my ishra ff updated part 5 on page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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4.30

ishita has finished making the cake (maybe lemon cos its sour or wat you guys think) other food n deco and gets ready to go out. she hesitantly goes to mrs bhalla n ruhi.
mummyji, ruhi beta, mujhe abhi nikalna hoga. clinic main emergency hain.
mrs b. jaana zaroori hai kya. tora or der ke liye rukh nahi sakti.
ishima nahi, mein aap ko jaane nahi dungi. me apse khatti hoja ungi
samjho beta. bohot zaroori hain. koi bachcha bohot dard mein hai. mera farz hai uska dard ko dur karne ka.
par ap jayegi toh papa ko dard hoga.
papa tora upset honge par woh samjhe ge. vaise maine unko bohot tarike wish kar diya or gifts bi de diya. im sorry. plz upset mat hona.
tik hain. magar jaldi aana
koshish karti hoon.
at 4.45 both families are there incl. trisha. vandu. bala. shravan. except raman n mihir n no parmeet. there is a knock at the door. mrs bhalla goes to open the door. it is adi n abshagun. n she is happy to see adi but not shagun
adi.
hi dadi.
puttar kaise ho. dekho sab kaun aaya hai. hamara adi aaya hain.
usko unke papa ki janam din yaad hai. tune mujhe aj bohot khush kardiya. bhalle bhalle. tere papa bhi bohot khush honge. andar aa.
she lets adi in but stops abshagun.
tu nahi aa sakti andar.
agar meri mom nahi aa sakti. toh me bhi wapas chala ja ta hoon.
tik hain puttar. tu jaise chahta hain aaj waisa hi hoga.
everyone is happy to see him n hugs n kisses him. n gives dirty looks to abshagun.
some interaction between ruhi adi n abshagun.
then uncomfortable interaction between adi, shravan. bala vandu abshagun.
then raman n mihir arrive. ruhi sees him.
papa. dekho kaun aaya hai. n she takes him to adhi.
adhi. beta. kaise ho.
main tik hoon. happy birthday papa.
shagun says happy birthday too.
thank you beta. aaj mere dono bache mere paas hai toh mera birthday bohot happy rahega.
he hugs n kisses both of them n is teary. adi gives his present.
thank u beta.
evryone says happy birthday to him n gives presents.
he looks for ishitaMaa. ishita kaha hai.abshagun also says the same thing.
clinic mein koi emergency ta. isi liye usko jaana para beta. chalo cake kat te hein.
evryone sings happy birthday.
ruhi asks raman to make a wish.
wat wud he wish for? adi probs.
he blows out candles. they cut cake . he feeds ruhi. adi then evry 1 from his immediate family. n they feed him.
when ruhi feeds him. raman says cake bohot achi hai.
ruhi says that ishima ne banaya hai.
abshagun also tries to feed him. but raman says mera pet bargaya. maa. simmi. ab cake baat loh. aur ishita ke liye ek piece bachake rehna.
while evryone is busy. raman phones ishita but she doesnt pic up. he then phones clinic. sarika tells him ishita never came to the clinic today. raman says kya. tik hain. he hangs up n thinks ishita left so adi would come. but to make sure
he asks his mum how did u convince adi to come.
his mum says hum me se kissene toh nahi bulaya. hamare liye bhi surprise ta. shayad ishita ne kiya hoga.
this creates lots of respect for ishita in ramans heart n mind. he is very grateful.
after d party is over. raman waiting with the piece of cake in his room alone. ishita comes in
party kaisa ta. im sure mera bina tumhe bohot enjoy kiya. aur adi bhi toh ta.
tumhe kaisa bata ki adi ayata.
woh. woh. mummyji ne bataya ta. cake kaisa ta.
tum khud kake dekhlo.
n raman brings the cake near her mouth.
muh kolo. ..kalo. dnt wry. maine is me zeher nahi bara. as a thank you. adi ko bulane ke liye.
she opens her mouth to take a bite. but raman quickly takes d cake back.
mujhe pata hone chahiye ta ki tum aisa kuch karne wale te.
sorry. maf kar do.
he holds his ear. he gives cake again this time she holds it too.
i wont make the same mistake twice.
she bites the cake n his finger.
aah. whats wrong with you. kabhi tappar de ti ho. kabhi suy se chubti ho aur aaj meri birthday pe mujhe katliya. hogayi hissa barabar.
sorry. maf kardo.
she holds her ear.
main tumhe tora kilau.
nahi. mera pet bargaya.
tora sa. plz.
but he doesnt open his mouth. n she forcefully spreads it on his mouth n right cheek. ab score 2-1. to me.
if dats the way u wna play.
he grabs some more cake. she runs. hechases her and corners her near the wardrobe.
khabardar. main chilla dungi.
tik hain chilla do. waise bhi agar pati patni ki kamre se chillana ata hai toh koi diyaan nahi deta
shi. kitna dirty mind. main kehre hi hoon. mujhko haat mat lagana.
tik hai haat nahi laga unga.
then he puts his hands on the wardrobe near her waist n cums closer so she cant escape. eyelok. then he gently touches his right cheek to her left cheek n puts the cake on her. she is feeling shy n angry. then he moves away smirking.
im sorry. main apka face clean karti hoon.
then she takes some cake from his cheek n eats it.
ab uska taste aur bi katta hogeya.n she raises her eyebrows. she takes another swipe. but raman stops her hand.
main bhi taste karke dekhoon.
he takes her finger towards his mouth.and is about to eat it off her fingers.
tum jeet geye. n gets free n runs to the bathroom
nahi ishita. main to hargaya tumhari achchayi se. aur jeetliya tumne mera dil.n he smiles.
ishita is in the bathroom. wiping cake off. feeling shy n pretending not to smile. she is wondering why she is feeling shy n not angry. is she falling for him. no. impossible she tels herself. she keeps thinking about it. looks at her fingers n cheeks. was raman just playing or was the something more behindhis actions she is thinking.Edited by creativeFF - 9 years ago

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such a cute part...plz update soon
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Superb!!!! Loved it!!! 
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Wow yaar👏..so cutely romantic⭐️⭐️..loved the way they smeared cake on one another and eating it off one another😉😳😳..Awww..sooo romantic☺️..beautifully written dear..thanks alot🤗
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Cute and romantic part...
I love the cake scene.
Update soon..
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nxt part is called ishra ff pyar ka ehsaas diagnosis aur ilaaj
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Very good. I dont know how i missed this update
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awsom loved it
updt soon
pm me whn u updt next
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#IshRa rocks as well as YOU my dear 😊
Update was per excellence...
P.S If u continue this FF in a single thread rather than separate threads...It would b more convincing for others to find the updates if those r in a single thread.
Next part Jaldiii update karna
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i didnt know hpw to do dat wen i first came on forum