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Hey Aani
Welcome back to your muse! In a perverse way, I am glad I wasnt the only one suffering. I have written one para each of 2 stories, but cant find more inspriration. and for practical reasons, i cannot 'guess' the end of the accident mystery, if I want to base my story in the current track. So I just stopped writing.
anyway, you are back 😊
So, this is the second time you have touched upon a delicate aspect of Raman's desires. The first one was a more practical problem (which triggerred a discussion between us about how the show should also address it, about how a man could have stayed celibate for so long) and now this one (i think you know which line I am talking about). Those are the real real-life things that won't be shown for obvious reasons, but I am glad you wrote about them.
Now that I said that 😉 lets come back to the rest of it. WOW, so in your writing you have taken them to a place where BOTH of them are aware of their own desires, and the effect the other person is having on them. Honestly Aani, I cannot wait for this to be show in the serial. It would provide SO MUCH entertainment for us fans.
You have beautifully integrated the EV promotions, the dialogues from the episodes and obviously the 'inner' thoughts of both of them. Sid is her friend 😛 you know how much I like that premise 😉
I like this Raman. Something has woken up inside him, but he is not sure if he is allowed to act on it. I can see his self-control vanishing, and I can see his fear slowly disappearing. and I can see KP enact this Raman perfectly!
Here goes a quote for you 😃
"Sometimes I think the difference between what we want and what we're afraid of is about the width of an eyelash." - Jay McInerney
Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 9 years ago
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