Hi all-- This is my first FF in this forums .. i used to write for other shows.. some feedback will encourage to rite more..
Episode 1 - Moment - Page 1
Episode 2 - Moment of Sharing - page 3
Episode 3 - Moment of Togetherness - page 5
Episode 4 - Moment of Decisions- Page 6
Episode 5 - Moment of Yin and Yang - Page 9
Episode 6 -Moment of " I DO" - Page 11
Episode 7 -Moment of "Togetherness"- Page 13
Episode 8 : Moments of "Realization & Confusions" Page 16
Episode 9 -Moments of "Silent Support" - Page 18
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FF - Moments - Episode 1
The court had already denied Ruhi's custody to Raman on Technical grounds as the child is young and she needs mother's care. Court does to look into the facts beyond technical points.
Raman was determined to get Ruhi back and now he wanted his son also back as he knew with Ashok and Shagun his son won't get any right values and will become an absolutely selfish person just like them. Raman had hired best lawyers to guide him to proceed further in this matter and they had been suggested him to do a few things.. .
Meanwhile Ishita has also learned that it was a blunder to leave Ruhi with Shagun. But it was too late and the damage was done. Ishita was sad for rejection of her adoption application and Raman too was feeling bad for Ruhi. Somehow since last 2 weeks he started feeling connected with Ruhi and he was missing her badly.
It was early morning and Ishita had to leave for Mumbai to attend a three day seminar of All India Dentist's Association .. her employer had nominated her name for the seminar. She left early and was on time at the airport and after completing all formalities she was one of the first to board the airplane. Since she got up very early she was sleepy already and she just took her window seat and sat with her eyes closed.
Raman entered the aircraft at the last minute and started looking for his seat but there was no place in the overhead lockers.. the air hostess guided him to keep his stuff on the other side lockers.. and he saw her . Ishita .. happily napping .. eyes closed.. with both seats in her row are empty.. Raman asked the hostess (Whispered) if he could sit in the same row ...
He sat slowly without disturbing .. leaving one seat in between them. And he was thinking .. why the hell I want to sit next to her.. what is wrong with me.
Raman was going to Mumbai for 2 days .. for his business meetings.
Announcements had started .. Airhostess was getting ready to demostrate security measures.. and Ishita woke up from her beauty sleep.. and saw Raman sitting next to her. You...? How Come?
Raman : Means.. ? Sorry.. I don't think it is chartered flight for you..
Ishita got irritated and called a small pyarer.. why God why.. was seeing him daily opposite the flat was not enough for you to torture me .. and she decided that this time she will not talk to him.. and she will not allow him to spoil her happiness. She was happy to travel .. and looking forward meeting her other friends ..
They both sat quietly for next 30 minutes.. in between looking at each and mostly avoiding each other.. The snacks Breakfast was being served when hostess came as asked .. Mam.. Vg or NV.. Ishita said Veg. and Raman said NV...
Raman whispered Veg? How do you live eating just "Phool Patti?" Ishita was adamant .. not to reply to him as she just did not want to spoil her mood ..
Raman broke the silence and asked so .. you are also going to Mumbai? Ishita could not hold anymore.. yeaahh.. since this plane goes only to Mumbai...
Ishita: I met Ruhi yesterday... she wantd to come with me .. but I could not bring her.. I think within next 2 months she will be sent to hostel.. Raman I am very sorry .. I never wanted this for Ruhi.. all I was hoping was is good care and motherly love for Ruhi which she deserves.. and it seems I was completely wrong.. I feel extremely guilty for going to Shagun's place that night.. from hospital.. if I had not gone all this would have not happened..
Raman: What had happened has happened.. and this is not entirely your fault. Ashok would have anyway tried his dirty ticks to take Ruhi away from me.. your going there just gave him an opportunity to bring this up.. and it was indeed my fault that night.. I am trying my legal options to get her back.. and I am determined now to become to better father.. Thanks to you .. I was able to spend some close time with Ruhi .. I felt very bad since I am not being fair with that child.. I was kind of punishing Ruhi for Shagun's mistakes.. Raman's throat was filled but he was hiding it..
Ishita tried to change the topic.. . so you must be going for your one of those high profit biasness deals..
Raman.. yes as you are going to break some teeth ...all the way to Mumbai..
Ishita - Very funny..
Ishita saw a small smile in the corner of Raman's lips..
Raman asked.. so where is your Seminar ? Where are you staying?
Ishita said - My Seminar is in Leela but I will stay with my Friend as she insisted me to do so..
Raman : Oh.. I am staying in Leela and my one meeting is in Leela also in Leela and some in various offices..
Ishita (Thought)- Why is he telling me his itinerary?
When the announcement was made .. at arrival in Mumbai Ishita stood up to take her luggage from he lockers.. Raman helped her with her luggage and since there was rush to get down they had to wait in that narrow space.. Ishita was uncomfortable with tis closeness .. her face too close to Raman chest .. opposite his white shirt with no space to move and hen she tried to look here and there Raman was staring at her too..
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