ISHRA's "Suhag Raat" ~~ FF [Part 3 Updated On Page 9]. - Page 5

Originally posted by: 4856

 

 

Very well written...you have a great imagination...😳  😳  😳  😳 

 

Still thinking what to write this Raman na...😳  😳  😉

 

Please continue more...dil maange more...!! 😳 😳  😆  😆

Originally posted by: simples28

OMGGG😃..Shiva..that was sooo hot and romantic yaar..Show mei toh yeh dekhne ko nahi milenga😛..So im just letting my imaginations run wild through your story😃..Oh and btw I loved how gentle he is with her😳😳😳..Love their cute conversations midst their romantic sessions⭐️⭐️..I love how they both want to put behind their past and enjoy the glorious moments of the present..😳😳❤️ [Hehehehe, thank you darling. YES, his both the Ram-Ravana kumar, made sure he had attributes of both the characters.LOL😆]

ROFL ..I liked the below dialogue alot Shivu..😆😆

"Do you have any idea how much I want you, Mrs. IshitaRamanKumarBhalla?" he whispers. "No lekin I have know how much you didn't want me in the past." 😆😆 [I was somewhat laughing while writing that part. Imagining the convo in my head between ISHRA.😳]

You really know how to make the story hot and sizzling😳☺️..You are such a good writer👍🏼👏..and can write any type of story..wooow yaarr😃..so super talented you are and so beautifully written👏👏..Please update soon😃😃..Eeeks I cannot wait☺️..Thanks alot for the PM dearie..😃 [Awww, thank you so much Aishu, I'm truly honored. Glad that you liked it. yup, yup will be updating today.😉]

Originally posted by: sudhajo

Can we ever see Mr.Ravan kumar Bhalla in this avatar/

As usual shiva, Just  beautiful.( Nothin else0,

Originally posted by: vidya29

I was getting into the heat of things,pupils dilating,heatbeat getting erratic and BAM!
There ends the update. You are a tease!
😆
You sure are wild with your visions for IshRa and girl, you can write.😊You had me anticipating their next reaction and I was disappointed when it ended at a moan😔.(Shouldn't I be slightly embarrassed to say that!😕)
Anyway,I could totally picture Raman (KP actually😳) walking towards Ishitha and saying all that and doing all that.
I am doubtful as to this ever happening on the show but that's the joy of fanfiction.
You write really well⭐️ and needless to say I'll wait for the next update.
Take care.

Originally posted by: Jay_tapori

will come back to read properly..haha just breezed past..and i could see Karan patel LIVe..the rawness..of him..demureness of Ishita.. ishita's eyes..u r fabulous..this is LIVE YHM goin on inside this thread..u r a great great director.. ur writing has everything so radiantly crystal clear..and love shines through it all..a topic that had to be tread so sensitively aesthetically..and u do the tight rope walking in order to not let it slip to the sleazy realm..u r very very fabulous... u elevated the whole thing to a divine ishraland trance.awesome..wait poora padhkar aur likhti noon.Meanwhile lots of hugs to u.👏

*Res*

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omggg such hot hot romance...n am SPEECHLESS...☺️🤣

brilliant update shivu..!! waitin for the climax..😉

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Really awesome update ishra reaching towards their climax hmmm waiting for it

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

nice 1 :)

Originally posted by: ABBY92

I don't know whether to love you or hate you because you build up such awesome chemistry and now leave me hanging dry for the next update, LOL! Please update as soon as possible !!

Wow! How, just HOW, do you write so well?!
I mean, not only was there passion & desire, your write up beautifully portrayed how these emotions have stemmed from a deep love Ishita & Raman have for each other. And THAT is extremely difficult to achieve! Hats off to you for these 2 brilliant updates! Thoroughly enjoyed reading them!
Love, passion and our favourite Ishita-Raman, really couldn't have asked for more! Congratulations on this sensational OS!
Do update soon! :)