pari is to geet,
rahul is to maan.
he tried CA 
bt couldn't clear
now helping his dad in business
very sharp.
bt care-free.
always tries to keep maan happy๐Ÿ˜ƒ





--------more to be added as required in story
sorry no pics...my PC is the worst thing in world๐Ÿ˜ญ


Edited by mirror1521 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
for those who have no idea about the CA profession and the procedure a little knowledge to help u understand conversations


CA = Charted Accountant is a profession in commerce stream. There is no college or classes you are supposed to get registered with the INSTITUTE though u are allowed to attend private coachings iff u think u need
exams conducted in 3 levels and student can attempt any number of times until they pass...no quota system.

Level-I (CA-CPT)  after passing 12th objective type xam it is the entrance, held in jun and dec evry year. 

level-II (CA-IPCC) after clearing level-I, subjective type xam 4+3 subjects in 2 groups, held in may and nov every year.

after  passing CA-IPCC group1(4 subjects) need to work under a CA for 3 years as an intern called as article.

level-III (CA-FINALS) after clearing 4+3 subjects of IPCC and 2.5 yrs articleship training u can appear for finals. there are 4+4 subjects in 2 groups. wen u pass in all 8 subjects u finally get a degree of CA


ps : i hv tried to avoid tecnicalities..pls tell me if it is not understandable and if u need any clearifications.
iff any one from this field has read it pls tell me iff i missed out something.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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(banner credits to gunjar๐Ÿค—)


note : thanx to all for response. pls give your precious feedback too so i may know if i should continue. 


part-1


The room was cool contrary to the hot noon of june outside
a gal was cocooned in her blanket tht ws trying its best to save her from the chill wind of ac in the air cooled room.

her mom entered room...she smiled to see her small catterpillar...yes she calls her that bcoz every morning geet is found cocooned in her blanket like a caterpiller ready to become butterfly.

mrs.handa removed the curtains and swiched off ac..

rano: GEET...uth beta 11 baj gaye

geet : hmm (turns to avoid sunlight and sleeps again)

rano : geet...

geet : umm...mumma pls

rano (though she wanted to let her sleep bt couldn't...as she had a big task in hand she remembered her convo with her husband from last night)

---fb----

mr. handa (fuming in anger) : mujhe geet se ye ummeed nahi thi...usne mujhe bahut disappoint kiya..

rano(got scarred with his sudden anger...bt could do nothing than trying to calm him) : aap shant ho jaye pls...mai geet se baat karti hu wo mujhe sabb btati hai kuchh nahi chhupati

mr. handa (firmly) : abbb baat kerne ko kuchh nahi bacha hai...maine faisla kar liya hai

rano (scarred..still tries her luck...using her last weapon..the emotional blackmail...as that always work with her hubby specially in case of geet) : thik hai jo aapki marzee aaye wo kariye bass mere aakhri sawal ka jawab de dijiye...kya aaj takkk geet ne aapki koi baat kaati hai..ye kuchh aisa kiya jo aapko pasand nahi...kya uska itna b haq nahi ki usse safai dene ka mauka mile...?

mrh (thinking...aftr 2 mins) : kal mai kaam se ja raha 6 pm waps aaunga...

(rano gets the msg)

-----fb ends----

geets cell rings breaking her thoughts...rano picks the call n says geet is sleeping

rano : geet enough now...up in 5 mins need to discuss something imp with u

her tone breaks geets sleep still she tries her luckk to get few more minz of sleep

geet : mumma u too...u knw na how i spent past 3 years like a sanyasi...only studying n working in office for khadoos boss (this khadoos boss isn't MSK so chil ๐Ÿ˜‰)...jst 2 days i have got some relief n u also became dushman of my sleep like papa 

rano (felt bad...as she has seen her daughtrs hard work...6 hours office evryday n then coaching + self studies...but she didnt had time...she spoke softly) :
baccha...its imp n u knw issiliye m waking u..n its not soo early see already 11...now go fast n get ready...n come for brkfast in 15 minz...i hav imp thing to discuss

geet(went to fresh-up pouting)

geet was coming to BF table as usual cribbing abt smthing n today topic was her mom's morning behaviour

geet (st) babaji aaj mom ko kya hua hai..aisi kya aafat aa gai ki mai 1 ghante aur so jaati toh koi jwalamukhi hi fatt jata...aur abb dikh bhi nahi rahi..kaha chali gai

geet : MOM...kaha ho aap...?brkfast chahiye..

bt she didnt get any response so went to kitchen served herself. after bf she went to look for mom in her room

geet (st) : babaji aaj mom ko kya hua...aisa toh generally tabhi hota hai jabb mom ko papa se dose milta hai n she has to pass on that dose to me n yash...babaji bacha lena aaj..pata nahi aisa lag raha jaise mujh pe aaj atom bomb girne wala hai...!

geet reached her moms room...knocked once n entered

geet : mom kya baat hai...kuchh hua kya subah...n papa kaha gaye aaj...kal raat b mujhe gn kehne nahi aaye...

rano : geet baitho...baat karni hai tumse

geet (now she knew tht trouble is on the way)

kya hua mom something serious..?

rano (though she had decided how to approach her...she felt nervous n decided to come to the point rather than beating around the bush)

geet u hv turned 22 this last month n your exam also over..so your dad n me hav deciced...togetyouMARRIED (she said tht very fast..as our geet is exact copy of her father in anger)

bt for geet her feats came true...

geet : u WHAT...??
SHAADI...


( with this she went away to her room trying to process wht hermom said minutes ago)



ok guys...
so this was part 1 by me
will try to give next soon
u will get pms fromahi for some days as my pc is dead
hope u like it๐Ÿ˜ณ
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mai bohut shocked ti aina...!!!!!!!!!!!


very good concept!!!!!!!!!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ



hamari thoti gang me ek aur writer yeppie!!!!!!!!!!! 


jaldi jaldi updates dena...!!!!!!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰



different concept...and i love it most!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





do cont soon...

waiting   4   next eagerly...


luv 

uma ๐Ÿค—



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@aina

jhalli kahiki  teri story mai bhi res laga rahi ho tum ๐Ÿ˜ก

isme bhi tum akeli rehna hai kya  1st!!!!!!!!!!!!! ๐Ÿคฃ