FF: Kaun Hai Wo Mera..? Sab Kuchh..! DISCONTINUED..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyy guys..yes..one more..πŸ˜†
even i can't believe that i have started 4 new stories in two days..
this story will be quite intense and emotional..
and i hope you guys will like it..

for those who don't know me.. i am Akki.. :))

Index
part 1# page 3
part 2 # page 6
part 3# page 10
part 4# page 14
part 5 # page 17
part 6 # page 19
part 7 # page 28
part 8 # page 36
part 9 # page 43
part 10 # page 53
part 11 # page 56
part 12 # Page 59
part 13 # Page 64
DISCONTINUED..

Character Sketch

Raghu
A gunda..yes gunda...but achchha wala.
he works for satya and Daya Mai..
though he has some rules in his work..
he doesn't like the way satya and Daya Mai works.. 
but there is some reason he is working for them.. 
that u'll come to know once story unfolds..

Antara
A simple, delicate and very beautiful girl.. a college student
u'll come to know more about her in first chapter itself.. 
but can't tell u right now..

MachMach
friend of Raghu.. his character is same as in the serial..

Satya and Daya Mai
do i really need to give their description..?? same as in DDEJ show.. 
actually more cruel..

Ruksana
landlady of Raghu.. his kinda friend too..
and don't worry there will be no love triangle..


Wo kehti hai suno jaana, Mohabbat moum ka ghar hai,
Tapish-e-bud-gumani ki, Kahin pighla na de is ko?

Main kehta hoon, Jis dil main zara bhi bad-gumani ho,
Wahan kuch aur ho to ho, Mohabbat ho nahi sakti,

Wo kehti hai sada aise he, Kia tum mujh ko chaho ge?
K main is main kami koi bhi, Gawara ker nahi sakti,

Main kehta hoon, Mohabbat kia hai ye tum ne sikhaya hai,
Mujhe tum se mohabbat k siwa, Kuch b nahi aata,

Wo kehti hai, Judai se bohat darta hai mera dil,
K khud ko tum se hat ker dekhna, Mumkin nahi hai ab,

Main kehta hoon, Yahi khadshe bohat mujh ko satate hain,
Magar sach hai mohabbat main, Judai saath chalti hai,

Wo kehti hai, Batao kia mere bin jee sako ge tum?
Meri baaten, meri yaaden, meri aankhen, Bhula do ge?

Main kehta hoon, Kabhi aisi baat per socha nahi main ne,
Ager ek pal ko bhi sochon to, Saansen rukne lagti hain,

Wo kehti hai tumhen mujh se, Mohabbat is qader kyon hai?
K main ek aam si larrki, Tumhen kyon khaas lagti hon?

Main kehta hoon, Kabhi khud ko meri aankhon se tum dekho,
Meri dewaangi kyon hai, Ye khud he jaan jao gi,

Wo kehti hai, Mujhe waraftgi se dekhte kyon ho?
K main khud ko bohat, Qeemti mahsoos kerti hoon,

Main kehta hon, Mata-e-jaan bohat anmol hoti hai,
Tumhen jub dekhta hoon zindgi, Mahsoos kerta hoon,

Wo kehti hai, Mujhe alfaz k jugno nahi milte,
K tumhen bata sakon, K dil main mere kitni mohabbat hai,

Main kehta hoon, Mohabbat to nigahon se jhalakti hai,
Tumhari khamoshi mujh se, Tumhari baat kerti hai,

Wo kehti hai, Batao na kiss ko khone se darta ho?
Batao kon hai wo jise, Ye mousam bulate hain?

Main kehta hoon, Yeh meri shayeri hai aaina dil ka,
Zara dekho batao kia, Tumhen is main nazar aaya?

Wo kehti hai, Atif jee bohat baaten banate ho,
Magar sach hai ye baaten, Bohat he shaad rakhti hain,

Main kehta hoon, Yeh sub baaten ye fasane ek bhana hain,
K pal kuch zindagani k, Tumhare saath kat jayen,

Phir us k baad khamoshi ka, Dilkash raqs hota hai,
Nigahen bolti hain aur, Lub khamosh rehte hain
Credit: Faysal Poetry

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Link to My Writing Index: Devil's Heaven


guys please let me know if u liked it.. i'll proceed further..
Please Buddy "DeadDevil-FF" to receive PMs
thanks for visiting..loadz of love..
-akki
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Originally posted by: nazi786

Super concept
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yipee!!!! the another one...
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rantara again with different touch😳
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